FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

I LOVE YOU! *Screams* *Faints*

OMG! OMG! This is soo awesome! SO passionate! It so beautifully described! <3

I Love you Asad! :*

*Faints*

*Comes back*

*re-reads*

*drools*

*Fangirling*

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

Is this for real..Am I dreaming..someone pinch me😆

Girl yo gave me so much happiness all of a sudden..I'm sure i'm gonna die soon😆 first i was shocked that yo had already updated, but wat did yo do, i've never imagined this even in my wildest dreams😆 Asad cut ayan's call and switched off his phone to make out with zoya🤣 this is something wat gul should learn first😆how beautifully yo ve written, keeping it subtle and passionate at the same time😳

I wish I could come to singapore and hug yo😆

sending virtual hugs🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

OMG are you kidding who says you lack the depth to describe things...i mean you decribe everything so so so beautifully😊

I must say this was one of your naughtiest updates ever and i mean it...i was awestruck reading this and i was gasping for breath😳man this was so unexpected...yes i expected a passionate kiss between the two but you gave us so much more and god i though maybe halfway throught their making out session they will realize what they were doing and pull apart but nothing like that happened😲infact they pulled apart so many times to catch their breath but didn't repent what just transpired between them...man this was shocking but i was pleasantly shocked...

Zoya's foot popped aww hope she got her answer😳

Ohk i just loved this naughty side of zoya...she was taking charge i mean yes she has done that before but did she really take off his coat and asad didn't care well who would in this situation😉i mean if he did there would have been seriously something very wrong with him

OMG zoya wrapping her legs around asad's waist and him carrying her to bed was so hawwt☺️

She goes for his waistcoat now😳

"Aap kitne kapre pehente ho,"Omg this statement had me blushing like anything☺️maybe next time asad will make things easier for her huh😉ohk theneck ksising session was so hawwt my hands reached to my neck you know☺️

OMG zoya has surprised me so much in this update...aww her playfully using her fingers on his chest was so naughty and then comes the tie...i loved her little show with the tie very hawwt and seductive😳

"Thak gayi kya? Itne toh main kehta hoon, exercise kiya karo,"oh god i could never imagine our akdu asad saying this...again a wonderful surprise...i loved the nose nuzzling reminded me of the dream dance sequence

"Aap hi sikhaaye na, kya kya exercise karke aisi body banaayi hai,"Hamari zoya kisi kam thode nahi...there comes her reply and a wink😉...what has gotten into zoya?she undid her shirt too😳looks like mr.kahn is shocked but pleasantly so directing her to second button...OMG and she gets too feel his bare chest and his torso...now i am hyperventilating☺️

"Toh jao na, maine kab manaa kiya,"...ooh she is naughty...she knows exactly which buttons to push😉awww him trailing cicles on her waist😳now i get why the monsoon😉

Brilliant brilliant very hawwt and naughty update and need i say that i loved it😉

P.S.-I have honestly forgotten everything that happened today after reading this...thankgod for your update

P.P.S.-I am not well i have cold but after reading this i feel sooo good😃

Originally posted by: Enchantress

haayeee.. Mein to mar gai... Itna romanctic make out. Man seeing them kissing so passionately and intensely makes me question myself how is it like to be kissed...😉😆 Dil kush kar dita tumne... When he received that call from Ayaan I was like ab ye phone utaye and mein yahan se apne ninja skills use karke uska phone todne pohch jau... But, then he didn't make me do anything. Ahh... I loved Asad today.. The way he irritated her for a kiss all these days was somehow compensated with the extremely hot kiss and then when she was removing his clothes one after other I was like ye kuch keh na de.. woh kya hai na koi barosa nhi Asad ka kab kya yaad a jaye... But, then he thoroughly enjoyed it just as zoya and I loved it... I can only say Dil mange more.. so update soon.

Dee

Originally posted by: Rattyswami

finally they made it beyond the 'woh actually' and mitwa eye locks😳 what a sizzling way to spend a rainy day...Office, what office?? Baby brother, what brother?? Lolz 😛 never thought the way to shut up Mr. Khan from over-using his brain is to kiss him till his brain fries😆 Now lets see who comes down from heaven first...Asad or Zoya😉

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

WOW...Wow...WOOOW...!!!! 😲

That was Asad and Zoya...?? 😲 lol I expected him to stop at the first one but that was...WoW...!!!! 😲

I know I am repeting "Wow" again and again...But this is what it was "Wow"...!!! 😲 LOL

After reading A/N I thought Ayaan will just walk in from the window and ruin everything and his call was what made me want to read fast so I can see if what I was thinking, more like fearing is going to happen or not...😆

So I will have to read it again with the new up-date...One more reason for me to want a new up-date very soon...!!! 😊

Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses

Ohmygosh, ohmygosh, ohmygosh, OHMYGOSH! 😲 😲 😲

That was. . .SO. . .totally. . .amazing, fantastic, superb, awesome, excellent, incredible, *insert every good adjective here*!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Can't find words! 😳

I know last update I said that was my favorite part, but this one is the BEST, HANDS DOWN! ❤️ OMG THAT WAS JUST FAN-FLIPPIN'-TASTIC! *Fangirls*

You are amazing! 🤗

I can't stop reading this update! 😉 😆
Continue ASAP, please! 😉

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: me2you

Oye ji!!! Balle balle, shava shava, dhinka chika, whoop whoop!!!

See, I can't stop dancing ever since I read that this update was for me 😃 Me so happy now, you made my day!!! 😃

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

Now, I have a reputation to maintain. From now on every comment has to be longer than the previous one. Yeh toh challenga hua mere liye 😛 Kya pata, you will use a word count to count every character 😆

Coming back to the update:

This was the last thing I expected to happen after the kiss. Seriously, I thought they would get disturbed by a doorbell, Najma, Dilshaad ammi, koi kaali billi, koi doodh wala etc etc etc.

Lekin nahin yaar, aisa kuch nahin hua. In fact, it got hotter and hotter! ☺️

Asad's familiar scent deeply (Confession: I have a weakness for men who smell good)

"Aap kitne kapre pehente ho'' (You want him to walk around naked in the house???) Tum bhi na Zoya, kapre utharne mein mazaa hi kuch aur hai 😆😳

"Thak gayi kya? Itne toh main kehta hoon, exercise kiya karo," (Arre, woh kaise akeli exercise karegi? You need two people for that) 😛

Dekho, I can go on and on about this update which I don't mind to do so and I know you will like as well...lekin woh kya hai na... Meri guttar wala mind ek dum charged up ho gayi hai (after reading this update) And that is your fault 😆 So, if I say more than everything gutter hi gutter ho chayega. I don't want to scare off the young readers. FYI: No, I am not a despo 😆

You are giving us ek se badhkar ek wonderful update and I thank you for that! Looking forward to the next one, aur yeh silsila aisa hi chalta rahega ya phir ek na ek din saach mooch mein yeh kiss khatam ho jayega? 😆

🤗🤗🤗