Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare I (Thread 2 link - Pg 151) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
I like the way you write your stories and also the concepts you use. I'm really looking forward for the next part. Please pm when you update. Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ...SankaDevi...

I sent ya a buddy request!
I love Greys Anatomy and it's totally fine that you're using the idea of Henry and Teddy marriage!

Good job and I hope Zoya will get better!:)


Thank you. But, it's only idea that I take. It won't have much Grey's feel, not much good with medical details. Hospital/medicine will be just as a back drop.

I also enjoy Grey's Anatomy a lot, but watch it on and off.

Edit: accepted your buddy request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mysticlover

That's an interesting story there... I loved the entire concept... I used to watch Grey's Anatomy some times back at home...
I like this Zoya... strong, independent n mature...
P.S. when you described Zoya's condition I got scared a lil bit... I had such symptoms but sans chest pain... n I'm anaemic so basically it's just that... :)


Thank you.

And, don't take any of the medicine stuff that I am going to write in this story seriously. I will google some and make up the rest 😉.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

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WELL DEAR THIS IS NOT 4 UR BRILLIANT STORY...ITS FOR UR DEDICATION & DETERMINATION TOWARDS UR STORY...SOMEWHERE IN TIME...

U WANT TO COMPLETE UR "SOMEWHERE IN TIME" FIRST THN WANNA GO AHEAD WD ANOTHER...I LOVED IT

I LOVE THE PEOPLE WHO DO OR RATHR I WOULD SAY COMPLETE THE FIRST TASK THT THEY HAVE IN THEIR HANDS...BEFORE JUMP TO ANOTHER ONE...👏I LLOVE THIS THING ABT U..U CARE FOR YR WORK & 4 UR READERS...THT THY MST BE WAITING 4 UR UPADTE AT SMWHERE IN TIME STORY...LOVED IT YR❤️

I LIKE THIS NEW STORY...LETS C HW U UNFOLD IT WD ASYA...CONTINUE...AS U SAID AFTER SOMEWHERE COMPLETE...I'LL BE WAITING...

PARI


Thank you, I guess.

You are one assertive person, and I mean it in a very positive way.

Thinking about two stories at a time won't be possible for me. I might mix up character actions and reactions, so for my own sanity, I don't do it. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Very interesting concept dr!!!

do continue after updating somewhere in time!!..been waiting for that one!😆


If you meant 'di', fine. 'dr', I am not.

Yh...won't work on this one till I am done with the first one. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Koi update aane wala hai? Could not resist 😳

Waiting...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: notagain

Koi update aane wala hai? Could not resist 😳

Waiting...😊


No...no...Koi update nahi. Just replying to comments. 😊

Abhi kuchh bhi nahi likha. Weekend tak koi aasar bhi nahi dikh rahe.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Noe123


No...no...Koi update nahi. Just replying to comments. 😊

Abhi kuchh bhi nahi likha. Weekend tak koi aasar bhi nahi dikh rahe.



*Sigh* Weekend itna dur bhi nahi...oh who am I kidding...it seems like forever

Chalo weekend pe enjoy karenge. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: notagain

Can I just say you had me at the box of chocolates. 😆 I love Forrest Gump and that box which can be anything at all. 😊

I also like that quote and the movie and chocolates 😊.

And yeah what's with the hospital thing? But now I know that Noe is writing this one, so it has to be a must must must read. I am totally looking forward to it.

I get the Noe-pace, 🤣 gal you are a genius in punning even if it was not intended. 🤣

Though I do assume you were completely intentional. 😆

Of course, it was intentional, but you found more meaning that what I meant (have been deciphering some scenes/dialogues or what? 😉) I feel my stories are slow-moving, not much drama and all, so that's what I what I meant. But, I take time between updates, so this is also fine. 😳

I for one want to protest this Noe-pace of the story writing, kuch to jugaad karo hum readers ke liye...taras khao, I demand updates at least once a day. Drop everything and write..what do you mean you have a life? Are you allowed to have one when you write such brilliant stories?😃

Time is not exactly a constraint. I think I can get a smallish chapter out every other day, but the thing is that I need time between updates to generate ideas, cull them, organize them. Not a prolific writer.

Always generous with your words. Thank you. 😊😊

I am waiting for Somewhere and this now.

Noeji, fatafat likhiye!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mandarin26

i loved 'somewhere in time'. and i am sure i'll love this no less. 🤗

go ahead. waiting for the story to progress. 👍🏼

teddy and henry were my favourite couple on GA, though their relation was very shortlived. it was sweet, cute and kinda like a fairytale(excluding the ending). i really hated the fact that henry had to die. i hope you do nothing like that to our zoe. that would just break my heart 💔


Thank you.

They became my favorite too in an instant. And, these days I am catching the episodes just to watch 2-3 minutes of them. I happen to be a softie. I don't have it me to harm Zoya (which makes me a bad writer), so there will be ups and downs, but she will be fine. (Did I just kill the story by revealing this? 😲 😆)

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