FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
superb update...
very interesting...
asad is really irratated with rohan...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
YEAAA UR BACK I WAS WAITING FOR U TO WRITE A NEW STORY I LOVED THE CHAPTER THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
aawweessooommee... i really was missin ur writings... its been quite a while after web of lies finished... bt m juz sooo freakin happy dat u started a sequel...!! i m mostly a silent reader(sorry) hv commented few times though... its really gets tough fr me cuz m sort of buzyy bt plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz cud u pm me wenevr u update...?? thnx...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Woohoo!! Paly, you updated!! Regardless of my busy schedule, i couldn't help reading this update when i saw the pm notification in my emails, i just couldn't!! It's just sooo GREAT!! And even though i'm a HUGE fan of romances, especially with Asad and Zoya... i'm an even BIGGER fan of your adventure stories!! I can't wait now for every update, i'm just so happy that you've actually started the ff now, yippee!! Thanks for the pm and this BRILLIANT update!! Lots of love!! x
Edited by Aye12345 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nice start plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Ahh 1st of all thanks for pm ing paly...u r really an amazing writer paly..starting z superb..i know it ll get more interesting n adventures as u said :p..jst waiting for ur more updates now..me cant stop myself once i start reading ur update they are so ...i dont know what else to say..me was waiting for ur this ss n it is finally here...thank you so much for such a good update..ll wait for ur upcoming update :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hye...I hav been a silent reader of 'web of lies' and it was just FABULOUS!

and I was waiting for this ff tooo...I loved this chapter...waiting for more of jealous asad. ...

do pm me! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Welcome back Paly!! Good to see that you started this FF. I was eagerly waiting for it.

It was a lovely start!! The Zoya bedroom / bed scene was cute and funny! Asad is bound to get jealous of Zoya and Rohan's interactions!

Look forward to reading more!

Sorry for the late comment. I was busy with Diwali!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Finally you are back

I was wondering where you were

This chapter was the beyond perfection

Too amazing

Love your choice of words

Update soon



Luv

Mahima
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Finally, finally you started on the next part...
Was waiting for it..
So one thriller ends and another thriller starts...
Loved asad and zoyas fights...
Keeps the atmosphere light and energetic...
Rohan...😳
Looking forward for more...
Thanks for the pm.

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