FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

congrats on ur win
by far this is one of the of the best updates so far
at one time I was getting borrowed with the story
but I am very glad for sticking wit it the emotions,the
fears, the tears, the confessions,the comfort ,the realizations
everything in this chapter was awesome.
glad asad knows and they will work together
continue soon

Quote

jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Res can't wait to read the update

At work but as soon as I saw ur pm m stantding in a corner reading it lol

Unres

Finally read it

OMG OMG

You made me pagal

I am keep reading it again and again

Totally loved it

I could feel my heart pounding at so many points

Specially the way asad asked all do you rmb this do u rmb that and den hitting part, Guilt, phupee's safety discussion and then I havo no place I was like awwwn my heart was like pounding and den comes tamrez And tehzeeb with asad's daoouge "they have a place but not here" man mar dala

Many many congrates on winning the award you truly deserves it man. I neva read anything other than love stories but I am fan of your suspense and thrilling writing and I have told you that many times eh.

I imagined ksG and surbhi in all the scenes like I literally watched it.

Not watching qabool hai not even one glimpse but always look forward for updates

Your pm always make me happy when I see you have updated.

Thank you so much for the pm love.

May God bless you

I am just in love with your writing

Keep rocking and please please update sooonn 😳

Edited by jazmeen - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

i love love LOVE the beautifully shown evolution of asya👏👏👏
brilliant!!

Quote

hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Awww, I can never get enough of this FF.

great writing, keep it up

Quote

Lavina

@volatile

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

This update has got to be one of the most intense piece of writing I have ever read. I could literally feel my heart pounding at certain parts. I must say Paly, you truly deserve the best author award that you got! 😊

For me, this chapter belonged to Asad Ahmed Khan. Zoya was the one injured, but it was Asad who was hurting. Hurting for the pain Zoya was going thru, hurting for not being able to save her, hurting for her not trusting him, and last but not least, hurting cos he is falling so hard with every minute he spents with Zoya.

You always have me. In his mind, he already belongs to her heart and soul. And I think if Zoya wasnt so high on painkillers, she would have figured out that he was not so subtly confessing his feelings to her. I dont think she also realised how much she was revealing as well when she said Do you think I value my own safety over phupees or yours?

And that last part when he says that her place is in his arms, such a classic and poignant AsYa scene. With every I know uttered, he was falling more deeply in love with her, which was why he was getting more physical. And finally, he couldnt stop the tears, which were threatening to spill the moment he saw her soaked in blood.

Thank you Paly, for giving us back the original AAK. I was missing him so much in the show, for me QH will never be the same again. But reading your update was like a soothing balm to my injured heart. 😊 In your world, our Jahanpanah Six Packs is back!

Edited by volatile - 11 years ago

Quote

PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: wreeti
Hi,

You know I don't watch qubool hai regularly anymore, but I am very regular in reading your ff. would love to read anything written by you.

And congratulations on your award, you deserve it.

Thank you so much! I was very surprised to get it!

Quote

PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Congratulations 4 ur win u deserve it u r an awsum writer coming to update it was superb hope dey together find out abt rohan's truth thanks 4 pm update soon

Thank you so much! I work very hard to make my stories entertaining. It's so nice to be recognized for my effort.

Quote

PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Wow...! You seriously do have some talent there...! The update-neither too cheesy lovey dovey types(though i lyk all) neither too serious... Heartwarming to see the growing bond... Too fab...! And congrats fr winning the best author...! u truly deserve it...!! Fabulous...! eagerly w8in fr next update!

Thank you! It was such a surprise as I'm not well-known in the forum. I was very pleased and surprised.

Quote

PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Rattyswami
my god, wht an emotional update😭
Asad concern and worry for Zoya could be seen in every line, in every gesture, his every word reeks of his LOVE for her😊
Now all we need is for Asad to realize it and we'll be on our way!
And Zoya's confessions were sooo honest and heartwarming👏
It's very simple for Zoya...she loves her Phoopie, her Tamatar and HER Mr. Khan a lot more than she loves herself...They are her priority...And even Asad had to acknowledge that today...
Asad can no longer pretend that Zoya is all wrong for him...
Exactly. I need to have them working as a equal team for the next story. They had to get to that point - and quickly!

Today he had to acknowledge wht his heart knew already...that Zoya is selfless, kind-hearted, loving, caring and protective of those she considers her own...maybe even more so than Asad...
I'm not sure I agree with this. Asad is also a good person and very protective of those who are his own. He just lacks Zoya's softness but not her protective instincts.

I think after this incident Asad also realized one more important thing...that even though he always said that Zoya was NOT the perfect grl for him, the opposite is true in reality...
Zoya is TOO good for him...and he knows that😉
I hope not! I want him to see her as his equal, the counter-balance to his toughness. They should complete each other, not compete with each other!
Great update👏
I just wonder how Asad is going to explain Zoya being in his room to the rest of his family😳
That's going to be too awesome to miss😉😆
Well, about that... Never mind. You'll find out soon enough!

I was a bit concerned about your reaction. I know you wanted more action and explanation but I felt Zoya and Asad needed a chance (chapter?) to process what happened. We'll go back to the story in the next chapter!

Quote

PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: Zanutix
This is one of the, rather the most beautiful update I've ever read.
It's perfect.
I could feel Asad's pain, Zoya's desperation to hide the truth, their reassurance , their willingness to take care of each other without thinking of the consequences.

Oh my God! It was so good! What am I supposed to do till you update next?!

And a genuine question, how do you get them right - the emotions, the angst?
Because they are spot on!

I have irrevocably fallen in love with this story!
I love you!!!!!!!!

P.S. Read this chapter twice already. Still can't get enough.

I have beta readers who work very, VERY hard to improve my stories. I wish I could thank them by name but I have to respect their privacy. Truly they deserve so much credit because they devote HOURS a week reading and rereading and making sure every line, even every word, is correct. My writing would be a mess without them.

Quote

1 ... 43 44 45 46 47 ... 90

FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 45

Related Topics

Explore Topics