FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED*

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Loved Ayaan happiness and joy and hug..

Zoyas suprise was awesomeness..

Thanks for the pm..

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

amazing update dear..loved it

sorry for d late comment

continue soon n pm me

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vinita459

@vinita459

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Hey, I am sorry that you are feeling low due to lack of comments and likes. Don't be disheartened, just remember you have some loyal readers who never fails to encourage you. Please keep writing, we look forward to your update.

Please update soon. 😊

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Smmm

@Smmm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

1st before anything I want to tell you the title of this part is sooo apt , it fits perfectly to every bit of the chapter.

Coming back to the part well where do I start ,

To begin with it was truly worth the wait , I read it like 3 times :P

Ayaans point of view , his inquisitiveness is sooo adorable and asad annoying him was even better

I loved this line " Dekhiye bhaijaan...I have the right to know..you know what I do when you don't tell me your secrets...he acted all innocent...earning a smirk..and a disapproving nod from Asad."

Ayaan-OMG bhaijaan...what are you trying to tell...me...did you ...OMG don't tell me you guys went to Vegas and got married..that too without me or anyone else..he looked at Asad..his eyes wide with despair..

And this had me completely in splits

I don't know why but I feel that the constant hints towards the crew noticing and the little incident with the spot boy is going to lead to something big , but it's just a wild guess

And talking about Zoya and Asad every bit of this part made me wish I had a boyfriend

I loved seeing a very bold Zoya , I can't believe she seduced the Asad Ahmed Khan

And her transition to a shy Zoya was also cute ( in my option it is like the transition from the young naughty teenager to the mature woman who gave up the man she loved just for his mothers happiness ) 👏

Asad , where do I even begging with him , he seems so alive ,happy, jolly , Playfully, carefree . 👏

As usual I am falling in love with this character of yours .

The way he ran for her when she was hurt I was going all gu-gu-ga-ga . Why don't they make guys like him anymore :( 😭

Then came the hospital scene which was again tremendously sweet 👏 ( he reminded me of SRK in Veer-Zaara )

And last but not the least the house I don't want to say anything. About it coz as much as I do it's going to be less

All I want to tell you is " was the very same feeling, the same moment in time...the 18^th of August 2007. Zoya and Asad had been married, Zoya was in his arms...as he opened the two very doors and lifted his first step and crossed the threshold of the house..entering into his new life with Zoya...and today...again...after almost 5 years...on the 18^th of March 2013' he was at the very same spot his wife in his arms..a step away from crossing the threshold..of the very house he and Zoya had lived in..when they were married..He looked at her..and she smiled..."

This paragraph stole the show in today's chapters it kind of summarized the essence of your fiction

Well that's about it . Thanks once again for the pm :)

Ps : don't ever get dishearten by the lack of comments coz they don't even do half the justice to what you write

Ps: I'm sooo glad to have finally found someone who didn't like the 50 shades of gray . Lol

Pls continue ASAP I'm dying to know what's next ❤️

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Awesome update, loved the
romance, do update soon

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

I loved the update it was sooo cute thanx for the PM and update soon😃

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

65 likes... 👏

60 comment 👏

8 pages 👏

Loyal readers... dont stop 😭

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: vinita459
Hey, I am sorry that you are feeling low due to lack of comments and likes. Don't be disheartened, just remember you have some loyal readers who never fails to encourage you. Please keep writing, we look forward to your update.

Please update soon. 😊

yup continue soon...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

Asad nodded..😊Ayaan jumped...grabbing Asad...😲 and hugging him tight...😲 😳 Asad working real hard to maintain his balance...😆

Asad-Stop it Ayaan..😲 u have finally proved that you do have a lot of feminine traits..😳 😆 😆 I mean come on...which guy jumps like that in excitement...😆 😆 😆 control yourself...said Asad pushing Ayaan on the side..annoyed by his wide faced grinned...😃 😃 😃