FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowow!!!
Great updates!!!!
Haramzaada doctor!!!!😆 i simply love a jealous Asad!!!!
im a little confuse abt the whole gaffur-razia-rashid bussiness!! bt im sure as u update it will get clearer!!!😊
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Di ...

I am back...
Finally mene Faaske pad li ...
Ak wali bhi aur AJ wali bhi...

I loved the way you changed the story according to the character of Asad...
His character is not like Angad who was a little bold in his advances towards Kripa...
you portrait the Character exactly like he is Mature,traditional and bla bla bla...

I hope isme asad aur zoya AK jese alag na hojaye for 5 years aur isme to Frhaan b nhi he Zoya ke pass...


Ayaan and Rashid r doing something wrong na... tch i love Ayaan ...

Waiting for next updates eagrly...

LOve

KUHU




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

lovely update Sangeetha...hmmm...seems like Zoya has quite a lot of intezaar for Asad in her fate..par chahe joh ho I'am sure she will always be there with Dilshad and Najma waiting for Asad to come back home, just like Asad wanted..Zoya will not go anywhere even if it is Gaffur, Akram ya joh bhi aaye koi bhi koi parwah nahii Zoya will not leave from Asad's place.. the place where she truly belongs...I have a feeling that Asad will be hurt during the mission and yahaan Zoya will take up Asad's responsibilities of taking care of Najma and Dilshad...Asad will be gone at least for a while and I think my guess is that we will get to read about the chirpy Zoya growing up, being more mature and serious types...this is just my guess... anyway a very well written update..keep up the good work going...the fanfic is progressing very well...very interesting and intriguing update... nice...please do update soon...waiting for the next update eagerly..😊


Thanks for being a faithful reader Surya. Zoya has def changed and will cont to change for sure. Let's wait and see what twists are in store for all of them😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

i tell you Trruuuthe :p


i read the last part first, then the first part 😆 😆
Ayaan and Rashid - Smugglers? :O
Ohhkaay Ayaan and Asad will have an encounter soon 😃 😆 😆
No Bromance 😭 😭

Mangalpur chahiyeh Epic wala Solid wala in return 😭 😭 😆 😆 Read : jaldi jaldi 😆 😆


p.s. : Cause the word limit with the coloring and font got exceeded hence it didn't get posted in one part :p

🤗


No bromance😃

Mangalpur Sangeeta di style hoga ab😉

yes, hate this IF rule...had to post it so many times to get it right! Glad u finally read both sections
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG di what a fabulous update nd m loving this story...it has so much to it!!!
jaldi jaldi next update plzz😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi


No bromance😃

Mangalpur Sangeeta di style hoga ab😉

yes, hate this IF rule...had to post it so many times to get it right! Glad u finally read both sections

OMG YAYYY!!!
Mangalpur and that too written by you...hayye jaldi se!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a fantastic update Sangeeta!!!! It was like a perfect episode of Qubool hai.. Had everything in it.. Drama, Comedy, Romance, Suspense.. 👏
Asad almost confessed!!! !!☺️
LOL!!! Gafoor was in love with Dilshaad? 😆and Rashid and Razia are besties 🤣 That was EPIC!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all: A big THANK YOU for the early update!!!
As much as I want to start right away with my comments about the chapter 23-part B, mujhe aap ne aapko qaboo mein rakhna hoga.
First things first...

Part A
This is has to be one of most confusing chapters. Please, don't get me wrong. Like always, I loved it. But I am talking more about the characters and all. Okay, so let get this straight: Ayaan is Rashid's son means Asad's stepbrother. He is married to Humeira. Is Razia Rashid's second wife or is she Humeira's mother?
Cut 2: Anwar is Dilshaad's mooh-boli bhai. Zeenat is Ghaffur's daughter. Apparently, her mom is in Dubai. Who is her mom? Razia? If not, is there also a Shireen in your story?
(You must be thinking; yeh ladki abhi bhi nahin samji.😆 I do, but I just want to make things clear for myself) 😉

In the coming chapters it will be alike cross-road of people bumping into each other. Will Asad come face to face with Razia or Zeenat? Will Anwar come face to face with Dilshaad or Ghaffur? Ho sakta hai, ho sakta hai. Sangeeta Di ke story mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

Part B
My favorite! Yes, I absolutely loved this part. Especially Mr. Khan, he was ek dum in another mood today. Lagta hai, Arjun ke bato ka kuch toh asar hua hain. 😉 His reaction after he got to know about the 'Mrs. Khan' was totally unexpected! Trust me, I really thought he would be furious and all, lekin nahin...he got into a full romantic mood😳

Jee nahin, discotheque mein hain. Bas abhi dance hi kar rahe the! Can't you see me panting? (Of course, this is the Zoya we all know)

The Skype conversation between Dilshaad ammi and Asad really touched me. I got emotional and especially this dialogue did it for me: Bachche galti nahin karenge tho kaun karenge?

He didn't pick me. I am not a fruit that he can pick me from a bunch at the grocery store." (Hahaha, good one. I like)😃

'haraamzaade doctor, flirt karte huye sharam nahin aati?" (One of the best! I was laughing out all loud. I love his jealous side) 😳

He has no right to flirt with Mrs. Khan though. (Haan haan, pata hai pata hai, woh haq sirf aapka hain)

Par main mazaak nahin kar raha hoon. (Uff...my heart skipped a beat when reading this. I could totally imagine Mr. Khan saying this)

Kya aap mera intezaar karengi? (Agar Zoya wait nahin karna chahti hain, koi baat nahin. Hum hain na yahan. Khushi se aapka wait karenge) 😆

and you. Aap please kahin nahin jaayengi. Aaj nahin, kal nahin, kabhie nahin. (Marwana chahti hai kya Di? Which such dialogues, koi bhi Mr. Khan se pyaar ho jayega)

Yes, Mrs. Khan and you are mine. (Dead...)

Oops, this comment is getting pretty long. Lekin kya karoon, I can't say it in just two or three lines. Thank you sooo much for this wonderful chapter. I am really looking forward to more and more. This is getting better day by day. Ek taraf suspense hai and so many question marks that need an answer aur doosri taraf, there is Mr. Khan who has (I guess) accepted his feelings for Zoya. It can only get better, hai na?

A big hug for you Sangeeta Di!!! 🤗






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Posted: 12 years ago
i jst loved it..superb part..sangeeta...amazing..i jst want zoya should be there when he come back..gaffur usko kahin le na jaye...pls update soon...& thnks 4 d pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!!! That was amazing update Sangeeta...So many things came out in open... So, Rashid Ahmed Khan is alive and Ayaan is his son... Humeira is pregnant with Ayaan's child? And Gaffur was in love with Dilshad, who rejected his proposal.. That's good to know... Razia is Zeenat's mother so Gaffur's first wife... What is her connection Rashid? This is very interesting... And the scene of the day was Asad proposing Zoya...😳 Can't wait for the next update...

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