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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

nice !
so finally we got the first chapter of all the right moves !
i've been waiting for this !!

omg the first chapter was awesome !
zoya and najma are really starstruck by rohan !
zoya blabering about her sharing her bed and asad's reactions were awesome
i was like ROFL

please do continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

welcome back...waiting 4 ur new story...as always...😊😊😊

gud start...nice ...zoya & najma..drooling session...and asad...jealous mode...😆😆😆..funny...asad expressions mind blowing when zoya said sharing bed...😆

cn i request u 4 too things pls...

first Index...it really help...

second..pls add a little romance wd jealousy...it will be add cheery on top...pls...

i hope ur consider my req...

thnks 4 d pm dear...

pari

Edited by princeegoyal - 11 years ago

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

cn i request u 4 too things pls...

first Index...it really help...

second..pls add a little romance wd jealousy...it will be add cheery on top...pls...

pari

Pari,

Yes, I will add an index starting with chapter 2. There will not be any overt romance, such as confessions of love, but their feelings (Asad's especially) will become very clear by the end of this story. I focus on the adventure because that's what I really enjoy writing.

Thank you for the feedback,

Paly

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Yayy... You started a new story... So very happy... Update soon... :)

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Paly, Friday morning in NY came and went. Hope everything's OK and we'll get an update soon!

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I'm sorry I haven't posted chapter 2 yet. I've gotten out of the habit of writing to a schedule. 😕
The chapter is finished and with my beta. I'll post it as soon as I get it from her.

Thank you for your patience,
Paly

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dhwaniianak

@dhwaniianak

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Please send me PMs👏

Big fan of yours ...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Hey Paly... I love your writing style. I started reading this ff n then saw a link to " A Web of Lies" which I started reading last night n finished it in ONE GO.

Your stories are awesome.

Please pm me for updates on this story n please update soon.

Am sending you a buddy request in case you pm through your buddy list.