ASYA DADDY PRINCESS.FF continued in the new link in page 1 - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

883

Views

338.3k

Users

109

Likes

3.7k

Frequent Posters

urvisaini thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the next update
898973 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome... you fix everything very wll not like our QH CV... keep it up waiting for next update...
jas91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
i m happy that u used logic here unlike cvs😆
gud job👏
ziya117 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
so beautiful 😃

do continue soon!! 😉
kals82 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part 11.

The sangeet was followed her haldi. Ay and H were made to sit in opp with white screen in between(inspired by IPKND). All the elders applied to the couples and blessed them. At the end one of the elders told that the guy brother and wife should apply haldi for the bride. Asad came forward and and went to zoya and asked for her hand. Zoya was stunned, but asad eyes were telling a lot to zoya... it was slowly dying, and zoya couldn't take it anymore and stretched her hands and they both went together and blessed H and applied haldi on her face, and then to ayaan they did the same. Some of them gossiping but no one minded them. This asad did the nazaruttar with money on ayaan and H and gave the money to poor.

The next day was the wedding, the whole family has assembled. The bridegroom sat behind the screen and he was accompanied by his bro and BILS. They all were eagerly waiting for the bride to come. Then zoya brought humeira along with trio sisters. Asad had eyes only on zoya... ofcourse zoya could feel his eyes. Then the qazi did the ceremony and both of said quboolhai, then everybody congragulated the couples.Zoya kissed H on the forehead and cheeks, and took her to ayaan, she took ayaan hands and placed humi hands in his and asked ayaan to look after his sis cum daughter, for which ayaan assured her that he will.

The whole family was happy, zoya went and hugged her abbu, Z and G were happy looking at a smiling and radiant Humeira. Zoya was happy for her sister that her love has succeded. Then she looked asad... asad could sense what zoya was feeling, he just want to hug her and tell her that she will erase all her pain, his eyes were pleading to her to give him one final chance. Zoya couldn't take it anymore.as moved from there and asad followed her and pulled her into a bone crushing hug. At first zoya was bit hesitant, then she realized this may the last hug she is going to get from her asad, she hugged back..and then pulled back and whispered...I love you Asad... And then moved away.

Asad was in heaven was zoya never said these 3 words to him and never addressed him by his first name. but today she did and she has forgiven him. He was happy and then joined his siblings in the hall.

Zoya came and took H with her, and soon S also joined them. No one wanted to disturb them.

Zoya room:

As all 3 are inside zoya closed the room. H and S looked at her and then the room to see all of Z things are packed.

S: what is this Z

Z: abbu I am going back to NY

S: but why... When ur family is here why do u want to go

Z: I have too... I would have gone without informing u... but I couldn't please understand me...i have too... I need some space and time to forget what all happened in the past 3 months in my life. I know you guys will be there for me... but right now... I don't want to be here... I promise I will be in touch. And in the future I promise I will visit u...please...(z is in tears)

H: appi I understand u... if u want to go... ok... But what about asadjiju...how will he live

Z: H I know it will be tough for him... But he has been living without me for the past 3 months. He will pull through... time heals everything...

H: u really think so...

Z: don't make it tough for me...H

H: ok I wont force u... but be in touch... Don't forget ur daughter...

Z: I will be always in touch... I promise...

H: do u have to leave now...itself.

Z: more I stay... Then it will be tough for me...please H...don't tell anyone there...especial asad... if he talks to me...then I wont be able...leave...

H: then I am going to tell jiju now...do u hold him responsible for what happened

Z holds H by hand and pulls her for a hug...

Z: no ofcourse not... it was destiny H... everytime we dress as bride and groom something goes wrong H.. I just cant take it anymore... I love asad all my life and he will be the only person in my life..but I think we are not for each other...i have to do this... may be asad could move on... I don't know H... but right now I want to be away... I need time... Lot of time...

H:okappi... I will come with uto airport now

Z: no..u stay with ayaan.now. and don't tell anyone... I will go with abbu..ok... I promise I will be there for u always...

Zoya removes tears from H eyes and make her smile and ask her to lead happy married life with ayaan. After H comes down Z and S move towards the back door . as they come in the front to get in the car. Zoya saw a smiling asad standing outside and thanking allah... that was the last image of asad that captured in her heart.

Present:

Zoya was smiling at the H , she became a child playing with asya... but she could also sense some longing in H eyes...i.e also one of the reason zoya came back to Bhopal. She know she has find the reason for the longing in her sis eyes.

As promised Z was in touch with H... she got all the medical reports of H health condition, and consulted with specialist there. She was happy that her heart condition can be cured, and the doctor was going to delhi for a conference after 3 months. She informed all the details to Ay and S and also convinced H. after 3 months H underwent a heart surgery, as much as Z wanted to be there... but she was 7 months pregnant. But she did skped with ayaan the time, but she gave the excuse of new office -no leave to them. She could also see asad there with ayaan and asad was looking after H in every possible way.

Zoya was happy to know asad presence there...deep down she knows he will be there...if H is daughter to her...then he is her father too...she was at peace knowing asad there...bcoz she didn't trust ayaan completely ...bcoz he is still immature. The operation was a success, later she spoke with H too... And H assured her not to worry, and told her asad jiju is here... she is very well taken care of. She knows asad accompanied H for all her post operation treatment, and also to regular check ups too. Z knows H is in perfect health condition...and it has been 3 years since the H was married, but H is yet to give a good news.

As she saw H, she wanted to talk to her about that and called H

H: appi

Z: sit down I want to talk to u

H: ok

Z: yes there a problem... between u and ayaan

H: no appi... Ayaan loves me a lot... and he keeps me happy

Z: so physically is there a problem?

H: I don't get u...appi

Z: it has been 3 years u got married,najma and nikhat have their kids... what abt u and ayaan... it is time and I know u r perfectly healthy after the surgery... so what is the problem.

H: nothing like that appi...but looks away from Z

Zoya sensed something is definitely wrong, so she pulls asya and H towards the hospital and ask ayaan to join them over phone.

Zoya was really fast and she is angry too... and she enters the room to see his father sleeping peacefully holding asad hand. Zoya doesn't know the depth of A and Z relationship but was really happy to see asad caring for her father inspite of what S has done in the past. Asya runs past them and hugs her abbu. Zoya moves outside the room... and was followed by asad with asya. Asya whispers something secretly into asad ears. But asya was adamant...she says nodding her in yes and asad nodding his headin no. zoya saw that but couldn't stop smiling at the father -daughter.

AS: abbu u love me...naa.

A: yeah yeah yeah.

As: then u should do want I asked u...

A: no...asya please

As; yes...we always do that abbu...in NY...so please... i.e the only way..

A:no

As:yes..yes

And she pulls asad closer to zoya and tugs asad to pick her up, zoya was looking at both of them.

AS: abbu now... and she goes and puts one hand around zoya...

As zoya was looking at asya... asad faintly gives a kiss to zoya in her cheek...zoya cheek become pink and turns to look at asad, and asya places another kiss in the other cheek... For which zoya faces turns into smile.

As: see abbu I told u...I know this is what we used to in NY if anyone of us angry the other two of us will give a kiss ... and then anger will fly away. See ammi is smiling now... u keep forgetting abbu... it was u who started it. In ur absence ammi used to give me 2 kisses one from u and one from her, and I also do the same when ammi is angry. Since u r here... U should only give the kiss abbu...

Zoya was feeling smiling at her daughter words... her cheeks were on fire... it was sending sparks through out her body, asad touch always had a effect on her. After 3 years it has still same touch on her. She was overflowing with emotions. Asad was looking at zoya reactions, and was happy that she didn't shout at him...and was mesmersed by zoya reactions.

Next part tomorrow...mostly.. I guess the real serial give some kind of inspiration to write.. planning to quit watch... but blame KSG... He is not there I wouldn't have watched this crap.from the beginning... i also feel justified with the 3 year gap in my story.. after seeing situation zoya was put through yday...poor baby...useless brothers...

Anyways guys.. enjoy reading and thank you for ur comments... It is nice...

Edited by kals82 - 12 years ago
DevikaRavish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
2 parts in a single day.. good ya !! I loved the way both Asad and Zoya performed the haldi ceremony to Ayaan and Humeira.. together as a couple... and also the emotions going through both of them.. 👏
kals82 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

2 parts in a single day.. good ya !! I loved the way both Asad and Zoya performed the haldi ceremony to Ayaan and Humeira.. together as a couple... and also the emotions going through both of them.. 👏



i wrote this in one part... but was long so made them into 2..
thanks... for ur comments... i have read ur story... they are really nice...
sona_naksh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
two updates in a day ...wowww ...liked dem
update soon .
nilusoni thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow back to back parts loved it
continue soon
Applef thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
awww... asya is so cute...

she is the only one that can reduce the gap between asad and zoya..

humeira's part was lovely..

update soon..

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish · 10 months ago

What a brilliant start to 2025, with Karan and Surbhi collaborating for ZOUK Bags for Valentines!💘 👜 Sharing photoshoot pictures here:

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".