FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 40

I am sooo going to miss this story:( but I LOVED how you brought the video back and reminded not only Zoya but us the readers as well about how this story started. The video has made me wanna go back and read the story from the beginning.

Your "mangalpur madness" had me hooked to your writing and this story just affirmed your brilliance as a writer. Looking eagerly to your next story because I know I will love it just like I loved your two other stories. Hurry and write more cause we are waiting:)

Aillah khatam b hogaya AWww😭

Beautifull ending, hope u write another ff

Beautiful---you began when everything was brown and kept us enthralled while everything around us was 'goinggreen'...the entire country is now different shades of green thanks to the monsoons!give an epilogue please...

as always awesome update!

Originally posted by: mochhug

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AHH!!! I was sooo happy!!! Such a fabulous update!!!

Sorry for my lack of normal enthusiasm for the last update. Actually half of it was that i was recovering from Jahapana's Don Juan behaviour, I mean was that REALLY him!? The way he so authoritatively pulled her in for a kiss. No questions. And to shut her up 😆 How I wish a man would shut me up like that ☺️ And the other half was that I was feeling shitty about something.. but I'm trying to look at the bright side. 😊

AND OMG WHEN HE PUT HER HAND ON HIS HEART!!?!!!?!?!! I LOVED THAT!?!?!?!! I SO WANT THAT TO HAPPEN TO ME. Sach Goingreen Ji, aapne KAMAL ka update diya tha 😳 And THIS is the comment I should've left for you 😃😆

Now, on to the final (😭) part.

I agree with rutu ji 😆 I could hear Bol Na Halke Halke playing in my head as I read this update, especially when they were dancing in the pouring rain. So sweetly done.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE that you showed the recording of their night! Silly Zoya, still doubting what he means after feeling how she makes him feel. But I love that he just let the video speak for itself, and how she instantly remembered the WHOLE night. Their adorable moments, their banter, their drunken and funny state. Such a nice way to bring back the innocent yet passionate and sweet naivety they went through before realizing what they meant to each other.

Simply brilliant.

Please please please please please please please do another FF. I beg you! Not now. But SOON. Please

1st bold: too true.. i kept wanting to ask you about that (RL got in the way and i didn't have time to leave many comments ) but you brought it back so beautifully
2nd bold: I'm with Monica 👍🏼 another ff pls. it doesn't have to be right away- take few hours off 😆- ok fine, a day or two😉 . honestly though, with the not so nice (i'm trying to be polite 🤓) track on the show, we NEED some good ffs. think of the good you'll do. ffs are the only thing stopping some from storming CVs office and...well you know. it's just good karma😃. btw that goes for you too Monica 😉

Originally posted by: rutu83

1st bold: too true.. i kept wanting to ask you about that (RL got in the way and i didn't have time to leave many comments ) but you brought it back so beautifully
2nd bold: I'm with Monica 👍🏼 another ff pls. it doesn't have to be right away- take few hours off 😆- ok fine, a day or two😉 . honestly though, with the not so nice (i'm trying to be polite 🤓) track on the show, we NEED some good ffs. think of the good you'll do. ffs are the only thing stopping some from storming CVs office and...well you know. it's just good karma😃. btw that goes for you too Monica 😉

Alas! It all ended. But of course it has to end so that we can hope for the beginning of a new ff. Ending is brilliantly perfect, green! I had the feeling of watching a lovely romantic movie, going mushy and sighing wistfully.thank u so much of being our polestar in these gloomy nights(of actual asya land)

i m sad ...its d last part ...:'(:-( i want it more ...

but wat a story ...aapke asad ne to imran hashmi ko bhi peeche chod diya i guess ...well i luvd it ..m in luv wid ur asad ...

plzzz cum up wid a new story ...

Ohh my my Asad ka phone toh kamaal hi h!!😲
Apne aap sab record kar leta h 🤣

I loved this so so much 😃

And and this ended 😭
It feels so bad when something so good ends (:

Koi na Hope to se you with some new story very soon 😎



Ps. Aapke us kiss ka kissa humein taumar yaad rahega 😳 😆