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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds good
continue soon
plz pm me when update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4 :)

Bhopal 9:00 pm

After having dinner the elders go and sit on the sofa and talk while the younger ones go and sit in the balcony.
Nuzhat : mien bahat bore ho raki hoon ...can we play truth and dare??
Asad : bahat bachon wala game hai..
Zehra : mr. Khan ,pleaseee ???
Asad : oh k!
They start playing in the first turn question lands on asad while answer lands on zehra .
Asad : kya aap kabhi mangalpur gayi hain?
Zehra (shocked by his question) : KYA????
Asad : kya aap kabhi mangalpur gayi hain????
Zehra : ji..
Nuzhat : oh k ab next turn.
In the next turn the question lands on humera while answer lands on ayaan.
Humera : truth or dare??
Ayaan : truth!!!
Humera : kya aapne kabhi ek larki se pyaar kar ke uss ka dil dukhaya hai???
Ayaan : ji..:(
Nuzhat : uhhh lets...
Nuzhat is interrupted by the loud bell.
Ayaan ,nuzhat and asad smile : aa gaya!
Zehra : huh??? Kaun?
A man in a black shirt ,white coat and black pant walked in and screamed : BHAIJAAN!!!!
The whole khan clan went towards the man and hugged him .they made him sit down e and eat and when he went up to change asad came to zehra and said : woh mera bhai tha , us ka naam asim ahmed khan hai. Woh najma se 4 saal bara hai .jab woh peda hua tha tab woh hospital se kidnap ho gaya tha aur last year hi humein uss ke baare me pata chala. (Short discription of asim : he studied in london and now he is back forever.he is extremely cool is 24 years old and just imagine karan tacker as asim ahmed khan )
Zehra : was shocked at the new revelation , oh k :-0
Just then asim walked in ...
Asim : are bhaijaan mien sabse mila magar aapki mangetar se nahin ...kahan hai woh???
Asad : uhh woh yahan hai ...yeh rahi ,zehra.
Zehra : ji..
Asim : are aap tau bahat hi zyada khoobsurat hain...
Asad : asim!!
Asim : sorry sorry
Then all three of them go in the hall to the adults.
All the adults are sitting and talking suddenly they hear a huge shout :
"AAPI"
A lovely 21 year old girl walked in with 2 suitcases and a huge smile on her face.
"Ayra!!" Zehra screamed...
They both ran and hugged each other...
Hania : um excuse me mien bhi hun yahan.
Ayra : oh don't worry baby come here.
She went and hugged hania.
Zehra went to dilshaad and family and said : woh meri behen hai , woh mujh se ek saal choti hai aur hania se 1 saal bari hai , ayra 3 saal ki thi jab uss ko kisi aur ne adopt kiya tha kyun ke un ke paas koi bache nahin the aur bas last year hi humein is ke bare mien pata chala tha...
Mien bas yeh poochna chahti ke kya yeh meri shaadi tak yahan ruk sakti hai???

Dilshaad : are haan beta kyun nahin :)
Ayra : thankyou so much aunty :)
Dilshaad : acha mien jaati hun tum bache maze karo...
All the adults go away from there ...
Ayra :ok appi pls intro karwa do...
Zehra : oh k sure , umm this is nuzhat ,this is ayaan hania ka mangetar,this asad , uhh woh mere mangetar. ,this is asim ,unka bhai :)
Nuzhat : hum truth or dare continue karte hain na.
Hania : haan lets play that...
The start again and this time question land on asim while answer lands on ayra .
Asim pov
I am shocked that first the love of my life enters like a tornado , that tornado came 2 years ago to , we would have gotten married but ayra left me and went away...
Ayra pov
This is not happening, this cant be happening , i left him because they would kill him and today he is standing in front of me equally shocked , please forgive me asim :(

Asim : truth or dare ?
Ayra : truth
Asim : why did you leave two years ago?
Ayra looked at him shocked with hih question but all ready to answer : i left because your life was in danger because of me ,those perverts were to much but i still cared!
Asim was shocked ...hell shocked : ayra!!??
Ayra just ran from there...to the balcony , asim even ran behind her ...
Asim : ayra please stop , you know that i love you!!! And please tell me hua kya tha uss din?
Flashback...
Ayra returned home from her college , she entered her house when she saw a man sitting on her sofa set.
Ayra : ji aap kaun?
Man : mien ghafoor siddique hoon aur mien bas yeh kehne aaya hoon ke tum asim se door raho...
Ayra : magar kyun?
Man : kyun ke meri beti tanisha ka uss pe dil aa gaya hai...samjhi ab tum yahan se hamesha hamesha ke liye chale jao varna ham asim ko hi maar denge!
Ayra : dekhiye app...
Man : bas!!!! Chalo yahan se aadmi log ...
The man left leaving ayra all shattered and at last she made a decision that she will leave him for good...
...flashback ends

Asim hugged ayra as tight as he could : i love you ayra aur uss ki beti tanisha aur uska accident us hi din ho gaya tha...
Ayra : kya!!!!!!
Asim : ab sirf yeh matter karta hai ke tum kya sochti ho and i love you a lot!!
Ayra : i love you to <3
Asim goes down on his knee and says that : Kya apko is stupid se insaan ke saath nikkah qubool hai?
Ayra goes down to his level and says qubool hai and asim makes her wear the ring...
There moment is disturbed by the huge applaud ...the whole family is here and are deeply happy..
Rashid : ab is ghar mien ek mahine ke baad do shadiyan nahin teen shadiyaan hongi!!!!
They all go downstairs to celebrate their happiness...

Precap : kidnapped ???!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Short discription of ayra ( 21 years old , studied in london really modern , just umagine krystal d'sousa...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow its amazing part
continue soon
plzzz pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
loved this part, yes!!! a new entry, lol when u mentioned karan tacker and then asim and ayra lovestory, i remembered parineeti, his first ever co star from love ne mila di jodi! But love krystle too so that works lol! anyone else a fan of LNMDJ??!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
i like it continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
omg update real soon m dying to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Chapter 5 :)

It had been two days since the zaidi's arrived ( zaara and hanias fathers name was faisal zaidi)
Everything was going smoothly but both the couples talked really less...
In fact they didn't talk at all except for the arrangements..
Dilshaad and shireen had asked both the girls to call them phoopi from now on..
All the dates of thr rituals and the nikkah ceremony were selected...

It was 30 october now ,
There engagement was two days later , after two weeks all the rituals start then the nikkah ceremony...

Bhobal 12:30 pm KM

Zaara and hania go to asad and ayaan...to speak : P
Zaara : umm Asad ??
Asad : han?
Zaara : uhh woh phoopi ne kaha hai ke aap aur ayaan humien shopping le ja rahe hain??
Asad : KYA???? Mene aisa kab kaha ?????
Hania whispered to zaara : kaha tha na bura idea hai chalo yahan se chalte hai...
Zaara whispers back : sis , dont worry ek saal pehle iss sher ke sar moen bhi moon ( face ) dala tha aur aaj bhi tayyar hoon...
Ayaan looks at both of them and says : yeh kya khusur phusur kar rahe ho ??
Hania : ayaan woh kuch nahin bas yahike aaj humien shopping pe jaana hai aur ammi ne bhi kaha hai ke aap le jayen ge
Asad : acha theek hai aap dono ready ho jao...
Zehra and hania go out silently and one the reach thier room they shout with excitement ...
They both get ready and come out , both are looking heavenly ...
Zoya is wearing a beautiful red anarkali and humera is wearing a white and blue anarkali...
Both the brothers are mesmerised looking at them...
Asad : beautiful...
Zaara : jee??? Acting as if she hadn't heard him..
Asad : uh woh kuch nahin ..chalen???
App bahat time lagati hain!
Zaara: oh toh aap yeh kehna chahte hain ke mien punctual nahin hoon??
Asad : oh yes aap kitni smart hain...
Asad smirked inwardly ...
Zaara : acha ab time waste mat kejiye...
All of them leave for the mall... They go and shop some clothes for themselves...and family...
They have lunch and go outside...
They reach the car when asad exclaimed..
Asad : ya Allah! Mera phone tau upar hi reh gaya , mien abhi aaya, wait here he said glaring at zehra,
Ayaan : uff ek second , bhaijaan bhaijaan!!
Ayaan ran after asad , hania snd zaara stood there in the dark park place..
Just then some goons came there .
Man 1 ; oye hoye jaane koi in ko kyun maarna chahe ga??
Man 2 : apne maqsad ke liye kaun kya nahin kar sakta hai ??
There were five of them they took out two handkerchiefs and they put it on zaara and hania and the last thing what the heard was the man talking on the phone...
Man : madam , aapka kaam aaj ho jaye ga...jee aap paise tayyar rakhiye ga...je bye...
Then everything blacked out, and the men put them in their cars and went away..,

When asad and ayaan reached they started panicking , they searched the whole mall swearing under thier breath...
They were really scared so they informed the whole family now and everyone was at the mall calling them and looking out for them including the police...
Chief : kya aap ke paas unka number hai??
Ayaan : ji!
Chief : hum un ko track kar ke dhoond sakte hain...
Ayaan tell the number and with in 15 minutes the result has arrived and its a pretty shocking one ! !!
Asad : mangalpur!!!
Ayaan : itna dur ??
Asad was having all the flashbacks and was hell scared !
Asad : ayaan we have to reach there fast ... Ayaan and asad both left in 2 seconds...

Precap : milenge or not??????

I know it was crazy sorryy!!!
All tomatoes abd jootahs and chappals allowed,... :)
Plss comment and though i will not be able to give many pm's next time check it regularly :)


Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
ohh woww... what a chapter...
the goons took them to mangalpur... ohh God... r the mangalpuri ppl back...???
umm and can u clarify one thing.. is zoya zehra or zaraa..?? i was confused in the start of the chapter...!!
anywayy.. plzz continue sooon.. and thanxx for the pm...!! 😃

yippee... em first...!! 🥳
Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
I am sorry but i wont be doing pm's anymore its way to tiring :(

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