FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

thanks for the pm

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MayaB5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Yay! Was so excited to see the first post if this story. Have been waiting anxiously for you to post.

Can't wait to see what mischief Zoya gets up to this time 😊

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Ankahee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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You are a natural, you know that? 😉

it just flows, Asad and Zoe of your series, are so established it's like meeting old friends again. Excellent start. I love the premise you have kept to the Khan family. and of course having another man in the house is going to be so interesting. I am looking forward to this so much. Wonderful to see to back with this story.

Cannot wait for the next part.

Happy Diwali!!! 😊

Edited by notagain - 11 years ago

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wreeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Thanks for the pm. The story is very exciting. Can't wait for next chapter to be up

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very good udapte i loved it continue soon please 😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Yayy!

A sequel to your amazing story, i just can't believe it:)

Thanks for the PM.

The first chapter was an apt prologue of sorts. In spite of being the introductory chapter, it was full-fledged in terms of characterization, as well as providing us an inkling about the possible story line.

I have already read the synopsis of this story, and with the first chapter you certainly have me intrigued already.

Really, Zoe should really have learnt by now that all that glitters is not gold.

Rohan Saxena sounds like a mysterious individual! Waiting to see how you plan to portray him. Is he a positive character, an antagonist or does he have shades of grey?

As usual, loved seeing my favorite color on Asad- green;) The man just can't help being an alpha male who marks his territory.

And Dilshad and Najma being their usual amiable selves...

Update soon, yaar!😛

Edited by -Amri- - 11 years ago