FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9)

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
Green ji,
Whenever me and Monica spam update will not come after we go online you post it and both of us cant res our spots. 😕

Waise bhi Update was soo <3 ☺️

Aur Jaldi update karna aur spamming increase karna padega. 😆

-Nisha

Hahaha sorry Nisha Ji!! I hadn't written a word of my update when you and Monica were spamming :p Anyway glad you liked it!! (:

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Okay...STOP...I did NOT expected this update. 😲

Dekhiye an update is always more than welcome lekin aisa update... Its after 10pm here and I am reading this super romantic wala update and I am getting all kinds of gutter feelings and thoughts.☺️ Aise mein how can I sleep?!

Maybe you need a reminder (I also need a reminder...) 😆

"Paas nahi aane deta? Agar yeh paas nahi hai, toh aap hi bataye ke paas kya hota hai," Asad replied delicately, before closing the gap between their lips yet again, taking her upper lip between his in a soft kiss. (Highly romantic...blushing like hell. Kaash we had a visual of this scene) ☺️

Stop kissing me okay, it messes with my brain (Don't stop kissing her. Yes, it messes with my brains as well and it gets me into this gutter wala mood, but NO don't stop kissing her)

she simply couldn't resist him if he was going to kiss her like that (Seriously chick, you have to be inhuman if someone can resist being kissed like that. I can't for sure) 😆😳

the strong and rapid beating of his heart against her skin. This couldn't be the response of a person who was unaffected... right? (I loved this!!! That gesture was sooo romantic. Loved the way you chose to make her understand by a gesture rather than in words...haiyee) 😳

Green ji, seriously. This part is one of my favorites. Romantic, cute, sweet and light.

It really made me feel better. Aur kya suna chahti ho...blushing like hell, a huge smile on my face while reading, prepares me for dreaming about AsYa etc etc.

Thank you sooo much. 🤗Tum saach mooch mein ek bahut achi mood mein thi. Allah kare aisa mood baar baar aate rahe... 😆

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Hey!

Read the last 2 updates together..and I loved it!!

Part 33- I so miss the coffee scenes in QH!!

Part34- So many kisses in this update?? *faints* ...So glad that Asad finally knows what is bothering Zoya!

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
Hey!
Read the last 2 updates together..and I loved it!!
Part 33- I so miss the coffee scenes in QH!!
Part34- So many kisses in this update?? *faints* ...So glad that Asad finally knows what is bothering Zoya!

Don't know how long I can keep going... today's episode was another step closer to me reaching my limit ): Glad you liked my updates anyway haha.

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: goingreen

Don't know how long I can keep going... today's episode was another step closer to me reaching my limit ): Glad you liked my updates anyway haha.

HAHA..I understand...I'm still hoping Zoya starts speaking, knocks some sense into everyone and shut them all!!..I think I can keep going until this Nikah remains invalid!!😆

btw..I missed your story so much all week..I thought you would have 4-5 updates already..😆..but looks like you had a busy week😃

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

nice one.
Update nxt part asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

HAHA..I understand...I'm still hoping Zoya starts speaking, knocks some sense into everyone and shut them all!!..I think I can keep going until this Nikah remains invalid!!😆

btw..I missed your story so much all week..I thought you would have 4-5 updates already..😆..but looks like you had a busy week😃

Yeah I did haha crazy busy week! And same here, as long as the marriage is not real and is just a charade till Nikhat gets married, I'm fine. But if they make Ayaan and Zoya get married for real... god I don't even know what to say haha.

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seeyali

@seeyali

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

awesome update...waiting for the next part

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Do you have any idea how perfect you are with this kiss scenes.. I remember the Mangalpur Madness Asya in jungle kissing like their is not tomorrow. You depict the madness and passion which a kiss brings with it. Madness and passion of Asad to possess her as his, Madness and passion of zoya to submit her to him, how mad she is at him still letting him have his own way with her and enjoying it. Well, you are best with whatever you right but I give you a A++ for intense and passionate romance. That makes me love your stories like hell. Because may be somewhere I am a freaking and crazy romantic person..

Love it...

Continue soon.

Dee