FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Amazing update... Loved the way Asad came forward n told Rohan that Zoya has a family that is capable of looking after her n protecting her. Love the way the story is playing out.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Woohoo!! It's BRILLIANT!! Just brilliant!! I just love it, the mystery, the passion, the little funny moments and the care that you have portrayed so beautifully, wow!! Thank you sooo much!! For this... and for the pm!! Lots and lots and lots of love!! <3 Hope you can update soon, if not... don't worry... take your time.xxx

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

The suspense behind Rohans true identity is building up. I'm beginning to wonder if Asad does not already know Rohans true intention.

Thanks for the pm. Eagerly awaiting the next update

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

gal dont make us wait too long for the next update

we can see glimpses of a lonely boy in rohan ...has he been brainwashed or instigated against the khan family???

what is rohan upto?

It's the rest of the world I don't trust. There's always somebody trying to take you away from me! was the most beautiful line in this update

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

it was just amazing!!!! najma and zoya are moving ahead...will ayaan come into the picture ??? I'm excited !!!
rohan is really intriguing!!! wonder what he's upto??!?
continue soon