FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Shivanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow..dat was simply amazing

plz update soon n pm me

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...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Omg Paly!!!

Please continue and PM!

I'm dying to read the next part!

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lover1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OMGGG...I started freaking out when i saw the PM. It was like having a sugar rush without the sugar. :D I loved this chapter and i loved how annoyed Asad was and his reactions when ever Zoya tried to get closer to Rohan. I died reading the first part when they were trying to figure out where Rohan would stay. So funny. And i can't wait to read the next chapter.

Edited by lover1998 - 11 years ago

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grad2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome update!!

thank you for the pm :)

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countingstarz

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg yay you're back 😳 Fantastic story as usual ! x

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Rupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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an amazing start to another one of ur awesome stories! you are officially my favorite author in the world! I know I probably already told u that a bazillion times but everytime I read ur stories, I love more and more 😃 it looks like a fantastic story already and please update the next part soon! I can't wait to see more of a possessive Asad and what Rohan's secret is going to be.

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Nida

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey ...

Brilliant start !!

And I must say that I'm hooked on to it just from the very first chapter ... ;)

It's just a treat to watch a jealous Asad in the very first chapter and his irritation is a thing which is just so amusing yet adorable at the same time !! ^___^

I loved the fangirling and star-struck Zoya and Najma ... ;)

Thanks for the pm :)

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Andrea

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Posted: 11 years ago

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YAY! New story!!!

Asad and Zoya had me cracking up! Just like the real couple themselves 😆

I dont know if the charm coming from Rohan is a good thing or not. Cant wait to find out!

Loved the chapter and Im so glad you're back with a new one!! 👏 👏

Edited by Drea_QH1fan - 11 years ago

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Tanvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OMG YAY! 🥳 New story! I'm SO HAPPY to start reading a new FF of yours'! I missed your writing very much!

As is always the case with your stories, the first chapter's got me hooked! 😃

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teddyyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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YAY I MISSED YOUR WRITING SO MUCH! So excited WOHOO! Beautiful beginning! All the Asad and zoya nhok-jhoks were absolutely beautiful and hilarious haha. Their close proximity, retorts, and Asad's jealousy- oh my! I can't wait to see more of it hehee. And Najma and Zoya fangurl if is absolutely adorable. Looks like Rohan and Zoya are pretty similar eh? He seems scared of Asad- noticing his protectiveness over Zoya. However, I feel he's gonna try to get closer to Zoya :0 Which Zoya may not mind at all but here comes trouble! And the little introduction of his bad behavior in the past may have a repeat? Eh, let's see! (: