AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

Wat is wrong with Zoya's father, poor Asad hope he will be ok, beautifull update

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zola007

amazing update !
poor asad ! noboby understands him !
and their fight !!! 🥺
that's all because of rashid and Gaffur 😡😡
and gaffur comes with divorce papers and lying that zoya loves zafar !?
what's wrong with him ?!😡
and zoya too saying she would choose zafar over him 😡
now he thinks she doesn't love him 😭🥺
the last scene !! what happened to asad? 😲
hope that asad won't accept for the divorce and all misunderstandings will be cleared soon !
continue soon (:
thanks for the pm (:

Hey Zola007,
Yeah at the moment Asad is kinda alone.
People we hurt when angry are usually the ones we love the most.
You will have to wait and read.
You might not like it but things will look up.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

It was really a shocking and emotional update...😭😲

What have u done Julls..!
Gaafur that man is no good he is always a villian...😡
Already messed up n Gaffur added fuel to the fire...🤬
Rashid is the man responsible for all this...😡
Asad was reaaly angrier more than ever...😡😲
All that things what Gaffur told n Zoya told him not intentionally
but asad took it n now he left...😲 poor zoya has all to face this...😭
This update really made me go off my seat to the edge...😳
My heart was pumping...😆
Hope soon things r sorted btw them...
Btw this was really a awesome update...😃
Continue soon and pm me...😉

Hi Shrey😛
I love julls BTW. Gaffur, I don't see him as a villain. The real villains are Asad and Zoya's egos. They just need to shun that and talk to each other.
Yeah things will get sorted soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

it was really awsum..
u described ASYA feeling and hurt so beautifully..
loved ur writing..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

emotional update...
very well written
feeling bad for Asad...
waiting eagerly for the next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm...

Hi amruta04,
Thanks for your comment.
Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

omg what an update
I am crying so much pain
words cant describe
the fathers sins make the children suffer
and these 2 who cant breathe without each other
has such big egos that they dont know what to do
omg he collapsed
continue soon

Hi anopama
Thanks for the comment, yeah egos and situation is to blame.
Zoya is his last breath remember. He did pass out without her.
Wonder how he manages to live without her then.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasya09

seriously a heart wrenching update! very few writers possess the talent of touching persons with the written word and you have surely proven that you belong to that fortunate group. I am not one to usually comment on persons work, but after reading this last update i was brought to tears, and i knew that i had to commend you for your outstanding job 👏

i can barely wait for the continuation so please please please update soon!😃

Hi vasya09,
WOW! that is quite a generous compliment. I am so happy that you stopped to comment.
It surely made my day to know you feel that way and I touched the emotion right.
I am so honored and grateful that you call it outstanding.
Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Beautifully penned chapter. Am sooo sad for what poor asya are going through 😭😭

Why do the two of them forget in a fightb that they have brains which can be used????😡 😡😡

I dont like this heartbreak situation 😭😭 Please bring them back together soon.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

Hey LoveOnlyAsYa,
Apparently when you are in love, you first think from your heart then your brain.
I am sorry you didn't like the situation, It is just a way to show some other emotions in a relationship.
It will get better and more fun to read in the chapters ahead.
Thanks for stopping by and your comment.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lasya13

Ya allah,!!!
U left it lyk that...
it was a very emotional one... well written...
but dont make us wait for nxt update...
continue sooonnn...

HI lasya13,
Yeah it was getting too long. The next chapter will clear a lot of things for the readers.
Thanks for your comment and glad you liked the written piece.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

what hpnd to u itna jaldi update?? koi fever to ni???

Hi akh20,
HIGH FEVER😛

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