FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Dhwaniiam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I love you!!!!
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snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

awesome loved it

the way asad asked her everything the way he turned soft the moment he saw her flinch

the memory flashback of asad acting in hospital to zoya

and last part when she confessed all to him and he now knows she keeps his family and him above her he knows he has soulmate

wow thanks for pm

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OMG, you have simply outdone yourself with this chapter! 👏 👏 👏 It was nothing short of perfection! 😃 All those thoughts, feelings, the sadness, anger, and angst, everything was amazing. ❤️ The last scene was the best, where Asad was so sweet and was rocking Zoya to sleep. 😳 You have blown my mind. 😉

I think this was the best chapter of the story yet! 😉 So beautifully written. And congratulations on winning Best Author! 🥳 🤗

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I needed you, Mr. Khan, and I couldn't have you."

"That's because I spent the last hour terrified out of my mind that I would lose you." His voice is harsh and controlled. "It gave me time to think about what I'll do differently in the future."

"I don't have a place.""Yes, you do." He tucks her head against his shoulder. "This is your place."

3 beautiful high points ...such a emotional roller coster

anger pain dread helplessness love everything at its zenith

will the star crossed lovers be discovered by someone in each others arms??

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deedeez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Sigh!!.. What Asad and Zoya are for each other is incomparable..You have portrayed their relationship so beautifully...Heart warming 👍🏼 Eagerly waiting for the next update..