ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part) - Page 2

You sure this is your first ever piece of writing lol...it was beautifully written, loved it...please don't stop carry on writing,.

Originally posted by: ..NIDA...

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Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

AWESOME

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Originally posted by: meezishu

Wow this was really good, like really good. You definitely need to keep writing more stuff. You managed to brilliantly capture such an emotional moment, especially Asad's breakdown. And then when Zoya comforted him...You captured the characters so well. Seriously, a very good piece of work. Hope to see more of your work in the future 😊

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Originally posted by: krati5

asad's pain was felt by reader's too... u shld write more dear... or u can expand this os to a ss also... give it a thought

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

YOU.SHOULD.WRITE.MORE.

Made me cry as well as feel so good.

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Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Very Emotional ... Good one 😊... Write more... U have brought out the pain very well ...

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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Beautiful 👏

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Originally posted by: swapno

it was written beautifully...😃

So good...

The pain was visible😭

thank you so much👏

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Originally posted by: anma2738

It was beautiful! 👏 U made me cry 😊

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