Okay, I have been reading your story since the beginning and this is my first comment ever (didn't have an account before) and omg LOVE LOVE LOVE it! You are such a good writer! Your chapters ALWAYS have me grinning like a teenage girl. Just read the last three parts, wonderfully written! The 'kiss kiss kissi ka" stuff had me laughing out loud literally. Very smart way to put it in there. And I love how he knows Zoya so well that he was expecting her to come into his room any minute and had everything planned ahead of time (he knew what her reactions would be!)
Asad is such a tease though (and I love it), I wish we could see this kind of Asad in the show! If I were in Zoya's shoes, I would've probably wanted to bury myself in the ground and never show my face in front of him again. Girl has guts! Especially when she flat out said she wanted him to kiss her (omg I don't think I would ever be able to do that, I'd probably be so nervous that I would mess up the kiss myself haha).
Last part...omg...no words..very cute but passionate as well. I'm glad you waited for the kiss, made it so much more special and romantic (how a first kiss should be!). I swear though, all your Asya scenes are so passionate. Even in the beginning chapters, without the kiss, when they are on the couch and all their close moments (when she's on top of him etc) and when they were trying to turn back on the power, and the way Zoya tries to find Asad's phone (which was my absolute favorite of all..always reread that part!) and how they are soo close to each other..it's all so intense, I just LOVE it. That's what also made the kiss amazing, all the heated moments leading up to it before. And the foot thing, I was totally reminded of Princess Diaries (don't know if you've watched it) but she does the foot thing in there too. Very cute.
Why do I have a feeling either Ayaan is going to end up catching them or Dilshaad and Tanveer are going to end up walking in on them again? That would be horrible especially if it's Dilshaad. Wonder what's going to happen next!
Anxiously waiting for the next part!
Edited by LaVita-E-Bella - 11 years ago
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