ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part)

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Awesome.. That's all I could think of to describe this piece of work

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-Anku-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

That was brilliant. Really well written, made me teary :')

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: pinky06
awesome os👏Beautifully described...Loved hw zoya was there for Asad...And asad s pain ...beautifully described
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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Withmaaneet
This was awesome👏
It was beautifully written😳

You should write more😉

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
You sure this is your first ever piece of writing lol...it was beautifully written, loved it...please don't stop carry on writing,.
Lots of love

Saima

Thanks Saima. Was sooo looking forward to reading your feedback. Really appreciate your feedback. Will definately try to write more 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
That was brilliant. Really well written, made me teary :')

Thank You. And am sorry to have done that to you 🤗

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Thanks Saima. Was sooo looking forward to reading your feedback. Really appreciate your feedback. Will definately try to write more 🤗

Good and if you don't I'm going to keep stalking you until you do lol

Seriously that was such a heart felt piece of writing.

Way to go girl