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THE PERFECT DATE

PART 1

It was nearly midnight when Asad entered his house using his spare key as he didn't want to disturb any one especially his Ammi. He knew she would fuss about his extended working hours.He silently moved towards his room still lost in thoughts,So much had happened lately,he had found out about Tanveer ,the havoc caused by her had affected both his personal and professional life bitterly and so it was the aftermath due to which he was working till late, trying hard to finish all the pending work. But personally he had still not recovered completely from the shock----How could she? How could Tanveer even think about killing Zoya? Zoya his lovely Zoya. He shuddered at the thought of loosing her.She was his life now.He would die a thousand deaths if anything happened to her.He had become even more protective and possessive of her"if that was possible. He had a strong hunch that Chapter Tanveer was far from over yet.But he was ready this time, he was ready to take her down.He was not going to spare that so called woman this time ,if she so much as tried to hurt a single strand of hair on Zoya's body.

Zoya!!his thoughts went back to her and a smile came to his lips. He had missed her all day. He had seen her in the morning, at the breakfast table eating her cold left over pizza and teased her about growing fat.

Allah Mia!! Whats wrong with you Mr. Khan ,kya sikhaya tha apko ? you never tell a beautiful girl that she's fat or about to grow fat.

How adorable she had sounded but he would never admit that in front of her. To her he had said "Ok I would not say that to a beautiful girl. "

and with a mischevious smile on his face he had left for office.He could hear Zoya shouting behind his back "Phuppi I hate your son !!"

He was back from his thoughts to the present and found himself outside Zoya's door.What was he doing here at this time of night?He should be in his room resting.The devil in him told him that a small peak in her room would'nt hurt her .He tried to rationalize it by thinking that he was doing this just to check if she was ok.But in his heart he knew there was more to it than just concern"there was love and a lot of desire.

He entered her room silently ,she was sleeping like a baby. She looked like an angel in her white night dress. She lay very still on her back,her chest heaving rhythmically with each breath, both her arms were outstretched and her right hand hanging from the edge of the bed. The moonlight from the glass window fell on her pretty face and her glorious white swan like neck. Asad was awestruck by her beauty.Her face looked so beautiful ,her creamy skin glowed in the moonlight ,the long dark lashes and those tempting full rosy lips--at that moment Zoya looked unearthly .He felt desire surge through his body.Her slender figure looked so delicate and delicious in that white dress. He slowly and silently moved towards her. He could here his heart pounding in his chest.

Suddenly he remembered the box wrapped in goldenpaper which he held in his hand and a smile curled up on his lips.He had almost forgotten about the Gift.He had bought a gorgeous red and black saree for Zoya. She would look stunning in that saree.Red colour looked great on her.He had planned the most perfect date for her.He had been planning this date since quite some time now.He wanted to pamper Zoya ,to make her feel happy and special. Tomorrow evening he planned to take her out.Ammi and Nazma knew about his plan but it was going to be a surprise for Zoya.

At that moment Zoya moved slightly in her sleep bringing Asad's attention back to her.He kept the Gift on the side table and knelt down beside her bed and holding her hand gently placed it back on the bed. He was on his knees, very close to her face. He removed a few strands of hair from her face and gently moved his knuckles across her cheek. She felt so smooth and soft. Then he touched her lips with the tip of his thumb.He was amazed how such a small and innocent act fuel such wild desires in him. She still slept peacefully unaware of his presence.

He bent further down towards her lips.His heart thudding inside his chest,multiple thoughts crossing his mind at the same time.He wanted her badly but he didn't want to hurt her feelings,obviously he was not going to do anything without her permission.At the same time he couldn't resist the thought of kissing her--- just a peck.He was surprised at his own thoughts. It was not like him to behave like this. He had never felt so passionate about a woman before.What had Zoya done to him?He was a changed man now.

His lips were just milimeters away from her rosy lips.He could feel the tension in his body.He closed his eyes and was about to kiss her when he heard a sound just outside the window. He reflexly sprang up and swiftly moved out of Zoya's room and straight into the backyard to check if anything was wrong.He saw a large cat jumping over the fence and running away.

"Relax Asad !" He said out loud to himself,scolding himself for being so jittery he looked at Zoya for one last time through the glass window(as he was just outside her window right now) seeing her sleep so calmly he proceeded towards his room.He kept tossing and turning in his bed but couldn't sleep.

Zoya was on an island with Asad , it was their honeymoon.She was wearing shorts and a checked cotton shirt. While Asad looked amazing in his brown cotton cargoes and a vest. Zoya teased him and ran on the beech while Asad ran after her. Both of them were very happy. He caught up to her soon and pinned her down on the soft sand.His eyes were dark with passion,his breath fanned her face.She closed her eyes in anticipation.He was about to kiss her for the first time------ when she heard a loud sound. She opened her eyes just a little bit and found herself in her room.She had been dreaming.She was alone.She closed her eyes again.A tear rolled down the corner of her eye on to her cheek as she thought about her happy dream. Why couldn't her dream come true? She realised that she was missing Asad badly.

"Where are you Mr.Khan?I miss you so much"she muttered to herself.She turned on her side to look outside the glass window ,everything seemed very calm outside .She wondered what had caused the sound that woke her up.

Just then she noticed a beautiful box kept on the side table.

"A gift for me. "she exclaimed happily. She opened it up quickly and found a beautiful saree in red and black.She also found a note in the box in Asad's handwriting. It read""-Miss Faroqui ,I have planned a special surprise for you.Please be ready at 6'oclock sharp tomorrow evening."

Zo-"Wow a surprise !I love surprises and just when i though Mr.Khan had no time for me. Thank You Allah Mia.But this time i am not going to let him off so easily. What does he think of himself.He can ignore me whenever he wants and then win me over with expensive gifts."

She then touched the saree lovingly ,it was a very expensive and pretty saree "Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan be ready for the night of your life. I am going to give you a tough time tomorrow"

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He stood outside the Khan Mansion and talked on his mobile.His voice sounded cold and dangerous "Yes Madam it will be done . Tomorrow night is going to be the last night of her life"

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Asad almost kiss zoya. .. the fear. .. something will happen to zoya...

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THE PERFECT DATE

PART 2

It was 6'o clock in the evening .Asad was ready in a black suit and red bow tie.He looked at himself in the mirror for one last time and smiled "Hey Ms NewYork get ready for the ROMANTIC Asad Ahmed Khan.I am going to sweep you right off your feet".

He looked dashing in a black suit.He went in the hall and started pacing impatiently ,periodically checking his watch.

"Wow Bhaijaan"came Najma's voice as she came down stairs from her room. "you are looking sooo handsome today"

"Tam Tamatar sh.."While Asad fumbled with words,Najma ran from the hall calling Ammi.

"Ammi Ammi come look at bhaijaan .He is going to kill someone with his looks today."

Asad held his forehead with his hand in embarresment and said "shut up !tamatar"

Dilshaad came into the hall with Najma right behind her.Dishaad looked at her son from top to bottom and smiling in admiration she said "Masha Allah Asad aaj tumko kisi ki nazar na lage".

Asad trying to change the topic "Ammi where is Zoya. It's 6:15 already.If we get late then my surprise will get spoilt.Why can't she be on time ever"

Dilshaad placed a hand on his shoulder and said"Relax Asad i know you are getting irritated because you have been planning this date since many days. Don't be so nervous everything will be perfect. Just the way you want it to be."

Little did she know what this lovely couple was going to face within a few hours.

Asad calmed down a bit and said"Ammi I'll go check on Ms. Faroqui.Don't know what's taking her so long."

He went to her room and opening the door was about to knock when the site that met his eyes made his hand freeze in mid air. There she was dressed in the red and black saree he had given her .She was wearing a net sleeve black blouse with it. And WOW what in the world was she doing ?? Zoya had her back towards Asad and was still unaware of his presence.

The blouse was completely backless with just two pair of strings one at its bottom and one near her shoulders. Zoya had the strings near the shoulder tied but she was struggling with the strings at the bottom of her blouse and the wriggling movements that she made in her hopeless attempt to tie the strings were enough to make Asad go crazy.

He had been fantasizing about opening the dories of her blouse and touching her glorious back ever since he first saw her in a backless blouse and saree (during their rain song sequence)This was like his fantasy coming true.

He felt his control slip.Suddenly a wave of heat swept through his body.His heart was pounding hard against his chest.A hundred ways in which he wanted to devour this siren started coursing through his brain.

He closed the door soundlessly behind him and in just two strides he was standing behind a struggling Zoya.

Zoya could feel his presence behind her ,the heat radiating from his body made her feel fuzzy all over .His masculine scent hit her nostrils making her shiver with pleasure.Her heart started beating erratically. She was already getting goosebumps.No she thought to herself she will not melt in his arms today.She was going to be stern and moody,just like him so that he could have a taste of his own medicine.

She turned around wanting to lecture him on having entered her room without knocking but before she could say a word Asad placed his index finger on her lips.

"Shhh..."is all he said while turning her around and embracing her from behind.Zoya was too shocked to speak.

"Let me help you"he said huskily nuzzling his face into her neck and hair.She smelt of fresh Dasies to him. Waves of pleasure washed down Zoya's body as he continued to nuzzle her.Was this a dream?Was this really happening to her. All her thoughts about scolding him vanished into thin air.

He then gently moved her dark long hair to one side of her neck exposing her bare back.He let out a soft sigh.He had been wanting to touch her since long but had controlled himself. But not anymore .

He couldn't wait anymore.He loved her dearly and was going to marry her very soon.He wanted to claim his rights on her.

He ran his fingers gently from her lower back upwards in gentle teasing movements.His action sent sweet tingling sensations all over her body. She let out a sharp gasp when he pulled open the strings of her blouse,the ones near her shoulder.

He then started kissing the nape of her neck and moved downward brushing his lips softly on her back. Zoya let out a soft moan which made Asad smirk.She was surprised to see the desirous side of his nature.

He started licking and nibbling her earlobes.She couldn't think clearly anymore and just gave in to his touch.She was shocked at her body's response.

He continued kissing and nibbling her back, while interlocking both her hands into his strong ones so that she couldn't move or turn around much.He loved to hear her moan and gasp at his touches.She summoned up her self control and said "Asad please aren't we suppose to go on a date today"

"I have a good mind to cancel our date as i can think of better things to do."he replied in a husky whisper making Zoya blush.

Just then came Dilshaad's voice "Asad Zoya where are you two?" They could hear her footsteps approaching Zoya's room.

Zoya panicked "Mr. Khan please leave me. Phuppi is coming" She struggled to move away from him.

Instead of leaving her Asad tightened his grip around her. He whispered in her ear "I will leave you only if you promise to grant me a wish"

Zoya's eyes widened "what do you want Asad?"she asked.

"That i will tell you later, so do you agree? he said with a twinkle in his eyes.

" You can have whatever you want but leave me now."Zoya replied ,with urgency in her voice.

Asad gave a triumphant smile and to Zoya's surprise turned her around and hugged her tightly from the front.While she struggled to loosen his grip she realised that he was tieing the strings of her blouse.

He moved away from her just as Dilshaad knocked at the door and came inside.

Dilshaad- "whats wrong with both of you?Don't you have to go.Asad you were getting so impatient a few moments ago and now you are happily chatting with Zoya."

Dilshaad looked at Zoya and asked in a concerned voice" Zoya are you coming down with fever or something.You look so red and breathless"

She placed her hand on Zoya's forehead to check her temperature "you feel slightly warm too. Are you alright"

"No Phuppi i am perfectly fine" she replied shyly.Her eyes met Asad's.He mischeviously winked at her. She could see he was enjoying himself thoroughly.

"Ammi you know how Zoya goes on speaking endlessly.It's her fault that we are late.Besides she wasn't even ready in time."said Asad with a lopsided naughty smile.

Zoya fumed ,how dare he blame her "Phuppi it's not my fault. He was the one who was..."she trailed off as she obviously couldn't tell her what he had been doing to her.

"Yes Ms.Faroqui tell ammi what was i doing?"Asad said cheekily.Now Zoya turned a deep crimson.

"Enough of these arguments you two. Just go now."saying this Dilshaad linked one arm into Zoya's and the other into Asad's, guiding them slowly towards the main door.

"I hope both of you enjoy youself and Asad please take care of Zoya and no fighting."with this Dilshaad waved them goodbye.

They drove off in Asad's black SUV waving goodbye to Dilshaad .

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As soon as they moved out of the main gates of Khan Mansion a black car started trailing them at a safe distance.

THE PERFECT DATE

PART 3

They had reached their destination.They were by the lakeside.It was a beautiful lake and a very large one too. They could not see the other end from where they stood.Asad took Zoya's hand and pulled her on to the motorboat. The boat was not very large,there was the deck with its wooden flooring and below there was a small cockpit with space enough for one person .It was being driven by Ali a man Asad had hired for the task.

Asad took Zoya up a few steps and they were on the deck.Zoya was surprised to see that the whole deck was covered with rose petals. Small lanterns were kept in various spots on the deck providing a dim light.The stars had come up and it was growing dark.She could see the reflection of far off lights in the dark water as their boat sailed ahead smoothly with a low rumbleing sound.

"Asad it's so beautiful.You did this for me?"Zoya asked emotionally.

"No darling I did this for myself . I love to see you smile and laugh so please don't disappoint me and smile."Asad said and slowly moved closer to her.

Zoya smiled mischeviously and started moving backwards.Asad chased her and soon caught up with her. He then lifted her in his arms and brought her to the centre of the deck.There he lay her down on the rose petals slowly.

They lay side by side staring at the sky.Asad slowly got hold of Zoya's hand and squeezed it gently.Zoya turned her head to look at him and got lost in his eyes.It was truly magical what they felt at that moment. They could feel the heat rise as they looked into each others eyes.

Asad moved very close to her and whispered in her ear "you promised to grant me a wish remember".Zoya's heart started beating fast ,she knew that he was planning some mischief.She could feel his warm breath on her chin and neck.Her gaze fell on his lips and she had a sudden urge to kiss him.She decided to move away from him and started getting up but Asad caught her hand "Zoya you are stuck with me on this boat " he spoke with a lopsided smile.

"What do you want me to do Asad ?"Zoya asked boldly trying to ignore the knots in her stomach.Inwardly, she felt nervous,usually Zoya was not the type of girl who would feel shy or flustered but this man was making her go all weak in the knees.She could feel herself melting whenever she was near him.

Asad spoke in a voice which was dangerously calm and cool "Zoya you always claim to be very bold and outgoing and confident so today i just want you to look into my eyes and stand your ground, no matter what i do"

Both of them were standing on the deck now with their eyes locked.Zoya did't like being challenged and she looked Asad straight in the eyes.Asad moved towards Zoya and she moved a few steps back only to realise that she could'nt move further away as she was trapped at the very nose of the boat.

Asad pressed his body against hers.She could feel the cold metallic rails press against her back.He moved his hands up and down the sides of her waist still staring into her eyes. She felt as if her entire body was on fire.She blushed and could feel the heat emitting from her cheek and ear.He then moved his hands on her bare back.Zoya bit her lower lip to stifle a moan.

"So tell me how do you feel ?He asked her still staring into her eyes.Zoya stared back defiantly but words failed her.Asad smirked at her silence.

He then started kissing her neck.He sucked the skin on her neck and then blew over it to cool off the burning sensation.She gasped as he bit her and continued to torture her .He then moved up to her chin .He kissed her chin and then gently kissed the spot between her lower lip and chin.Zoya could not take it anymore. Her body was burning with each kiss that he placed on her.She could no longer look into his eyes but had closed them resigning herself to him.He smiled triumphantly realising that she had given up.He cupped her pretty face in both his hands and admired her innocent beauty.

He had barely placed his lips on her's when there was a loud sound as their boat hit something hard beneath the water surface.Before either of them could realise what was happening there was another crash as the boat hit a rock again,this time harder.Asad fell back on the deck and as the boat started overturning he saw Zoya fall into the lake with a splash.He saw her hit her head with a rock and then she drowned without a struggle.

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