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saku19

@saku19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Thanks for the update. It indeed was an awsome ending⭐️. Its very sad that this story got finish. But happy that you will write new story.

dear your stories are very different from other ff because of that you have become a one of a kind unique writer.👏 Great work and keep writing. God bless you and good bye until your next story😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

Good update Paly but am sad that this story had to end. But am happy too as you will be writing your character novel. will wait for a new update for you so please do pmme whenever you update anything on QH.

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for your pm already.

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Aw, it's over! Feels like it's too fast for the end! 😭

But, I guess all good things must come to an end. 🤗 🤪 🥳

I LOVED this last chapter! 😳 Especially how Zoya was talking in her "geek speak" and Asad was so confused. 😆

And her teasing about how he took off his shirt was so hilarious! 😆 Gotta love our shameless Zoya! 😉 😆

Zoya reaches up and kisses Asad's cheek. He leans into the kiss as if unwilling to break their connection.

"You're a very good man, Mr. Khan," she whispers, her breath a soft caress against his skin.

"You're just figuring that out now, Ms. Farooqui?" A half smile pulling at the corners of his mouth as he echoes her own words. "And you call yourself an intelligent woman."

^What a perfect ending. 👏 👏 👏 You just have this unique way of writing the romantic parts. They're like, subtle and sweeter, I guess. It's hard to explain.

But, OMG! That precap is HILARIOUS! 🤣 Poor Mr. Zoya Farooqui! 😆 Omg, that was the cutest thing, though! 😆 Asad following Zoya around like a lost puppy and almost crying because she didn't kiss him goodbye. "Darling!" 🤣

Can't wait for the next story! 😃

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

LOVED THAT CANT WAIT FOR UR NEXT STORY LOVING THE TEASER 😃

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

OMG I loved it!!! Thanks for sharing this story with us! You really are a talented writer! 👏

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Paly dear,

it end😭.i am sad.But happy that ended in a happy note,

But i love to read ur asya stories,

Eagerly waiting for ur upcomong story,

thanks for the pm

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

hey tis is Fabulous...

amazing...

luv it...

the teaser is superb...

will be waiting for the update...

wonderfull n excellent...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

Hey thanks a lot for pm and this was wonderful the sutle teasing if zoya as ad the noble soul I can't see beyond him perfect one loved this Update and teaser was took goood waiting for the update now

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Beautiful update, thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Please do PM me when you write a new one.. Lots of love and wishes..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#870

Paly, a wonderful ending..
Your FF's are so different from the usual that its a treat to read.. Will really miss your weekly updates, but am eagerly awaiting the new FF..
The precap was hilarious though, so can only imagine what's waiting for us..

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