FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 89

Originally posted by: rajnid68

awesome update...

saw asad mellow side..

thanks for the pm...

how was the trip...

ate,shopped and did merry

Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

I love it ..,
I hope this FF is not over yet ... I could like to read more off asad and zoya ...
I love ...
Please do reply

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

wow amazing:)

plzz update soon :)

Originally posted by: saku19

Thanks for the update. It indeed was an awsome ending⭐️. Its very sad that this story got finish. But happy that you will write new story.

dear your stories are very different from other ff because of that you have become a one of a kind unique writer.👏 Great work and keep writing. God bless you and good bye until your next story😃

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Aw, it's over! Feels like it's too fast for the end! 😭

But, I guess all good things must come to an end. 🤗 🤪 🥳

But that's how I keep my ideas fresh. I know each story has a goal and an ending. I have a point I need to reach then I take a break, as do the characters.

I LOVED this last chapter! 😳 Especially how Zoya was talking in her "geek speak" and Asad was so confused. 😆 I actually left out a lot of the geek-speak. I had Zoya going on about electronic bank strips and embedded scans but Asad was so lost he fell asleep! So all the explanation will have to wait until GHOST IN THE MACHINE.

And her teasing about how he took off his shirt was so hilarious! 😆 Gotta love our shameless Zoya! 😉 😆 How is Zoya the shameless one? She keeps her shirt on all the time! It's the men in the Khan Villa who can't keep their clothes on.

Zoya reaches up and kisses Asad's cheek. He leans into the kiss as if unwilling to break their connection.

"You're a very good man, Mr. Khan," she whispers, her breath a soft caress against his skin.

"You're just figuring that out now, Ms. Farooqui?" A half smile pulling at the corners of his mouth as he echoes her own words. "And you call yourself an intelligent woman."

^What a perfect ending. 👏 👏 👏 You just have this unique way of writing the romantic parts. They're like, subtle and sweeter, I guess. It's hard to explain. Your explanation was perfect to me. Thank you.

But, OMG! That precap is HILARIOUS! 🤣 Poor Mr. Zoya Farooqui! 😆 Omg, that was the cutest thing, though! 😆 Asad following Zoya around like a lost puppy and almost crying because she didn't kiss him goodbye. "Darling!" 🤣 That was actually from a little OS I wrote. I thought it was funny because Zoya will need Asad to masquerade as her husband in the next story, but he won't be happy and he certainly won't be a lovesick puppy!

Can't wait for the next story! 😃 My next story is the original-character novel. I'll send out a PM when I post the next chapter.

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

It doesn't have to be good-bye! You can read my new story at LiveJournal. It's also set in India about an NRI boy and a local girl. I think I can get them into (and out of) as much trouble as I can with Zoya and Asad.

Originally posted by: PalyGirl