~ AsYa(KaBhi) Scenes Dialogues ~EID update 29July14 pg104,105 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Everybody giving their takes on love was a very good scene. I enjoyed it a lot.
I understand why you decided to stop.
Thank you so much for the scene you've posted ! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Everybody giving their takes on love was a very good scene. I enjoyed it a lot.

I understand why you decided to stop.
Thank you so much for the scene you've posted ! 🤗


Thank you so much for being here in this post throughout when I posted all them 🤗
I really loved to write and post them. Actually I am still writing them and saving them in my personal file. Once I have started I could not stop writing them.
I wish so that I can write all the scenes till end. 😳
Edited by laizu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: laizu


Thank you so much for being here in this post throughout when I posted all them 🤗
I really loved to write and post them. Actually I am still writing them and saving them in my personal file. Once I have started I could not stop writing them.
I wish so that I can write all the scenes till end. 😳

I enjoy reading your posts. They bring back good memories.
I imagine you must have worked hard to write everything down and I appreciate your work. And if you enjoy writing and it makes you happy you shouldn't stop. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Laizu please don close them... i love reading the dialogues.. you are doing fabulous job... i din not know you are regularly updating the thread... as you din notify it on title... also you can do it like FF update.. whenever you update pm whoever are interested... thus you will get more readers... i am so interested... you are doing fabulous job... as ZoYaan happening... this will be cherry on top for AsYa fans... thanks and plz think on it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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came thru dis post..
amazing post..
gud wrk/loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

Laizu please don close them... i love reading the dialogues.. you are doing fabulous job... i din not know you are regularly updating the thread... as you din notify it on title... also you can do it like FF update.. whenever you update pm whoever are interested... thus you will get more readers... i am so interested... you are doing fabulous job... as ZoYaan happening... this will be cherry on top for AsYa fans... thanks and plz think on it...



Hey -Yaariyan- I thought over your words and decided to reopen it. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. And thanks for liking my work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
16th November 2012
Baking a cake first time in Khan Mansion


Asad and Dilshad comes back to house from Dargah visit.

A- Ammi aapko thora aaram kar lena chahiye. You need to have a quiet peacful day. Ghar pe sukun se... (He stopped in midway. There was a mess around dining kitchen area). Yeh kya hai?

D- Pata nehi! Najma aur Zoya toh college gaye huye hai.

A- Phir yeh sab kya hai.

(Just then Zoya came out from behind the table with something in her hand.

Z- Mil gaya! (:D)
(She was wearing an apron and there was flour in her face. And she noticed that Asad and Dilshad are back)

Z- Hey (:D)

D- Yeh sab kya hai Zoya?

Z- M. A. (:D)

D- M. A. ?

Z- MashaAllah

D- Haa. Mei bhul gayi thi.

Z- (she went towards the oven) you know what meine cake banaya hai. (she took out the

cake and showed them)
Here, yummy cake.

D- Yeh, cake hai?

Z- Yes, of course yeh cake hai. Meine khud banaya itni mehnat karke. thoda sa kam baaki hai. Woh mei recipe dekhke complete kar leti hu. don't worry. (she went near her ipad on table) Yeh sleep mode mei chala gaya. wait. (she said her password to parrot of ipad which the parrot immitated.)

Z- la

Parrot- la

Z- la

parrot- la

Z- lalalala-lah

Parrot- lalalala-lah

(Asad and Dilshad looked at each other )

Zoya solved their confusion

Z- Mera password hai :D

A- Lagta hai aaj quiet day possible nehi hai (saying this to Dilshad he left for his room)

After sometime Asad came out of his room and saw Zoya and Dilshad in an emotional hug

A- aa-ahem (he coughed for their attention)

A- agar aap sabka yeh khatam ho gaya toh kya mujhe ek cup coffee mil sakta hai plz.

D- sure

Z- (to Asad) aap bhi cake khaiye naa. infact aapko toh meethi ki bohot jorurat hai

A- (Asad ignored her) ammi, yeh sab saaf kar dijiyega plz.

Z- (but zoya continued) no, I am serious. Agar aap kuch meetha khayenge naa toh aapko inn choti choti cheezo se problem nehi hogi. well issi baat pe ek sher arz hai.
Baato mein ho mithas toh lagta hai banda nek
Baato mein ho mithas toh lagta hai banda nek
karwi baatein bhul jaiye (she took the cake in hand)
Have some chocolate cake (she offered the cake to Asad)
(she then noticed) but chocolate sauce kaha hai?

(Dilshad smiled at her antics)

Z- Oh its okay. Mein room mei dekhke aati hoon.

(Zoya left for her room. Asad crossed the table immidiately to reach to Dilshad and said)

A- Ammi I can't take this anymore.

D- Asad, please. uss bechari ko...

A- Please, I beg of you usse bechari maat kahiye. Please iss Miss New York, hoity toity ko...

(Asad couldn't finish, coz Zoya again showed up there with her chattering)

Z- Hey phoopi, mere room mei bhi na chocolate sauce mil nehi rahe hai. uhuhu :( kabhi kabhi na mein cheezein rakhkein bhul jaati hoon. abhi mujhe yaad hi nehi aaraha hai woh meine kaha rakkhi. (Asad left in the meantime to escape her blabbering) Aap bhi mere help karenge please.

D- Sure

Z- yeah (she sighed)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot for reopening 🤗 add update page no on title too so that everyone knows you are updating regularly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
haha that scene was one worth watching :) i simply enjoyed the cake scene a lot

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