Res Unres
Can i just say that this was the first time that i wasn't happy while reading one of your updates😭no no hold your horses you were amazing as usual but all i could think was that this was the last chapter and made me so so so sad😭😭i mean yes i knew that this was coming and i thought i would be ohk well not really ohk but i would be able to handle this better but no i took it worse than my expectations😭😭sorry for the rant but i really felt sad...the first time that i read the update all i could think was that this is the last update but no worries i read it a second time and enjoyed it like hell...
now well coming to the update need i say it again it was amazing like always
Asad had pulled away a while ago, and he had even let go of her hand, but Zoya hadn't moved at all. She kept her palm pressed against Asad's chest, as she marvelled at the speed of his heartbeats. She looked up after a while, to make eye contact with Asad's smouldering gaze
I loved how you showed that asad pulled away but zoya still had her hands on his chest listening to his heartbeats and looking into his eyes in order to find the assurance that she wasn't just an experiment for him that he didn't remain unaffected by their making out sessions that just like he meant a lot to her she meant a for him too...beautiful significance of a little gesture...
I loved how you showed that they saw the video and finally came to know all what happened that eventful night...
The sound of thunder erupted from the phone.
I love how you never let your thunder get away from the story...when the thunder could be heard in the background it was a reminder of the beautiful phase that asad nd zoya shared and i loved how you brought that out
"Yeh bhi aapke wajeh se Miss Farooqui. Aap agar mere zindagi mein nahi aati, toh shayad mujhe kabhi bhi pata hi nahi chalta ke mere seene mein patthar nahi, dil hai,"
I am so glad that they both heard that i think that was the first time that asad explicitely expressed in words how much zoya affected him and how she melted him
"Sab kuch. And also the fact that nothing happened between us that night, because we'd just fallen asleep next to each other after that,"
These lines are so significant...it shows that since now they know nothing happened between them that night any decision that they made from now on will completely be their own and nothing something forced or taken out of guilt
"So that's why you showed me this? So we can go and tell Phuphi that nothing happened? And we won't need to go on with this nakli nikaah,"
OMG zoya how oblivious and naive are you?women they don't believe until they hear the exact words right
"You're right, we won't need to go on with this nakli nikaah. Because whether we tell Ammi or not, having a nakli nikaah is totally out of the question. Jumme ko nikaah toh hoga. Par nakli nahi, asli nikaah,"
Yes finally finally finally...no more wo actually no more talking in riddles no more confusion asad speaks his heart out with clarity and with no hesitation...i am proud of you my asad miyan and the confidence with which he said that ki nikaah hoga was amazing...zoya may not feel confident about asad's feelings for her but asad had no doubt...beautiful beautiful beautiful
And he drops a kiss again nd this time zoya captures his lips with hers confirming that asad's confidence in his propoal😳and she laces her fingers with his never to part them again😳
A drop of water fell on Zoya's cheek, and another fell on Asad's nose, making them instinctively pull away from each other and look up at the sky. A flash of lightning danced across the sky, as a roll of thunder followed in quick succession.
Can i just say i loved how you brought the rain nd the thunder and the lightening back...asya's monsoon monsoon is here to stay forever...this makes zoya's lines in the previous update about monsoon ending even more significant...she thought that the phase that they have enjoyed so far has ended but it didn't it is here to stay forever and ever
Yet, neither or them made any attempt to get back indoors, choosing instead to reach for each other and involve themselves in yet another kiss, as water trailed down their faces. Why should they hide from the monsoon, when the monsoon is the reason they had gotten where they were now?
They did learn that there is no point hiding from something that will stay with them forever...can i say i have never loved thunder more than i did in your story
Asad gathered Zoya closer to his body, as they found warmth in each others company, kissing and laughing as the thunder continued to roar in the background. If there was one thing they knew now for sure, it was that life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain.
@Italics you never let go of thunder do you...but well i love that...that thunder in asya's life their passion,their attraction their love is here to stay always with them...they will be together though good time and through storms dancing together and making the best of it...perfect lines to end a beautiful story...it couln't have been better
Sorry i went a little overboard with my comment didn't I?but what could i do i just couldn't stop myself it was like that the thoughts were just flowing into my mind😳and the beautiful lines and the fact that i could dissect each of those and understand what each and every word meant didn't make it easier😳
I hope i did justice to this wonderful story of yours...i am going to miss it like hell..i will miss you n your updates your updates a little more nah i was just joking i am going to miss you a lot too and your till next time makes me a little happy that iu think i will see you soon..please say i am right
neways as promised a long comment infact a very long one now chalo i want a long wala reply
Love you🤗
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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