Asya and Ayra FF : Devoted to you ❤️ 11 updated!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Prologue..
nice... how are guys going to survive...
continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YAAR THIS WAS JUST AMAZING!!!! GAFOOR AND RAZIA DEAD! ONLY ONE TGING BETTER! ZOYA AND HUMEIRA ARE COINCIDENTALLY GETTING MARRIED TO ASAD AND AYAAN!! I JUST LOVE IT

PLEASE update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1... revelation...
too many hardship for the girls..
went the boys took easy way out...
and nice punishment.. thinking the girls not
coming back.. so this is destiny game..


Now marriage 😲 🤣 fun to watch

continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter... 2
So Zoya and Humaira... did not loss memory... patient 😕 😕
they just pretending to be... so that they can stay
there with faizal... to go far away from their past...

nice at least Gafoor & Razia.. not there
anymore...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting.. the guys have the same problem..

Now .. they are willing to do it.. for the sake off their
parents...


" nikkah karoonga/karoongi aur use pure hosh se nibhaounga / nibhaongi"


percap... very good

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome ...update soon ...waiting for next part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3 :)

Dehli 3:00pm

The girls are ready with all their clothes and are sitting in the car and just then their abbu arrives ..

Faisal : aap dono ne kya apne 1 mahine ke kapre le liye hain?
Zehra : ji abbu.
Faisal : sab kuch le liya hai na.
Zehra : ji abbu

After that they leave after having lunch .The whole journey is quite as it will take 5 hours for them to reach dehli. Hania and zehra both are in the thoughts that in one months time they will get married.

Hania : aapi aaj hamara mangetar koi aur ho jaye ga...:(
Zehra : haan hania magar hum kuch bhi nahin kar sakte ...faisal abbu ne hamara khayaal rakha aur hum bas un ko woh khushi dena chahte hai jis ke woh haqdaar hain!
Hania : haan aapi...lekin...
Zehra : dekho hania ab lekin wekin choro aur so jao shayad raat ko na so payen!
Hania : raat ko kyun na so payen?
Zehra : kyun ke hum bahat stress mien honge buddhu!
After that they sleep and wake up when they have reached KM...at about 8:00 pm...

Bhopal 3:00 pm

All are having lunch in a quite manner.
Asad and ayaan both are not talking like usual but today it pisses dilshaad off!

Dilshaad : asad aur ayaan hum ne tumhara nikkah tai kiya hai , zeher peene ko nahi kaha hai!
Asad and ayaan both choke on their food.
Asad : uhh woh actually..
Dilshaad : woh actually kya haan??
Ayaan : wih Actually ammi hamne larkiyon ko dekha nahi hai na tau iss liye humien thora dar lag raha hai!!
Shireen : fikar mat karo zehra aur hania i am sure churail in disguise nahin hai!
Ayaan :ammi !!
Both ayaan and asad leave from there...

While they are going,
Asad: ayaan yeh kya excuse tha han? Unhe bhi pata hai ke hum kya soch rahe the!
Ayaan : woh bhaijaan , ammi ne ekdum se poocha tha na tau mein dar gaya aur mien ne woh keh dia..
Asad : hahhahaah , ayaan yaar tum free ki comedy ho!
Ayaan : hahahhaha very funny!
Asad : acha ayaan tune shaadi ke bare mien kya socha?
Ayaan : bhaijaan , ab mien aur nahi bhaag sakta ab mien shaadi karoonga!
Asad : han ayaan ammi ne sahi kaha tha ab hame age move hona hoga ..
They both go from there and go and do their office work waiting for what awits them!

Bhopal 8:00 pm KM

Zoya and hania both walk gracefully and elegantly towards the mansion , both smelling something sweet and familiar in the air.

Asad and ayaan descend the stairs but stop they see their "sasur" standing on the door .

Faisal : assalam alaikum :)
Ayaan and asad : waalaikum assalam :)
The whole family greets faisal.
Shireen : are aapki betiyaan dekhaye nahi de rahi hai.
Faisal : woh zehra aur hania apne bag leke aa rahi hain.
Just then two girls enter the room with bags in hands shocking the whole family including the two girls.
Zehra (whispering): mr.khan!
Hania(whispering): ayaan!
Across the hallway.
Ayaan : humera!
Asad : zoya!
The whole family had various expressions playing on their faces most were happiness and shock!
Dilshaad was the first one to break of from the stance ...
Dilshaad : uhh beta andar ao..
The whole family comes in thier senses...
Zehra : uhh ji aunty , chalo hania.
Hania : ji aapi .
Zehra and hania enter the house examining the architecture of the house they have never been to but are closely connected to it.
Faisal : are tum dono itna slow kyun chal rahi ho? Jaldi chalo...
Zehra : ji abbu
They enter the house while dilshaad tells them to sit down and have some water.
The whole family goes and sits down.
Faisal : aap pls zarah sabka taruf kara de aur mere betiyon ko aapke beton se miladen ..
Dilshaad : uhhh haan haan , kyun nahin.
Yeh asad hai zoya ka ,mera matlab hai zehra ka dulha aur mera beta.
Zehra gives a weak smile to dilshaad a bit happy by hearing her old name.
Shireen : aur yeh ayaan hai , haniya ka dulha .
They all give their introductions ...
Faisal : yeh zehra hai , asad ki dulhan aur meri beti aur yeh hania hai , ayaan ki dulhan aur meri beti.

Just then it dawns on them that zehra is getting married to asad while hania is getting married to ayaan .
By now ayaan and asad , hania and zoya are more confident.
As they know its muqqadar ka khel and yes they are ready to play with it...:)

Precap : ayaan and asad making zoya and hania jealous ... And the girls planning revenge!

So hw was it plsss tell me and pls comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
ohhh... that was reallyy goood.. asya and ayra met... i thought asad will speciallyyy go in a state of shock.. like typical indian soap... sorryy if hurt anyone... anyway continue sooon..
and yeahh.. mee first.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Well its that i didnt want it to be typical ...i wanted it to be different ...

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