Asya and Ayra FF : Devoted to you ❤️ 11 updated!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am new on this forum and i am writing an asya and ayra FF!!
Well i hate it how zoya is still going back to asad after all that happened ...well humera is still doing a great job... I dont ever proof read my work so pls bear with me , i make a lot of mistakes and i will try to update as fast as i can ...all kinds of comments are welcomed . Desperately hope you enjoy 😃



Index:
Prologue: pg 2
Chapter 1 : pg 2
Chapter 2 : pg 3
Chapter 3 : pg 5
Note : pg 7 (pls read it before i write chap 4)
chapter 4 : pg 7
Chapter 5 : pg 8
Chapter 6 : pg 10
Chaper7:pg 10
Note : pg 11

Chapter 8:pg 12
Chapter 9: pg 14
Chapter 10: pg 14
Note for PM:Pg 16
Chapter 11 :pg 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As i am new i dont really know how to write much so can u just answer my 1 question
It is that can you tell me when we have to update do we go on post reply??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: namirah123

As i am new i dont really know how to write much so can u just answer my 1 question
It is that can you tell me when we have to update do we go on post reply??

yup
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Originally posted by: namirah123

As i am new i dont really know how to write much so can u just answer my 1 question
It is that can you tell me when we have to update do we go on post reply??



Yes ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue 😊 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue


Nikhat's marriage was done and she had gone home with farhaan ( here farhaan lives nikhat a lot and he is a positive character )
Zoya was running away to new york at night while everyone is sleeping but is caught in a major car accident.
Humeira was running away to dehli while everyone is sleeping but is also caught in an car accident.
Asad is waiting for ayaan to bring zoya at his house at the break of dawn.
Ayaan is waiting for dawn to send zoya home and be with humera for ever.
Both the gorls have lost thier memories as they both were mentally disturbed and then they had an accident where both there cars had crashed into each other!!

Will these four hearts ever find their true love or not??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is reallyyy interesting... update the chap sooon...!!! 😃
and plz pm me if u do pms..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I will update soon

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<font size="6">Chapter 1</font>

Dehli at about 12 pm :

A man just ran in the emergency area shouting for help ...he had a pale young girl of about 18 in his hands bleeding !
All the doctors came towards the man and put the girl on the strecher...
Man: meri zehra ko bacha lo , meri beti ko bacha lo , pls she is the only family i have!!
Docter:case tau bohot critical hai but we will try.
Man:pls doctor pls!!
Docter: aap pehle bataye is ko hua kya hai.
Man: meri beti ne apne aap ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki ...
And the man fainted right there.
He was taken to another room and was treated well.

Bhopal SM (same time):
Zoya and Humera Are both furiously packing there thier bags oblivious to the fact that the other was doing the same .
Both had one thought in thier mind " go and dont look back!"
Zoya had left everything that asad gave her except the engagement ring as she had promised him she would keep it with her forever . She made a letter and kept it on her bed!
Humera had done the same and had left everything that ayaan gave her except the ring .
Both went out of the house through different doors...she also made a letter and kept it on her bed.
Zoya had her new york ticked in her hand while humera had her Delhi ticket in hand!
Both sat in their cars and drove rather ruthlessly...

Down the hall :
Ayaan was looking at the ceiling and smiling oblivious to the fact that SHE had gone.
Ayaan: humera begam tomorrow i will show you how much i love you ... Zoya and my marrige was just a misunderstanding but you and i are connected from the inside and tomorrow i will surprise you by marrying you :)

Khan mansion (same time) :
Asad was roaming here and there , too excited to sit even for minute ...he couldnt wait for dawn also oblivious to the fact that SHE had gone...
Asad: i cant wait to see you miss newyork and show you how much i love you by marrying you tomorrow and finally we will be one .

Road to dehli and airport 12:30 pm:

Zoya's tears were falling non stop ... She felt really bad to leave him but she knew she had to she couldnt be a puppet for a long time and all her patience had given up!
She was thinking so hard that she didn't notice another car coming towards her and before she could even look CRASH!!!! She had crashed into the car opposite her while her car did a 360 above the other car before finally landing on it!

Humera was driving her car but she had a pretty blur vision from all that crying she knew that she would die without ayaan but leaving him was for his and her good...
While doing all this thinking she didnt notice another car coming towards her and before she coud react CRASH!! She had crashed into the other car but she could not see further as she fainted with the feeling of a heavy load on her head .

There was noise everywhere.. Police cars and ambulances had come .
Zoya and humera were rushed to the hospital in dehli as it was the closest.

Dehli 1:00 pm city hospital :

The docters had just come out of humera and zoya's operation theatre .

Docter mehta : this patient has caught amnesia which means she has lost her memory which i vuess might never return!
Docter yash : the other has also caught amnesia ...

They both were talking while a man was listening to them ,
Man's POV
Itna kuch khoya hai mene aaj , meri ek eklauti zehra ko khoya , aur ab mere paas kuch nahin hai

Just then he caught the doctors saying something which made a little hope of happiness in his eyes...

2 years later Dehli:

Zehra faisal: is zoya in reality but after the accident she was named zehra
Hania faisal: is humera in reality but is named hania after the accident.

2 years later bhobal KM:
Asad was like his usual grumpy self since 1 year ...when zoya had ...
He didnt even want to think about it . He should hate her but no he still loves her like hell and can do anything to get her!!

Same time bhobal SM :
Ayaan had gone quite scince a year ...he played no pranks ,no flirting he hated humera for what she did but still loved her a lot and for that he wanted to kill her self but he still wanted to see her beautiful and innocent face everyday!!!

Precap: ayaan and asad get to know that thier mother has fixed their marriage without their consent , and shockingly both thier mothers haven'teven seen thier faces ...

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