FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Loved everything..

The emotions.. The pain.. The fear.. The anger..

Everything was just bang on..

I had tears in my eyes when Zoya tried forcing her tears down..

I could picture it happening right in front of me..

I loved this Asad.. His possessiveness..His fear.. His care.. And dare I say his love..

One of the most beautiful updates I have ever come across..

Thank you for this.. And for the pm you sent..

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Wow...! You seriously do have some talent there...! The update-neither too cheesy lovey dovey types(though i lyk all) neither too serious... Heartwarming to see the growing bond... Too fab...! And congrats fr winning the best author...! u truly deserve it...!! Fabulous...! eagerly w8in fr next update!

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lover1998

@lover1998

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

OMG OMG I'm reading this and freaking out. I had butterflies in my tummy and heart reading this. I cannot even express how this update has made me feel. I can only hope that these words express some of it. I think you did an exceptional, extraordinary,magnificent, fanatical, downright amazing job. I absolutely loved everything especially the scene outside the car and the night scene where Asad was comforting Zoya. Zoya's confession and Asad's reactions left me in tears with have my heart cheering for Zoya coming cleaning and the other half crying because of Asad's reactions. Zoya's conversation with herself broke my heart, it was heartbreaking and tear jerking. Once again I say exceptional, extraordinary,magnificent, fanatical, downright amazing job and that I loved this chapter.

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Rattyswami

@Rattyswami

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

my god, wht an emotional update😭

Asad concern and worry for Zoya could be seen in every line, in every gesture, his every word reeks of his LOVE for her😊

And Zoya's confessions were sooo honest and heartwarming👏

It's very simple for Zoya...she loves her Phoopie, her Tamatar and HER Mr. Khan a lot more than she loves herself...They are her priority...And even Asad had to acknowledge that today...

Asad can no longer pretend that Zoya is all wrong for him...

Today he had to acknowledge wht his heart knew already...that Zoya is selfless, kind-hearted, loving, caring and protective of those she considers her own...maybe even more so than Asad...

I think after this incident Asad also realized one more important thing...that even though he always said that Zoya was NOT the perfect grl for him, the opposite is true in reality...

Zoya is TOO good for him...and he knows that😉

Great update👏

I just wonder how Asad is going to explain Zoya being in his room to the rest of his family😳

That's going to be too awesome to miss😉😆

Edited by Rattyswami - 11 years ago

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

This is one of the, rather the most beautiful update I've ever read.

It's perfect.

I could feel Asad's pain, Zoya's desperation to hide the truth, their reassurance , their willingness to take care of each other without thinking of the consequences.

Oh my God! It was so good! What am I supposed to do till you update next?!

And a genuine question, how do you get them right - the emotions, the angst?

Because they are spot on!

I have irrevocably fallen in love with this story!

I love you!!!!!!!!

P.S. Read this chapter twice already. Still can't get enough.

Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

omg !!

i have no words to describe this chapter !

i totally loved it !

it was emotional and so beautifull !

i just loved it like crazy !

this is just awesome !

i am wordless !

you are really an awesome author and i just love the way you write all this

this is trully incredable !

you really deserve that award !

congrats dear !

all the best :)

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

i know they r in love😆😆

'pari

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Akilla

@Akilla

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

That was...beautiful. Reading that just gave me a warm feeling. You really are such a gifted and talented writer. The love and trust that they have for each other really just shone through. The way you portrayed the angst...the way you showed asad's anger for his helplessness to save her ...it was all so well done. I just love your style of writing...continue soon and thank you.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Hey Paly congrats for the award.

This chapter was so well written. I loved the way Zoya remembers Asad's reaction at the hospital and how she finally falls asleep in his arms.

Asad not going to kick Rohan out was a good surprise.

Please update soon n pm me for the next part too.