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Posted: 11 years ago
2partss in one day what a treat lool
thanks for the update
please update soon even though you do
its amazing cant wait to see what problmes Ayra have
and i want to seeAsd and zoya too awwh ]
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful story i just love it thanks a lot😉😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
great story plzz do continue soon😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊
very nice👏👏👏👏👏👏😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
2 parts..in single day...
Both parts r really awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls update soon..
eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update😃 so wht's H and AY problem?? why no kids?? let me guess they want to wait till after ASYA get married...Right?😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great updates. plz pm me when you update next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
two updates in a
day ...wowww ...liked dem
update soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry 4 late. Very nice update. Thanks for pm. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

NOTE: apologies for not posting on Friday. But I did finish writing it..but left the pendrive at home. As weekend came ...lot of cleaning work at home for pooja... Anyways here is the part. .. and next part will come today only as compensation for Friday..after I receive the comments from u...in the afternoon.. I guess..enjoy reading.. love to know ur feedbacks... Should be ending in 4 more parts maximum.. I guess so

Part 12.

Z came into sense and then hugged her daughter, then showed a dimplewala smile to her daughter.

Z: ammi is smiling kush

As: my ammi looks pretty...hai na abbu

A: ofcourse ur mom is the most beautifull person both inside and outside

Z: ok asya now take your lap go and sit inside with dadu... and play game . Dadu is sleeping when he gets up u should came and tell ammi ok... ammi will be in this room...ok

AS: ok ammi, pulls her ammi down and hugs her and does the same to her abbu and goes inside the room.

Ayaan also arrives, Hu was smiling looking at asya now after seeing ayaan there she is a bit tensed and ay could sense it and questions her in the eyes. But H looks at zoya.asad saw everything .so he is waiting for one of them to open to know what is going on.

Z:Mr.khan... what is my relation with Hu

Everyone was a bit tensed by Z question...

A: our daughter...

Z:then what is her relation to u

A: my first daughter...

Z: when I was looking after asya in NY isn't ur duty to look after H here... I left knowing that u will fulfill my duties here...

Ay:bhabhi... when u left, u didn't leave him behind... u took him with u... u just left a soulless life behind

Z is stunned by ayaan answer and look around to see that Ay words were acknowledged by H too. Asad was not looking at any of them.

Ay: u left him just like that... I know he commited a mistake... But I was responsible for putting him in that position, when u forgave me... why cant u forgive him...look at both of u... the 3 year separation has it done any change in both of u... u both still care, crave, love each other MORE THEN EVER..atleast u have asya as a memory of ur love to pull u through... Bhaijaan has just his memories...bhabhi

Zoya was listening to ayaan words... she didn't know what to say... but has tears in her eyes. Looking at zoya tears...asad was stunned...

A: ayaan stop it... U can not ask zoya anything...i am responsible for whatever happened...zoya completed trusted me... but I didn't live up to her trust in me... it is my fault...so...stop it...

A: zoya u were asking me something about H..what is it zoya... Is there something wrong...tell me I will sort it out..

Z:Mr.khan there is some problem between these 2... I just don't know what it is?

Ayaan was stunned and asad questioned ayaan with eyes..ayaan denied that he didn't know anything

Ay: no bhabhi. Everything is fine... we both are happy ... believe me..

Z:if that is the case... What about children ayaan..najma and nikhat got married the same time as u guys were... they both have kids in their life... why there is no news about my niece or nephew. For the past one year I have been putting the question to H and she keep dodging it...it is also the reason I came here... tell me...

Asad was stunned listening to zoya words and also the truth behind it... But how come he never noticed this...

Z: answer me ayaan... Bcoz my sis is not telling the truth. I know she loves children I could see her craving when she was playing with asya...tell me the real reason...ayaan I know u love kids too...

Ay: no everything is fine. (softly)

Asad goes and holds ayyan by his shoulders

A: ay I know u r hiding...i know u inside out...tell us... We both will help me... we want u to be happy..

Ay: but we both want u 2 to be happy too.

Z: don't put a puzzle... Tell the truth.

Ay:(tensed) we both decided we both will have kid only after u both get together in ur life...

Asad and zoya were really stunned to hear ayaan words.. zoya was really in fury after hearing ayaan words, but asad was moved by his brother love for them.

Z: what if we both didn't want to get together in our lives and live our separate ways...

Ay: silence

Asad is stunned at her question.

Z: answer me ayaan...dammit answer the question

Ay: then we wont have children at all... bcoz I was the one responsible for separating u both...and I should be punished for what I did to u both.

Z: what is Humeira mistake...in this...just that she loved u and trusted u with her.. what about H feelings in this... what is her views... Her happiness doesn't matter...why should she be punished for ur mistake... she is ur wife... her happiness come ahead of ur happiness...or ur sorrow..isnt..

H: but appi I agree with him...u both are our parents too... when our parents are not happy in their life... How can we be..

Z: oh really...zoya goes and slaps Humeira...

A: zoya

Z: didn't u learn anything from me... look at me...do not repeat the mistake I commited... fight for ur right... Be selfish... it is ok to be selfish...when it comes to their siblings these khan brothers are actualy dumb... and emotionaly unbalanced ... fight H... u deserve happiness in ur life looking back not a day has gone in my life... when I questioned myself... why in hell I agreed to Mr.khan on that fatefull day. Why in hell I was so worried about najma... That I went out on my own. Why In hell I didn't tell my doubts to MR.khan...and solved the problem together... if only I did this day wouldn't have come in my life. I will beleading a happy married life with the person who loved me the most.

A: ayaan zoya is right... Don't repeat our mistake... the thought that u guys are happy in ur life... helps us in healing ourself. The thing u guys didn't move forward in ur life bcoz of me it makes me feel all the more guilty I have already ruined mine and zoya... I don't want to be responsible for urs too...i want you both to change ur decisions ... I cant take it anymore ...please...

Zoya was heart broken seeing her asad like that... She has seen how worse asad has felt..when she realized she loved him... She wanted to pull him out of his insecurity, his fears of hurting her...but looking at asad badly broken... She just went to him and holded his face in between her hands and said

Z: it was destiny asad... not u...dont hold urself responsible... bcoz I am partially responsible too... Please...

Asad doesn't say anything... Bcoz... He doesn't have anything to say... it is the healing touch... only to feel zoya hands in his face. Zoya slowly caress his face and pulls his face closer and plant a kiss on his forehand. And turned around and looked the couple

Z: it is true we both are not physically together... but we are one in everysense... we both are not married...but we have asya... Do u know the importance of kid in ur life... kid is not someone to carry ur family line forward... the kid is the symbol of ur love.. the ultimate realization of ur love...may be we both are not married...but our love was pure... It gave us asya... don't u dare deprive urself of this god gift to human...please

A: agree... don't be stubborn... u r right... we r not together... but we have our asya... She made us father and mother... If we don't end up as husband and wife... But we will live proudly and happily as asya parents.

Z: mr khan. Book a honeymoon pack for them... go and enjoy ur life... if u guys are happy in ur life...we will be happy too... ayaan... u still haven't grown up... u and ur stupid ideas.. first it ruined my life and now my sis... grow up will u...

A: where do u want to go...

Ay and H are not answering... but they are not saying no either.

Z: mr.khan... book paris... It is romantic...place... our dream destination...wasnt...

Zoya suddenly realized her... and looked at asad... even he was having the same dreamy smile in his face, afterall zoya being zoya planned a lot of things for their future together... and made sure asad listened to all her small and silly plans.

Ayaan and Humeira were having smile in their face looking at them... but didn't open their mouth. Hopes are slowly starting in everyone heart including Zoya.

Z: mr.khan..will u book it

A: yes I will do..for how many days.. I want ur passports for the visa work and everything... I guess u guy can start next week mostly.

H: but abbu health...

Z: I will look after him..he is my father too.. anyways still u guys come back I will stay... don't worry..

H: stay here till we come back...means... appi don't tell me u r planning to go back to NY..leaving us here...

Z:.i...shutters... she herself is not able to take the decision... her face was showing a lot of confusion... she doesn't know the right decision...

Z: I came with a decision to go back..so I guess I will have to.. I have my work there... I just took a 15 days break to come here...

H: appi u r worried about ur work..what abt jiju and asya...

Z: asya... zoya looks at asad... it was tortured...she couldn't take it anymore

Z: I thought I will go back... but a lot has changed... let me see...

Zoya could sense the hope rising in her loved one face and also hers...it is not that she lived happily in the past 3 years... She was living away from her life...

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