FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Paly

This update was Amazing

loved it so so so much

The kiss in the end was really sweet

i love that Asya moment

it was adorable

and i am so happy for Rohan

things are back to normal

now plzzz update your new story soon

cant wait

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Amazing ending...a unique concept😊...it got me hooked😳...loved it to bits🤗...teaser was shocking😲 yet awesome😆...continue soon😊

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#873

This FF is over already?

NO! Nope. Nah.

It needs an epilogue, a closure.. pretty please?

Anyway, saying that I enjoyed the journey would be an understatement.

I absolutely FELL IN LOVE with it on the way and refuse to give it up.

I might just re-read the whole of it. Again. And again.

Adorable chocolate boy Rohan, ferocious Asad, selfless Zoya, little lioness Najma, and of course and the epitome of kindness, Dilshaad, will never leave me nor any other reader of this FF.

Thank you so much PalyGirl, for this FF and the ones to come.

All the best for your future works, you're gonna be really successful!

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#874

thank u for all the right moves
last chapter amazing
asad and zoya moment intense
ur next story looks funny if asad is in that character

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Awesome update
Asad handled the matter very efficiently
Both asad & zoya understand each other
Thanks for pm

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Just loved this story!

Can't wait for the new one! 😊

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
I am first yay

I am gonna miss the story like anything. Thank you. I'm going to miss writing it. It was fun but I'm already working on my next story. The good times never have to end!

you made your story unique with your choice of words... hats off to you
love all your characters in your story... you make me even love characters that I hate in the serial
😲 Who did you hate in the serial? Zoya, Asad, Dilshad, Najma and Ayaan are all great characters, especailly at the time I placed this story. Who among them lost your love?
and that makes you a fantastic writer

loved the teaser to the new story

looking forward to it

love

Mahima

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88
Loved the update. The bonding between the Khans, Zoya and Rohan was really sweet. Asad and Zoya moments were also good. I am going to miss this ff a lot and especially the only reason I used to wait for Mondays. Please try to start the next one soon. My best wishes for your novel.

Thank you very much. I've already started working on my new novel. I'm very excited about it and owe so much thanks to all the wonderful feedback I've gotten. It gave me back my confidence as a writer!

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: -RM-
Awesome Story :)
Different from All other FanFics.

Love your writings ;)

I have read that OS. What's it have to do with next story?
Excited I am 😃

Zoya needs help with her next case. She promised Asad that she won't take anymore risks so she has to ask him to help her. She's investigating a problem that starts in his office so Asad cannot help her outright. She already introduced herself at "Zoya Farooqui" to her suspects. Asad has to play her husband, Mr. Zoya Farooqui, at a party they attend undercover.

How long do you think Asad can last in his disguise as Zoya's sweet, docile husband? 😉