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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plss comment people 😭
I want to know how was it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's amazing ...interesting concept ...continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Wow its awesome
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls tell me when you guys want pm 😃
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Chapter 2 😊

Dehli :

Hania and zehra are running around the whole whole hose with cake mixture in their hands and throwing it on each other. Suddenly they bump into someone and the whole mixture falls on the floor. There father though was the best they could ask for he had cleanliness problems.

Faisal : yeh yahan kya ho raha hai koi zara humien samjhane ki takleef kare ga??
Zehra : woh abbu...
Hania : woh abbu cake mixture hawa se ur gaya that to hum us ko pakar rahe the!!!

Zehra looked at her sister and started laughing out loudly.

Hania : uhh woh abbu mera matlab tha ke ...
Faisal : acha acha apni ye dramebaazi band karo aur jaa kar change kar lo.
Hania & zehra : ok abbu 😕

Zehra POV :

Abbu tau bilkul OCD hain , woh hamesha mujhe Mr.khan ki yaad dilaate hain .
Bahat mushkil tha uss raat un ko chorna uss accident ke baad nayi zindagi shuru karne liye docter ko manana , agar doctor ne bahar abbu ko nahin bola hota tau shayad mien abhi tak mar chuki hoti !!
Aur kya kismet thi humera ko bhi meri waja se ...!!
Kabhi nahin bhool paon gi un ko magar sb meri puri zindagi meri kismef par depend karti hai!!!!

Hania POV :

Abbu bilkul ayaan ki tarah hain kisi pal masti karte or kisi pal serious hote ...
Ayaan ko chorna mera zindagi ka shayad sabse bura decision tha but ab kuch nahin ho sakta hai ...agar uss din zoya ne doctor se kaha na hota tau mein mar chuki hoti...
Ab meri zindagi ab sirf or sirf meri taqdeer ke haton mien hai!


Just then while they are thinking thier abbu calls them , the get fresh and then go to him,
Faisal : tum dono se mujhe ek bahat hi important bast karni hai .
Zehra : ji abbu kahiye
Faisal : zehra mene tum dono behno ka nikkah tai kar dia hai,
Zehra & hania : WHAT!!!
Hania : abbu aap ne ham se poocha bhi nahin.
Faisal : nahin aur woh iss liye kyun ke tum dono na hi karo ge ..aakhir tum donon ka ek saal se rishta dhoond raha hoon.
Zehra : par abbu
Faisal : par war kuch nahin abb jao tayyar ho jao humien un ke ghar lunch ke liye jana hai.
Hania : abbu un ka ghar kahan hai sur un ka naam kya hai??
Faisal : woh log bhopal mein rehte hain ..larke dono bhai hain par naam tum dono in se khud pooch lena !
And he left the room.

After hearing the name bhopal and the word brothers ... Both went into serious thinking that what if it was THEM but they both thought how could it be ... It may be someone else...

Bhopal KM same time (location has changed...the whole family has gone to a new huge bunglow)
Raziya and gafoor had died a year ago .
The whole khan family lived together and dilshaad and shireen are like sisters cum bestfriends ...

They all were having breakfast like ever other usual day .

Shireen : mujhe aur dilshaad ko kuch announce karna hai .
Dilshaad : haan!
Asad : ammi aap kuch zyada excited lag rahi hain!
Ayaan : haan ammi or bari ammi
Dilshaad : woh iss liye hai kyunke hum mien ne , shireen ne aur Rashid ne aap dono bhaion ka nikkah tai kar dia hai .
Ayaan & asad : WHAT !!!
Asad : ammi mien...
Dilshaad : asad tum kya han ? Kab tak tum dono zoya aur humera ke liye marte rahoge haan!!
Shireen : ye hamara akhri faisla hai samjhe ?
Ammi. : wo rehte kahan hain ,larkiyon ka naam kya hai kya aap ne unhe dekha hai?
Dilshaad : woh dehli mien rehte hain larkiyon ka naam hania aur zehra woh dono faisal chacha ke betiyan hai aur hamne unhe nahin dekha magar woh aaj raat ko yahan khaane ke liye aa rahe hai aur 3 weeks tak yahan rahen ge sare functions ke liye phir fourth week mien tum dono ki shaadi hai dehli mien.
Ayaan :ammi aap logon ne unhe dekha nahin hai aur nikkah tai kar liya.
Shireen :haan ab tum dono tayyar ho jao mien guest rooms tayyar karti hoon.
Both ayaan and asad go from thier.

Asad POV
Ab chahe jo bhi ho jaye mien iss nikkah se nahin bhagon ga aur mien iss nikah ko nibhaon ga ...mien larki se tau pyaar nahin kar sakun ga magar koshish zaroor karoonga ! aur ammi ka bhi dil kush ho jaye ga

Ayaan POV

Iss baar nikha karoonga aur uss ko pure hosh se nibhaon ga ...ye mere liye bhi acha hoga aur ammi. Ka bhi dil kush ho jaye ga ...

At the other side zehra and hania are thinking the same thing ...
All have one thought in mind
" nikkah karoonga/karoongi aur use pure hosh se nibhaounga / nibhaongi"

Precap : asya & ayra face to face !!Chapter 2 😊

Ps. Pls tell me hw was it ??
All sorts of comments are welcomed


😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh God... they r not suffering from amnesia...
ghaffor razia died.. what can be better than that... what happened to billii..?? actuallyy i just saw the episode online and the precap was sooo annoying and now billi is on my mind... 😆
ufff... u reallyyy need to update sooon... or i will die waiting...
plzzz continue sooon..
and add me to ur pm list cox i dont know if u have added me to ur pm list or not as i was spamming the threads of the stories i read...!! 😃




and yeahhh... i am first one to like and comment... 😃
Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wow its amazing
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow im loving this story, is this ur first time writing? its really good, really eager to read next part. Please PM me when u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pm me when you update thanks in advance for the great ff!

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