Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare I (Thread 2 link - Pg 151) - Page 7

Great Start. Plz pm me when you continue

nice concept... looking forward to it

Beautiful concept. I am in.

I know you update at Noe pace. And you've never disappointed by making us wait for a long time. But I am anxious to see how Dr.Asad Ahmed Khan turns out. So please hum par thoda rahem kar. UPDATE PLEAJ PLEAJ PLEAJ *Puppy dog face*

Amazing😊...so what is zoya exactly suffering from??fatigue,anemia...is she having heart failure??if that is the case then she should have been admitted on her first visit😊...well,these symptoms can point to a no. of diseases but I would like to know if u have anything specific in mind😊...

Your build up is impeccable, just right.

You write so perceptively, the feelings are so credible, bang on. The part where doctor says "I am sorry" , and Zoya goes through the exact thing that anyone would assume, sorry cause they don't know what the problem is or sorry cause that they cannot fix it. 😕

Doctors come in all types, just as you said, most popular ones are the best listeners and empathizers, the ability to recognize the emotions a patient goes through, the sensitivity, all of it. The most successful ones are not necessarily are popular. 😳 I am so looking forward to their personal and human stories.

So Asad cooks as well? 😲 Damn, big bonus points for this one

Raavi as in river, and that is the only Raavi I know too. Now I am so intrigued.

The part where Zoe is counting the heartbeats of her imperfect heart is so poignant. Is her heart going to cheat on her? Asad is privy to the unexpected moment. Hospitals are full of them, folks at their most vulnerable moments, naked humanity. In this a moment just between two of them. The heartbeat range was reassuring. 😃

So 2- 3 days later, she took the elevators this time, she seems a bit disoriented. (And so is Asad 😆) Did something happen? No not Asad, but Zoe.

Cannot wait for the next part.

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You updated finally. Thank you. 😊
I love the initial build up. You know setting up the storyline and establishing the characters. Now I know why your stories are so captivating.
The portrayal of Zoya's fear and turmoil was beautiful. The idea of her counting her heartbeats was just brilliant 👏
Dr. Asad Ahmed Khan eh! The guy seems intriguing. And he cooks!!! Oh my god, can I get an Asad pls??
Interesting ending there. There had to be some reason for Zoya to visit her doc like that.
A brilliant update altogether. Can't wait for the next part.