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06.03.2013

The Bhaang Night
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Asad and Zoya entered the room from oppsite doors after changing their wet dress. Asad was wearing a black punjabi, and Zoya was wearing a pink saree. Zoya started laughing

Z- Mr. Khan black shirt! (Zoya said laughingly)
A- Aap itna haas ku rahe hai?

Z- Kaun? mei?. No Mr. Khan aap hass rahe hai!

(Asad also started laughing)

A- Aapki buri company ka asar hai.

Z- Come on mr. khan. Haasna koi buri baat hai. Bilkul bhi nehi.

A- Miss Farroqui aapko acche aur bure ki bich koi fark hi nehi pata. Koi tameej hi nehi aapme.

Z- oh really?

A- haa

Z- aur aapko kya lagta hai ke aap perfect hai. yeh six pack bananese kuch nehi hota. ok? Aur bhi bohot saare cheesein hona chahiye. Insaan ki paas saabse pehle toh dil hona chahiye. Dusroki feelings ki value honi chahiye. Jo aapmein bilkul nehi hai.

A- aap dusro ki feelings ki bohot jyada fikr karte hai. aaoko aapki haadein najar nehi aate.

Z- Mr. Khan aapko bhi naa apki ego ki aage kuch bhi najar nehi aata. Aapko toh aapki ego ke aage aapki ammi ki feelings bhi najar nehi aati hai.

A- Aur aapko kisiki ammi aur abbu ke feelings ke baare mei pata kaise chalega? Aap ki toh ammi abbu hai hi nehi.

(Zoya was shocked sad and Asad scared for a second. But Zoya agin laughed at he next moment.)

Z- Mr. Khan aapko sharam nehi aati? Kisise itni mean baat karte hue!

A- Aapko toh sharam ki baare mei baat hi nehi karni chahiye, aap nehayethi besharam larki hai.

Z- Mei besharam hu. Toh aap nehayet hi cold blooded hai. Aap ke sine mein dil nehi hai. Dil ki jaga ek bara sa paththar hai.

A- Aur usi paththar se mei aapka saar phorunga. Tabhi aap mera picha chorenge.

Z- Mujhe maarna itna aasan nehi hai Mr. Khan. Aur aapko pata hai mei toh aapni smile se hi kisiko maar sakti hu.

A- Rubbish!

Z- Rubbish nehi Mr. Khan. Aapko pata hai jab mein smile karti hu naa, toh dimple parta hai. Yeh dekhiye. Aur iss dimple se mei kisika bhi katil kar sakti hu.
(she showed her dimple with finger. Asad looked at her mesmerizedly. He stood up and came to touch her dimple. But she backed away and turned. Then outside the rain started and A-Z danced on Bol naa halke halke.)
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After the dance they were back to the room

Asad got a call from Ramu.

A- Hello, kaun ramu?

Z- Ramu

A- Oh, Ramu. accha acha.

Z- kya?

A- tyre fix ho gaya. Thik hai.

(Ayaan locked the door from outside.Asad tried to open the door but that did not open)
Z- Kya hua? Darwaja khol nehi raha.

A- Nehi. Abhi toh khola tha.
Z- Agar darwaja bandh ho gaya toh phone kaha se aya?
A- Bohot ajeeb baat hai.
Z- Bilkul bhi ajeeb baat nehi hai Mr. Khan. Kiyuki meine toh yeh plan banaya Ayaan ke saath milke taaki aap subha court na jaa paye. Mein bohot chalak hu na. (Asad was shocked for a moment but again laughed in the next moment)
Z- Mr. Khan, aaj meine aapko saab kuch bata diya. Nehi? Ki aap cold-blooded hai, aap weird hai aur aap paththar dil hai aur aap kitni egoistic hai. Mr. Khan humne ek dusreko saab saach saach kiu bata diya?
A- Miss Farooqui, haar kiyu ka jawab nehi hota.
Z- Aisa kuch nehi hai Mr. Khan. Mujhse puchiye. Mere paas iss duniya ki hu aar kiyu ka jawab hai. Trust me.
A- haa?
Z- haa.
A- Toh aap mujhe bataiye, agar aap itni badtameej hai- toh mujhe aap itni acchi kiyu lagti hai. (Zoya laughed listening this)
A- Seriously Miss Farooqui, meine aapse jyada weird larki kabhi nehi dekhi. Toh phir aap mei itni kaashish kiyu hai? Jaab aap mujhe itni napasand hai toh mere khwabopein aapke saaye kiyu hai? Kiyu meri tanhaiyon mein khalak daalti hai aap? Kiyu mere andheromein roshni bankar aati hai?
(Zoya and Asad were lost in each others eyes and words for some times in the thought. Then Zoya started to laugh suddenly and Asad also started to laugh again. She said laughingly)
Z- Mr. Khan iska jawab bohot simple hai! Yeh saab is liye kiyuki aap mujhe pasand karte hai. (Asad also laughed listening her answer and hi-fived).
Z- Aur aapko ek baat batau? Mei bhi aapko bohot pasand karti hu.
A- Kya? (they again hi-fived laughingly)
A- (Asad tried to compose himself and said) You know Miss Farooqui? Khwabo mein aur hakeekat mei bohot fark hote hai.
Z- Haa?
A- Haa. Aap chahe mujhe jitni bhi acche laage? Hakikat yeh hai ki aap meri liye bilkul acchi larki nehi hai. Mere liye toh kya? Aap kisiki bhi perfect wife, ya perfect bahu nehi ban sakti. Seriously. Mei apne jesbatomei beh nehi sakta hu. Kiyuki aap mere liye, meri jindagi ki liye aur mere ghar ke liye, bilkul misfit hai.
(Zoya looked with disbelief for some seconds and again broke into laughter and Asad also with her)
Z- Mr. Khan, you are so mean!
A- You are misfit.
Z- You are so mean Mr. Khan!
A- You are misfit
Z- You are so mean.
A- Misfit
Z- you are mean.
(Thus laughingly she put her head on his shoulder and drifted off to sleep. Asad also looked at her for a few moments and went to sleep at that position together)
Edited by laizu - 12 years ago
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Really nice post!👏 I could see the scene playing in my mind. Thank you so much for an awesome thread.😃
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Thank you so much...aah these wonderful scenes of AsYa 😳 Looking forward to your updates 👍🏼
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Asad-Zoya Scene 1

30th October 2012
First Meeting

Dedicated to: Ani-asya
Asad saw Zoya in the dargah for the first time. She was praying and crying silently in the same time. The black shawl fell down from her head in a wind and Asad saw her beautiful face. He was mesmerized with his beauty. He looked away from her. It is not good to look at a woman like that. He said his prayer. And again looked for the girl but she was not there. She left.

Asad was driving his car on the road and almost dashed Zoya. She was in a red wedding dress. She fell down in the ground with a whirl. And a worried Asad got down to check whether she is hurt. Here again he was mesmerized with her beauty while she was busy to take care of her hand that she thought got scratched from falling.

A- Are you ok

Z- Yeah

She removed her tears from eyes. Asad kept on staring at her.

She looked at him for the first time. Asad looked away and started picking up her fallen things of bag. Zoya got up angrily and said

Z- Disappointed?

Asad looked back with surprise and stood up. "jee?" he could only say that. Zoya put her dupatta back on shoulder and said angrily,

Z- Aapne itni koshich ki mujhe marneki. Phir bhi mei bach gayi.

A- Sorry?

Z- Aapko gari chalane ki tameej nehi hai toh gari kiyu chalate hai aap?

Asad looked for a moment disbeliefly to absorb the words of Zoya.

A- Aapko sarak par chalne ki tameej nehi hai toh ghar par kiyu nehi rehti hai aap?

Z- Aapko baat karneke tameej nehi hai toh khamosh kiyu nehi rehte hai aap?

Asad stared for a moment again with a scowl and disbelief

A- Mujhse aaj tak kisine aisi baat nehi ki

Z- Tabhi aap itne badtameej hai.

A- Aap meri baat suniye, bohothi...

He raised his finger towards her while saying this but could not finish his line. She took the small bottle from his hand which he took from ground while taking things of her bag.

Z- peeper spray (she said showing him that). Kaali meerchi ka spray. Rakhna parta hai larkiyoko apni hifajat ke liye.

Too boys in motorbike just then passed before Zoya giving a look to her. Zoya went back to take back things to her things from ground into bag.

Z- "I was better of in Newyork" she continued her grumble.

Z- Newyork mein hi thik thi mei. Yeh jaga hi aisi. Jo bhi larki ko dekhti hai baas gurta hi rehta hai. Larkiya apni protection kare toh kaise kare.

A- Agar larkiya apne najre niche rakhkar chale toh unhe aur kisiki hifajat ki jarurat nehi padegi. Aur ghar se aisi tamasha ban kar niklenge toh sab waise hi dekhegi.

Asad was leaving saying this but Zoya stood up and looked back at him

Z- Excuse me! Aap jaise log saare restrictions larkiyo par hi kiyu lagate ho? Agar isse protection ki jorurat hai toh jorur yehi kuch karti ho. Agar iske saath kuch galat hua hai toh jorur issine kuch kiya hoga. Iss country mei saari

restrictions larkiyo par hi kiyu hai. Don't dress up, yeh maat karo, saajo maat, yaha maat jao, waha maat jaao, Allah Miya what's wrong with this country.

A- Jisse aap pabandi kehrehihai usse hum tehjeeb kehte hai. Numaish pashchim ka ada hai, sharam purab ka gehna, iss mulk mei auratein issi gehne se saajti hai. aapki nikah ki din mei aap se behes nehi karna chahti hu mei.

Saying this he turned to leave.

Z- Aaj nikah nehi hai mera.

Asad turned around and looked at her and her dress up questioningly

Z- Aab aap yeh judgmental look dena bandh kijiye. Yaha par jisse dekho judgement pass karne mei tola rehta hai!

A- Agar aapko iss mulk se itni problem hai to wapas Newyork kiyu nehi chale jaate hai aap?

Z- Allah Miya What's wrong with you? Aap traffic police hai ki logoko yeh batayenge ki unhe kaha aana hai kaha jana hai? And waise bhi mujhe koi shokh nehi hai yaha rehne ka. Ek nehayet joruri kaam se ayi hu, hotei chali jaungi.

A- Bada ehsan hoga apka iss mulk par.

Zoya looked with wide eyes with shock at him and then shrugged. They glared at each other and went to opposite directions.

Edited by laizu - 11 years ago
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Great effort.. Nice asya dialogues.. Tfs..
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5th November 2013
Second meeting with flower cart
Dedicated to: chibi_deea, love_kash
Zoya roaming on Market Streets where Asad) is passing by driving fast his car,leading to struck with Zoya & she slips on Road while A kart full of Marigold Flowers turns over her covering her fully. Asad hurrily comes out from Car to see situation.
A-Are you ok?
Z-Allah miya what's wrong with...(They saw each other and remembered their first meeting.
There starts a Flashback of Asad-Zoya's last fight,both shocked.
Z- aap? aap mujhe follow kar rahe hai?
He says SORRY & pay's money to flower vendor as his flowers were at loss.he's in hurry to go home!

Z- call the police please. Yeh aadmi repeat offender hai. inhone pehle bhi mujhe marne ki koshish ki thi. aur aab yeh phir mujhe marna chahte hai.
A- meri baat suniye.
Z- paas maat ayiega. dur rahiye mujhse. i know ur type very well. shaka se hi racthurus lagte hai aap. larki dekhi nehi ki uski piche lag gaye. you know what? thanks to thic peper spray. kamse kam mere piche toh nehi ayenge aap.
A- aapko apki hefajat ke liye peper spray ki jorurat nehi hai. aapki meethi awaj hi kaafi hai.
Z- being sarcastic and all. what do you mean. kya lagta hai aapko, chikh rahe hu mein yahape? chilla rahi hoon? (she started coughing. Asad gave her water. She took that and instantly returned)
Z- apne pass hi rakhiye. agar mei mar bhi rahi hungi na tab bhi apki haathose pani nehi lungi mei.
A turned to go
Z- (to all) arre aap inhe kuch kehti kiyu nehi? aapki samne itni tej gari chala rahe thein!
old man- gari toh tum tej chala rahe thei,
A- lekin mujhe ghar jaldi pouchna hai. gharwale intejar kar rahe hai.
Old man (to z)- gharwale intejar kar rahe hai
Z- hamare ghar mei toh jaise koi intejar hi nehi kar raha jo yeh hamari upar gari chala de!
Old man- yeh bhi saach hai.
A- dekhiye galati meri thi. mei maafi mang chuka hu. mujhe jane di jiye. jaldi mei hu.
Old man- jara jaldi mein hai yeh.
Z- lekin aap inhe... by the way aap bich mei kiyu bol rahe hai? mei inse direct personal larai kar sakti hu. thank you so much.and by the way you (to asad)? aap tabse mera picha kiyu kar rahe hai? iss country mei kya sare aise hi hai?
A- mei jantahu aap new york se aye hai. lekin hai toh hindustani. aapko iss mulk se itni (he stepped forward and Z brought out pepper spray)
Z- stay away of me. meine kaha na apko paas maat aiye. Aap (she tried to spray the bottle but that didn't work.) Allah miya what's wrong with it? (she sprayed it towards her face to check and it went to her eyes) ooouuuwwwh. plz help. pani please. jaldi pani koi pani dega. (Asad gave water to her hand from the water bottle. She sprinkled the water on face) Some more plz. (She then opened her eyes and saw Asad and shouted) Aapne paani kiu diya? meine aapse kaha tha na agar mei maar bhi jau tab bhi aapse paani nehi lungi. samajhte nehi aap ekbaar. (she said that while Asad handed over the water bottle to her and she took that from him)
A- Incredibly foolish.
(they went to opposite direction. Z saw the water bottle in her and and hit her head with that and said 'awwwf' in pain.)
Edited by laizu - 12 years ago
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I love the dialogs. Thanks for taking the time to write them down! Awesome work 👏
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amazing thread.thanks for writing down the dialogues.
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7th November 2013
Clash in the mall

Dedicated to: chibi_deea

Asad at the mall to buy gift for Najma's prof and he gets a call frm ayaan

7th November 2013
Clash in the mall

Ay- slamalekum, bhai

A- walaikumussalam.

Ay- bhai yeh towing wale meri bike leke chale gaye. chorwane kaha jana parega.

A- lakewale police station ke pass. kiyu bike kiyu le gaye?

Ay- bhai ye sab uss larki ke wajah se hua hai

A- koi larki tumhari bike kiyu chura legi?

Ay- nehi nehi, woh meri bike nehi chalarahi thi, woh toh paidal thi, chala toh mei raha tha lekin jis raaste woh jaa rahi thi na woh rastahi kachcha tha. isiliye bike chorkar paidal meine uska picha kiya.

A- beta aise larkio ka picha karti rahoge toh aj toh police tumhari bike lekar gayi. Allahne vhaha toh ekdin police tumhe toe karke leke jayegi

Ay- aap galat samajh rahe hai. yeh woh wali larki hai jiski wajah se us din majar pe gunde mere piche pare hue thei. unki wajah se aapko bhi churri lagi thi. Aur meine apne apko promise kiya tha ki jaha dikh gayi naa woh mujhe chorungi nehi usse.

A- Phir?

Ay- Phir kya hai bhaijaan. piche nikal gaya mei uske.

A- phir

Ay- phir kya bhaijan, saamne jake dekha woh nehi koi aur thi

A- accha hua. ajke jamana ke larkio se dur raho toh hi accha hai. uss roj jab uss larki ki wajah se woh saab hua tha, ussin di ek larki mere gari ki saamne aa gayi thi. bohot hi badtameej larki thi.

Ay- Bhaijaan aapko toh baas ek hi baar mili na! mujhe toh phir se repeat telecast dikha diya. aur aj ussiki wajah se phir gunde mere piche par gaye.

A- Ajeeb baat hai jiss larki ka mei jikr kar raha tha woh mujhe dobara mili thi, aur phir se tamasha kiya tha usne.

Ay- meriwali toh musibat hai, nehi nehi pareshani hai. Magar Allah kasam kya khubsurat pareshani hai bhaijaaan. waise aapki wali kaisi hai?

A- pata nehi.

Ay- pata nehi kya hai hota haibhaijaan. do baar mili hai aap unse.

A- meine kaha na pata nehi.

Ay- Khair jo bhi ho meri wali toh khatarnaak hai.

As- Kya meriwali meriwali laga rakkha hai.

Ay- haha

A- kya hua

Ay- kuch nehi bhaijaan aapki mukh se meriwali bohot bara cute lagta hai. dobara boliye na.

A- ayaan bekar ki baatein bandh karo aur jao apki bike pick up karo

Ay- mei dua karungi bhaijaan ki aapko aapki wali mil jaye.
(Just then Z dashed with A. Her icecream fell on groun. They looked at each other with surprised look.)

A- Aap yaha bhi?

Z- what do you mean yaha bhi? aap mujhe follow kar rahe hai na?

A- mujhe toh lag raha hai aap mujhe follow kar rahe hai.

Z- oh really? Mei aapko follow kar rahe ho? Aapne apni shakal dekhi hai aaine mein? Aapko sarak pe toh kya kabhi twitter pe bhi follow nehi karungi. and by the way yeh mall hai. Yaha pe mere lawa hazzaro log aye hai. Jo I guess aapko follow nehi kar rahe hai. Aapne kam se aye hai. aur mei bhi apne kaam se ayi hu. aapni api ke kiye gift lena hai mujhe.

A- Toh jaake aapna kaam kijiye. Mujhe ghurna bandh kijiye.

Z- excuse me! mei aapko ghur rahi hu? oh yeah, exactly mei aapko ghur rahi hu. Kiyuki isse pehle mei bagar dimaag ki jinda insaan dekha hi nehi.

A- aap meri baat suniye.
(he stepped forwarded to her. Z brought out pepper spray from bag and showed him)

A- yeh pepper spray ka achcha tamasha hai aapka. dekhiye mujhse dur rahiye.

Z- oh really! mujhe bhi koi shokh nehi hai aapke pass aaneka. aapne kya socha tha, ki akeli larki hai, US se ayi hai, iska yahape kaunsi contacts honge? mere yaha pe bohot saare contacts hai. in fact yaha ke sabse sharif aur ijjatdar logo ki ghar pe ruki hu mei.

A- Jiske ghar pe aap rukey hai woh ijjatdar aur sharif yeh manna mere liye thora mushkil hai.

Z- aapne sabko aapne jaise samajh rakkha hai? kabhi unke ghar ayiye toh aapko pata chlegi ki bare log kaise hote hai! in fact woh apko apne ghar toh ghusne nehi denge. Toh bahar se hi dekh li jiye ga. dur dur se.

A- Jis ghar me aap reh rehi hai uski tarag murke dekhna bhi nehi chahunga.

Z- Good for you. Kiyuki waise bhi woh aap jaise logoko aapni ghar ki andar ghusne bhi nehi dete,

A- Allah Hafiz.

(They turned around and went to opposite directions)
Edited by laizu - 12 years ago

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