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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART : 5 :~

i m so so srry guyss i m not updating i wrote whole sexy update bt because of my brother before i could post it he closed my lap top i'll update tommorow as my mood is nt in place pukka i will update tommorow sorry !!!

ASYA4eveAAA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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15+UPDATE ONLY READ IF U WANT TO...
PART : 5 :~

Z:" baarish ! mr. khan chaliye bahar chalte hai "

A:" 😲 hann ? zoya aap ka dimag to theek hai aap bimaar ho jaayengi "
holding hr hand n saying in conserned voice 😕

Z:" mr.khan !!! aap itne boring kyunnn hai ?...dekhiye mai tho bahar jaa rhi hu agar aapko aana ho tho aaiye nhi tho mai to chali "

A:" aree zoya... "

before he could say anything she ran outside in haste n started playing with rain she was fully wet within a fraction of time asad couldn't help but just stare his beautiful wife ... 😃

A:" zoya ? ye ye aap kya kr rhi hai ?... chaliye andar chaliye jaldi '

Z:" pleaseee mr.khan ... rehne dijiye naa !!! " making a sweet look 😳
she began dancing like a peacock n asad just staired hr n smiled now both of them were fully drenched n wett asad pulled zoya who was dancing ,closer to him he moved closer n closer leaving 1 - 2 cms of space both of them could feel each others breaths now asad moved more closer to hr making hr blush and nervous at the same time n then he kissed hr passionately ☺️ n picked hr up in his arms n went inside the room her eyes were closed even wen they were back in their room
asad placed hr on the floor n sat at the back of her hr eyes were still closed n he looked away n got up bt he could feel someone pulling him frm back it was zoya holding his hand n signalling him not to leave hr ...
he sat back n kissed hr neck frm back n opened the strings of hr kurti ☺️☺️☺️
n rest u all can imagine 😃😆

NEXT MORNING :~

zoya woke up n saw asad sleeping peacefully holding her close to himself ... she smiled n got ready n went out asad also got up n was worried to see zoya nowhere he hurridly ran out in search
there he saw zoya picking clothes frm the string n he smile n back hugged hr lovingly making zo surprised 😲

Z:" mm.. mm ... mr.khan ye aap kya kr rhe hai ? "

precap :: asya back home !!! N MORE ROMANCE

DONE BUT GUYSS PLEZZZ AAP LOG COMMENT KIYA KRIYE THIS ENCOURAGES US TO WRITE PLEZZZ PLEZZZ PLEZZ I REQUEST DO COMMENTTT
ASYA4eveAAA 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
PART : 6 :~

Z: " mm ... mmm... mr.khan aap ye kya kr rhe hai ? "😲

A:" kya zoya ... ? apni begum ko pyaar kar rha hu ... !"😉

Z:" aree ... par yee madrasaa hai naa ...? " after a pause " mr.khan aap taiyaar ho jaayiye aur phir hame wapas bhi to jaana hai ... AAPNE GHAR ... " 😊

A:" jii !" 😊

SCENE SHIFTS TO THE CAR :~

A: " ZOYA ... ? "

Z:" hmmm ! "

A :" aapko agar tanveer k uppar shak tha ... to aapne mujhe bataya kyu nhi ... aur ye bhi nhi ki uss sangeet wali raat ko attack aap par hua tha naki tanveer par ... "

Z:" mr.khan maine aapko kitni baar samjhane ki koshish ki par aapne ... !" ( looking down )

A: looks away n feels guilty !

SCENE SHIFTS TO KHAN MANSION :~

alll were tensed n sitting in the drawing room

N:" ammi zoya wapas to aajayegi naa ... ?''

D:" jaroor najma ... ! z...zo...zoya wapas aajayegi ! "

ting tong ting tong ! ( bell 😆 )

dil went to open the door and found zoya standing there in front of of her with asad n smiling with tears in her eyes ...

D:" zoyaa ! tum... tum aagyi ? "

Z:" ji ammi mai aagyi ... ! "

now everything was narrated to dil n zoya nnn they went to their respective roomss ...

PRECAP :" a bit of asya romance n a LEAP OF 2 WEEKS " :D

DONE FINALLY SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE
BUT PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEE
DO DO DO DO DO DO COMMENT GUYSSS LIKES R NOT
IMPORTANT PLEASEEE COMMENT !!!!
ASYA4eveAAA 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice updateNice updNice uNice update
pdate
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
can't wait 2 read wat happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
ur story is great i just luv it..pls update soon n pm me when u update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
gr8
continue soon
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
GUYSSS THANKS FR UR COMMENTS N LIKES I'LL UPDATE NXT PART TOMORROW ...
PROMISE...


ONCE AGAIN THANKYOU !!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
A LONG UPDATE
PART : 7 :~

SCENE SHIFTS TO ASYA ROOM :~

Asad is sitting a bit teary wen zoya enters from washroom ...
she see's him n makes a curious expretion ...

Z:" mr.khan ... kya hua aap ... aise kyu baithe hai ? "

Asad looks up n zoya saw his tears n immidiately got tensed n sat beside him ...

Z:" k...kya hua mr.khan aap ro kyu rhe hai ... ? maine kuch kiya ?"

A:" nhi zoya ... aisi baat nhi hai ... "

Z:" tho phir kya hai? ... please mr.khan btaaiye mujhe... "

A:" zoya tu...tum mujhse apni jaan se bhi jaada mohabbat krti thi ...aur maine tumhari baat na maan kr tumhara bharosaa aur dil dono tod diya... i am ... sorry Zoya ... "😭

Z:" mr.khan please ... stop crying ... mujhe aapse koi shikayat nhi hai ... jo aapne kiya aapki jagah koi bhi hota tho yhi krta ... "

A: ( stands up n keeps his hand on his forehead ) " Lekin zoya mai itna andha kaise ho sakta hu... mujhe samaj kaise nhi aaya ki tanveer ... agar maine tumhari baat maan li hoti tho ... uski itni himmat nhi hoti ki wo 3 baar tumhari ... jaan lene ki koshish kre ... khuda na khastha agar tumhe kuch hojata tho ? ..."

Z:" shhh... mr.khan break please ! kitna bolte hai aap ? dekhiye jo kuch bhi hua usme hamari koi galati nhi thi aur agar aap aapne aapko dosh de rhe hai ki aapne mujh pr vishwaas nhi kiya tho maine bhi tho aap pr vishwaas nhi kiya ... tho hisaab baraabar na ... "

both smile n zoya wipes of asad's tears n he smiles 😭😊
then asad pulled zoya in a tight passionate hug ...🤗
n kissed hr forehead i am lucky zoya to have u in my life ...😊

TWO WEEKS LATER AT KHAN MANSION ...😃😃😃

SCENE SHIFTS TO ASYA HAVING DINNER :~

asad pulls the chair for zoya and sits down they are having dinner peacefully asya eyelosks are going on zoya is smiling dil is happy looking them
asad leaves for his room zoya helping dilshad with the dishes...

D:" zoya please wo drawer se nye soap ka packet nikaal do pleaseee "

Z:" ji ammi ... !" ( she checks it and frowns )

Z:" ammi ye dekhiye aap ye kha se lekar aayi thi ? iski date tho nikal gyi hai ... aaj 27 th august hai aur... "

D:" ( suddenly remembering something ) KYA ? KYA KHA TUMNE ?KI ... "

Z:" ki ye expi... "

D:" ARE NHI NHI DATE ..."

Z:" ki aaj 27th august hai "

D:" KYA ISKA MATLAB KAL ASAD KA BDAY HAI ... ya allah mai bhool kaise gyi ? "

Z:" kya aap sach keh rhi hai ammi ...tho phir tho party banti hai ..."

D:" nhi zoya asad ko bday party achhi nhi lgti wo tho sirf badhai se hi khush hota hai ..."

Z:" lekin ammi ..."

D:" zoya ... pleasee "

Z:" thik hai par hum cake tho cut kr hi sakte hai na ?"

D:" hmmm !"

SCENE SHIFTS TO MORNING :~

asad still asleep zoya comes n brushes her hair on him and softly wispers

Z:" happy bday ... mr.khan "

A:" zo...zoya tumhe kaise pta ?... "

Z:" its okk ...aap bas aaj shaam ghar jaldi aajayiyega ok..."

A:" ok ! "

SCENE SHIFTS TO KHAN MANSION ITS 6:00 :~

asad has returned already n found no decoration just family members dressed zoya was dressed in a black saari n a deep blose with matching earings she came n setted the cake and asked asad to cut it n she sang ...

Z;D;N :" haapy birthday song ... "

he cuts the cake and was about to feed zoya wen suddenly she felt like earth was revolving n she felt dizzy and collapsed ...

A:" zo...zoya zoya utho plezzz ... ammi kya hua zoya ko "

he picks her up in his arms n takes her in room n place her on

A" nazma docter ko phone kro... ammi paani laayiye please"

A:" zoya zoya ya allah utho pleaseee "

PRECAP ::" a gud newsss "

WHOO ! DONE FINALLY LONG ONE PLEZZZ COMMENT
ASYA4eveAAA 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow red all parts together, very nice
cont soon and pm me if possible
Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago

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