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Posted: 11 years ago

#1001

unresd my spots on pg 129😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1002

Juliet please !!!

i want the next part !!!

please.. :):):):):):)

today??? say yesss 😳😳

WAitINg ++++++++

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: nnn
Juliet please !!!

i want the next part !!!

please.. :):):):):):)

today??? say yesss 😳😳

WAitINg ++++++++

Sweetheart Mona Darling!

Sent you a PM.

Will update by Tuesday OK!

Sorry busy tomorrow. But will try.

Loads of love Honey.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1004

Originally posted by: nnn

life from yet another angle 👏

i cant believe what i just read !!

too much..feeling dizzyy !

why did you stop just there ?😭😭😭

the butterflies did well to stay on mute mode today..💔

Kudos Juliet !

i so want the next update more than ever !

thanks for the pm

be fasssttt pleassse

😳😳😳

mona🤗

Mona,

You are such a sweetheart, Another person whom I like to write "Sexy" for.

I stopped because it was getting too long.

I am so glad you didn't go all Hate You on me.

But you will love me for the chapters after the next update.

I will try fast darling.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: ap3h7u
I have tears in my eyes after reading this...I could feel Asad's pain😭...Zoya's also not wrong...it's just a big misunderstanding...Mr.Farooqui😡😡...

loved the update🤗...continue soon😃😃

Hi ap3h7u,

Thanks for your comment dear.

Yeah it is lack of communication. that's all but a key to any relationship.

Glad you loved it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1006

Originally posted by: ras224
Juliet where art thou is ur Romeo so dat he cud teach u sum romance & u cud pour it in here coz da part ws really very saddening...both Asad & Zoya's turmoil pierced my heart😭...& moreovr dat Tanveer & Mr. Farooqui😡...bt i'm a bit confused abt da deal thing😳...ws there really a deal b/w Zoya's father & Asad😲...anyways all da butterflies must be crying 4 da luvbirds 2 get 2geder...make dat sooner plz😃...& nothing new 2 comment on ur writing skills coz u always write dem wid perfect blend of awesomeness👏...luv u dear🤗...& oh!i'm liking ur dp😛

Hi shormi,

My Bengali Boon! Shakespeare wrote the worst heartbreaks!

I am just taking inspiration from him.

But yeah Romeo you will get in the next update.

The deal clarifies itself soon.

Will see what I can do about your request about getting the lovebirds together.😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
You write so well, I could totally feel the anguish and pain that they're both going through. What tomatoes, I'd give you cupcakes and chocolates.

Yes, it's heartwrenching, and painful. But maybe it is needed? There must be some level of angst that Asad have to go through for him to finally be the lover that Zoya rightfully deserves. Trusting, non-controlling and just a lil bit easy going.

If the next part is gonna be worse, than I'm waiting with bated breath, for I know it would translate into something beautiful.

Am big fan of storyline, a bigger fan of writings. And yours are amazing!

Much support and love,

FaRz

Hi FaRz,

Such a wonderful thing to write for me. Oh I feel like dancing now. You made me smile.

I might take you on your offer of cupcakes and chocolates after I post the next update.

The butterflies are mainly Zoya's subconscious self. About Asad being a lover she deserves, Zoya behaved the same way with Tanveer as Asad did with Zafar. How was it any different. Zoya has all shades of territorial, controlling, predatory.

The truth is when one is vulnerable and insecure, challenged that your love is slipping away, It bring out the worst in you. Zoya hitting Tanveer was just to show how Zoya becomes a shade of Asad himself. Of that violent Asad that she so complained and hated.

But a writer and reader think differently. According to me if Asad lacks faith or has trust issues Zoya did nothing to fix them till now.

Thank you for your beautiful comment. Truly made my day. I do hope to read your insight after I post the next chapter. Hope the cupcakes still last.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: mariam1368
Such a heartbreaking update!
Poor Asad and Zoya!! Can't
believe how close they were bt nw its over.
Asad is hurt...dat hurt s beyond repair... this all bcoz of rashid
Continue soon

Hi mariam1368,

Thanks for your comment.

It is not yet over, it will get better.

You might enjoy even after two chapters.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1009

Firstly being a silent reader lng bk Bt here I flt d need to cmmnt dt wht a storyline maahnnn!!!!srsly amazing plot n amazin dscrptn of pain love anguish intensity!!!wht a fab writer ur I MST say!!!!each chpter is a gripping n nailbitting one!!!!classy!!!!plzzz update soon!!!!!!! A die hard fan of ur fiction!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1010

Originally posted by: saida.m
...what happened!!!!!!!!

Juliet, this update totally broke my heart! God, I feel so terrible for my baby Asad. Why does he have to go through all of that! I told you Zoya's father was irking me! How dare he break my baby when he is already so vulnerable! He can't do that to them! They had come so close and so far into their relationship and trust! Please, don't make them too angsty, okay? The Butterflies need to say happy, and satisfied!

Rashid is a prick, and that is all there is to him! He needs to be told off, and it a manner that never makes him even consider what he did as justifiable! Because it is not!

"You can never love me" broke my heart! So much pain and defeat in that one line! Brilliant! 👏

Make it all better? Soon? 😳

HI Simi,

Yeah Poor Asad. What can I say, things will look up and get better soon.

No I don't like angst myself but there is one more chapter of sad lurking.

Recreating a love story will happen after the next update. You know when you reach a point of broken so strong that you are not afraid to lose anything at all. I just hope I can create that.

Rashid is Mr. No balls. I will darling make it better soon. But it has to complete the circle.

Thanks for reading my story and your ever motivating and insightful comment.