FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 37

Originally posted by: Nishitarao

What a fantastic update Sangeeta!!!! It was like a perfect episode of Qubool hai.. Had everything in it.. Drama, Comedy, Romance, Suspense.. 👏
Asad almost confessed!!! !!☺️
LOL!!! Gafoor was in love with Dilshaad? 😆and Rashid and Razia are besties 🤣 That was EPIC!!!!!!

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: me2you

First of all: A big THANK YOU for the early update!!!

As much as I want to start right away with my comments about the chapter 23-part B, mujhe aap ne aapko qaboo mein rakhna hoga.

Thanks narges...yes, this was extra special as I had some time last night

First things first...

Part A

This is has to be one of most confusing chapters. Please, don't get me wrong. Like always, I loved it. But I am talking more about the characters and all. Okay, so let get this straight: Ayaan is Rashid's son means Asad's stepbrother. He is married to Humeira. Is Razia Rashid's second wife or is she Humeira's mother?

Yes, Ayaan is Rashid's son but Asad doesn't know anything about Ayaan

Razia and rashid are just business partners

Razia is Zeenat's mother

I haven't revealed anything about Humeira except that she is pregnant with Ayaan's child

Cut 2: Anwar is Dilshaad's mooh-boli bhai. Zeenat is Ghaffur's daughter. Apparently, her mom is in Dubai. Who is her mom? Razia? If not, is there also a Shireen in your story?

(You must be thinking; yeh ladki abhi bhi nahin samji.😆 I do, but I just want to make things clear for myself) 😉

Yes, Anwar is a distant cousin of Dilshaad

Zeenat is Ghafoor and Razia's daughter

haven't introduced Shireen yet. I am glad u r asking me because these relations are important to understand the remaining story

In the coming chapters it will be alike cross-road of people bumping into each other. Will Asad come face to face with Razia or Zeenat? Will Anwar come face to face with Dilshaad or Ghaffur? Ho sakta hai, ho sakta hai. Sangeeta Di ke story mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

he he...wait and see. I won't make it that complicated😆

Part B

My favorite! Yes, I absolutely loved this part. Especially Mr. Khan, he was ek dum in another mood today. Lagta hai, Arjun ke bato ka kuch toh asar hua hain. 😉 His reaction after he got to know about the 'Mrs. Khan' was totally unexpected! Trust me, I really thought he would be furious and all, lekin nahin...he got into a full romantic mood😳

Jee nahin, discotheque mein hain. Bas abhi dance hi kar rahe the! Can't you see me panting? (Of course, this is the Zoya we all know)

The Skype conversation between Dilshaad ammi and Asad really touched me. I got emotional and especially this dialogue did it for me: Bachche galti nahin karenge tho kaun karenge?

He didn't pick me. I am not a fruit that he can pick me from a bunch at the grocery store." (Hahaha, good one. I like)😃

'haraamzaade doctor, flirt karte huye sharam nahin aati?" (One of the best! I was laughing out all loud. I love his jealous side) 😳

He has no right to flirt with Mrs. Khan though. (Haan haan, pata hai pata hai, woh haq sirf aapka hain)

Par main mazaak nahin kar raha hoon. (Uff...my heart skipped a beat when reading this. I could totally imagine Mr. Khan saying this)

Kya aap mera intezaar karengi? (Agar Zoya wait nahin karna chahti hain, koi baat nahin. Hum hain na yahan. Khushi se aapka wait karenge) 😆

and you. Aap please kahin nahin jaayengi. Aaj nahin, kal nahin, kabhie nahin. (Marwana chahti hai kya Di? Which such dialogues, koi bhi Mr. Khan se pyaar ho jayega)

Yes, Mrs. Khan and you are mine. (Dead...)

Oops, this comment is getting pretty long. Lekin kya karoon, I can't say it in just two or three lines. Thank you sooo much for this wonderful chapter. I am really looking forward to more and more. This is getting better day by day. Ek taraf suspense hai and so many question marks that need an answer aur doosri taraf, there is Mr. Khan who has (I guess) accepted his feelings for Zoya. It can only get better, hai na?

A big hug for you Sangeeta Di!!! 🤗

A big hug for you too...love to read ur detailed comments. At least someone pays attention to the dialogues I write😆 I am glad u liked Asad's indirect proposal

Originally posted by: rendezvousvin

Wow!!!!! That was amazing update Sangeeta...So many things came out in open... So, Rashid Ahmed Khan is alive and Ayaan is his son... Humeira is pregnant with Ayaan's child? And Gaffur was in love with Dilshad, who rejected his proposal.. That's good to know... Razia is Zeenat's mother so Gaffur's first wife... What is her connection Rashid? This is very interesting... And the scene of the day was Asad proposing Zoya...😳 Can't wait for the next update...

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Sangeeta, thanks for PM. No I didnt read your part 1 update..

God what a beautiful web you have created here. So Dilshaad was Gaffur's first love? Rashid did marry the girl right?They were in business together right, so she was the reason for breakup? And he never loved Zainab😔

And Shireen is Zeenat's mom in Dubai, or is it someone else?

Is Imran traitor? Ayaan into illegal business with his dad, so Asad and Ayaan are gonna meet on this raid?

All are coming to Mumbai at the same time and Zoya might be oblivious here.

Very interesting plot looking forward to next part already...

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Wowww... That was a long update... Thanks a lot for posting it n this ff is one of my favourite ff... Both the parts were brilliantly written... Gaffur's past was really shocking n Gaffur n Zoya's jiju coming to India wil bring a lot of twists in Zoya's life n Khan family.. The next part was very emotional n quite romantic... Zoya is realy ful of life... She spreads love n happines everywhere she goes... The Zoya-Asad chat was realy good n Asad getn jealous... Truly AsYalacious... Thanx 4 d pm n update next part soon cos i m very eager to read it... ~JAZ~

Originally posted by: -gladiolus-

Hi Bheegi. Been a BIG fan of all your work in the past (AR and AK fics since dmg times) Just managed to catch up with this one...and to be very frank, it has simply enthralled me!...You are one gifted writer...I'm in love with Your Asad and Zoya as much I love the one in the show.

Please continue soon.

P.s- Please accept my apology in advance for my irregularity in commenting on any chapter due to my busy schedules. However, believe me I won't miss reading it for the world.

Originally posted by: Noe123

Bheegi...Bheegi...Bheegi...you will give Gul a run for money any day. My head is spinning. I was behind 4-5 parts and read them at once and I am still trying to memorize all the connections or the web that has been created. Ye love story mystery/drama main convert kab ho gayi 😉?

Hi Noe! I thought you had deserted me midway😆 Always love your input as u pick the little things I try to incorporate

I am imagining a huge whiteboard before your writing desk where you have written names of all characters and lines crisscrossing around joining/separating them and story arcs written all over the board. How did you come up with this story 😲? Very very different from your previous works. Or, your previous to previous work was very different from your previous work 😉😊.

No...unfortunately the chalk board is in my head and that's why I have to regurgitate these ideas at such speed these days😆 or else I will forget them. I have to admit that thsi ff has def become quite inspired by QH and it's interwoven stories...

Now, coming to the last of the last part - simply beautiful. To tell you frankly, more than the romantic ride in a Victoria, I loved Asad's heartfelt confession in simple words. Dil ko chhu gaya! Last scene was very well done 👏.

aww thanks...I wanted to do something unconventional for akdu

I guess this story is going to run long like QH 😉. Not that long but yeah...maybe another 10-15 parts😆

p.s. Wondering why hasn't Rashid left his shady work? What is tying his hands? Yh..Razia...how? By threatening Dilshaad and family's lives? And, the question of second family still stands? Maana...again Razia behind this. Then, how did Gafoor take his revenge? I know getting ahead of myself, but bahot confusion hain 😆 Good questions and u already have some answers😉