FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED*

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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

Really Really enjoyed it.

Absolutely awed by the conversation on the bridge. I love romance and the cheeky meeky talks that come with it.❤️

So they have a house now. You got my imagination working overtime when I read the song crossing the threshold. I had something else in mind.😳

I totally understand how you feel about comments and likes, I feel the same too. I have been feeling quite low and lacked motivation to continue because seriously working and maintaining a personal life and then pursuing a hobby so cherished make it close to difficult, sometimes when you think you didn't get the deserved recognition.

But you know the ones who post for you and like your updates, they want to read. So it is not all lost. I hope I make sense.😕

About the FF - Great description. Delightful updates. Thanks for posting.

LOVED IT!

Juliet.

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Hey have been quite irregular on the forum. The last three update have been amazing. Read them In a go.

I m so happy that they never got divorced.

I loved the way Asad pursued her initially and then when he write that note. Zoya was amazing on the plane

The revelation and confrontation finally was superb. Long awaited.

They are back together and this great .

Very well written and Really enjoyed reading it.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

awww... so sweet went ayaan accidentally say babhi... to zoya..
that is so sweet

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

suprb lovd it!!

Ayaan Miya 😆

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

wait u say you dont get enough comments? ok lets rectify that!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

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unres

Gah i loved it so much!

it was so romantic haaye main marr gayi

thanks for keeping your promise and giving me not only some shooting scenes but also romance. you always take my demands seriously *wipes khushi ke aasun*

haww the spot boy saw them :O and then he blasted at him! i have a feeling that the spot boy might tip off some journalist or someone that he saw them in a compromising position just to take revenge. Ha, Im so intelligent *smirk* 😆😆

i loved it when he shouted when zoya got hurt! I so love this Asad!

haww aashna no1 comments here? 😡😡 koi nahi now ill spam here 🤗

no fear when sadie is here *smirks again* 😆

i knew it that the surprise was the house they lived in. I'm so intelligent right *smirks yet again* 😆😆

Ab main apne muh se apni tareef nahi karti, you must have seen that 😆😆

do you promise me to update soon if i spam here? yes ofcourse you will 🤗

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Aint they cute? 😃

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

nice going... loving the hubby asad more then the flirty... feisty..wife zoya... update soon... sorry for not commenting.. just logged in now... u r an amazing writer...continue soon