FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1

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_vineeta_

@_vineeta_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Sangeeta, thanks for PM. No I didnt read your part 1 update..

God what a beautiful web you have created here. So Dilshaad was Gaffur's first love? Rashid did marry the girl right?They were in business together right, so she was the reason for breakup? And he never loved Zainab😔

And Shireen is Zeenat's mom in Dubai, or is it someone else?

Is Imran traitor? Ayaan into illegal business with her dad, so Asad and Ayaan are gonna meet on this raid?

All are coming to Mumbai at the same time and Zoya might be oblivious here.

Very interesting plot looking forward to next part already...

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Wowww... That was a long update... Thanks a lot for posting it n this ff is one of my favourite ff... Both the parts were brilliantly written... Gaffur's past was really shocking n Gaffur n Zoya's jiju coming to India wil bring a lot of twists in Zoya's life n Khan family.. The next part was very emotional n quite romantic... Zoya is realy ful of life... She spreads love n happines everywhere she goes... The Zoya-Asad chat was realy good n Asad getn jealous... Truly AsYalacious... Thanx 4 d pm n update next part soon cos i m very eager to read it... ~JAZ~

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-gladiolus-

@-gladiolus-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Hi Bheegi. Been a BIG fan of all your work in the past (AR and AK fics since dmg times) Just managed to catch up with this one...and to be very frank, it has simply enthralled me!...You are one gifted writer...I'm in love with Your Asad and Zoya as much I love the one in the show.

Please continue soon.

P.s- Please accept my apology in advance for my irregularity in commenting on any chapter due to my busy schedules. However, believe me I won't miss reading it for the world.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Bheegi...Bheegi...Bheegi...you will give Gul a run for money any day. My head is spinning. I was behind 4-5 parts and read them at once and I am still trying to memorize all the connections or the web that has been created. Ye love story mystery/drama main convert kab ho gayi 😉?

I am imagining a huge whiteboard before your writing desk where you have written names of all characters and lines crisscrossing around joining/separating them and story arcs written all over the board. How did you come up with this story 😲? Very very different from your previous works. Or, your previous to previous work was very different from your previous work 😉😊.

Now, coming to the last of the last part - simply beautiful. To tell you frankly, more than the romantic ride in a Victoria, I loved Asad's heartfelt confession in simple words. Dil ko chhu gaya! Last scene was very well done 👏.

I guess this story is going to run long like QH 😉.

p.s. Wondering why hasn't Rashid left his shady work? What is tying his hands? Yh..Razia...how? By threatening Dilshaad and family's lives? And, the question of second family still stands? Maana...again Razia behind this. Then, how did Gafoor take his revenge? I know getting ahead of myself, but bahot confusion hain 😆

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

OMG Sangeeta, kya kamaal ho tum😳 Amazing update, feels like watching a movie/drama. Superb pace and awesome write up.. Gul needs to hire you, and fire all her idiotic Cvs.Gosh this gafoor is coming to India😡, kya hoga ab, I really hope he will not take Zoe away. and wish Asad will come back home safely. Looks like Ayaan and Rashid are in Mumbai? kya kamaal ka twist hai yaar? aur ye Zeenath ki ammi ka kya chakkar hai.. and Razia?😲 wow superb dhamakedaar update..Loved it..and now the last part, uff! that was just so romantic, Asad just proposed Zoe on Skype? wow..☺️ you write romantic scenes so well.. Love your style.. I am now eagerly waiting for the next update.. Thanks for this treat, two parts at a time..🤗

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

I would say every single chapter is turning out to be my personal favorite. Asad and the way he opened up today leaving all his dilema's to one corner I loved it, Please continue asap. Can't wait any longer.

Dee

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: nisha150
Heyy read ur whole ff nd was gonna tel u update d nxt prt sooon and u updated it dat tym i was sooo happieee...and nw cumng to ur ff im in love with ur ff...its really vryyy nice and a diffrent story from other ff's ...itss amazinggg di...u hav written fantastic...u r an awesum writer...it just lyk a romantic novel...had sent u a buddy req..plzzz accept it and be sending me pm wen u update d nxt prt...and update d nxt prt soonn di...!!!

Thanks Nisha. Readers like you make it worthwhile for me to keep writing and writing😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Oh Sangeeta, I just can't tell how happy I am after reading this update. I had read it on my cell but just logged into my laptop to comment on this. you know this part has made me jump in the air and dance happily, with Asad realizing and indirectly telling about his feelings. I know Zoe wud wait till her last breath for her Mr. Khan. though honestly i'm scared reading the first half of this. I mean I can see problems arising from all the four directions towards AsYa. I just hope they don't get separated any more and Asad returns home safely. I know he'll fight the world for his Zoe. please don't let dat Gaffur take zoe away from there.
love and a thanks a tonne for a super quick update.

In Bold...very accurate statements Thanks for reading the extra long update and hope I didn't confuse u with so many characters...stories will unfold one by one now

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shonajain

@shonajain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

awww dat was super awsume di!!!!!:):)
do continue soon :):):)
Thnk u for the pm di
:):):):):):):)

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
What an interesting and beautiful update...story took a very interesting turn...so many characters being introduced...So Rashid is alive and ayaan and humeira are his son and daughter in law and he is in business relation with Razia who i guess is Zeenat's mother...So Mr.Gaffur was in love with Dilshad,married Zainab and they had a daughter zoya and zeenat is Gaffur and razia's daughter...

100% marks for you Anushree👏

what is razia and gaffur's story...this will be interesting...

will find out later😃

And coming to the second part of the update it was just amazing...i loved how smartly zoya befriended the hospital staff and got her phuphi the best care possible...dilshad is so lucky to have a daughter like zoya...i loved zoya and Dr.Ali's conversation it was really funny and zoya's one liners were amazing...it was good to her bubbly and chirpy even in such situations...and jealous asad was just a cherry on top😳and asad finally listening to his heart hayee...and i loved wen he addressed her as Mrs.Khan...
This may have been one of the most unusual proposals ever but it was so sweet,pure and heartfelt and truly one of the best i have ever come across..this was such a sweet proposal it actually brought tears to my eyes...this was one of the most beautiful piece of work that i have ever read and you are truly amazing and i love you🤗Asad's lines said it all"I want to come home to ammi, Najma and you. Aap please kahin nahin jaayengi. Aaj nahin, kal nahin, kabhie nahin."

aww thanks Anushree...yes, I wanted to make it different and also not delay their confession- even if it'sakdu style indirect one😳 Glad u liked the update even though it was long and a bit confusing. U read very caerfuly I must say😃

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