#T1 ASYA ff:Vishwaas link to #T 2 given on page 1

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Guyss this is my first ever FF or any writings on india forums 😃😃😃 i hop u like this ... <3
prolouge : its like this asya were married before the bhang (since a year ) incident . tanveer created problems fr asya and now zoya left the khan mansion as tanveer accused asad of hr baby . Tanveer's truth has been revealed by the reports in hr room kept on hr dressing table as dilshad called hr ... asad joined the strings n understood tht zoya said ri8 tht tanveer tried to kill hr ,...
A = ASAD
Z= ZOYA
D=DILSHAD
T=TANVEER
N=NAJMA 😊

PART : 1 :~

A : " TANVEER ! tum aisa kaise kr skti ho ? tumne ... mujh pr aisa ghatiyaa aur jootha ilzaam lgaaya ? " 😲

D: " chhi ! mai to soch bhi nhi skti thi ki tum aisa kr skti ho ..."

T: "khala ye sab jhooth hai aur ... jammy ... "

A: " khabardar jo mujhe iss naam se ek aur baar pukaara to ..."😡
tumne zoya ko maarne ki koshish ki ? kyun tanveer kyu ? btaao mujhe ( holding hr very tightly ) btaao himmat kaise hui tumhaari mai zoya se mohaabbaat krta hu ... aur tumne hamee... mujhe sharm aati hai tumhe apna dost kaite hue ... btao na aise boot ban kr kyu khari ho ? BHOLO !!!

T: (in anger ) " HAAN ! hamne ... hamne marne ki koshish ki zoya ko ! " " kambakhat bahut sakht jaan hai zoya jitni baar maarne ki kosish ki utni baar wapas aa gyi ... hum aapse nikaah krna chahte the asad ...kyunki hame apne bacche k liye ek achha khandan naam paisa shouhrat sab chahiye tha ... aisa kya tha usme jo hamme nhi .. par kambakhat aanath hai pr phir bhi bach gyi khuda jaane kab maregi wo ... ? "
asad was fuming by now ... 😡 n he slapped tanveer in front of everyone ( good deed 👏👏👏 )

D;N;T all shocked as hr lence was out ...

N:" to to tum wo ho ! jisne blood sample badla aur zoya bhabhi pe jhumar giraya tha ? tanveer tum itna kaise gir skti ho ? "

A: " chali jaao yahaan se tanveer ! chali jaao !!! "😡

T : " pr jam... jammy ... 😲 hum..."

A: " asad gives hr some cash n she eyes at dilshad n leaves as it was because of hr alll this happened ...

A: (he collapsed on ground ) crying ... 😭

D and N : " asad " ... " bhaijaan ? "

D: " najma bhaijaan k liye thora sa paani lekr aao jao jldi "

A: " ammi ... ammi zo.. zoya sach keh rhi thi ... w..wo tanveer ne usse ...s..sa..sch me maarne ki koshish ki ... ya allah ye kya krdiya maine ? " 😭

D:" asad ! ... khuda k liye isme tumhaari koi galati nhi hai ...ye sab to uss tanveer ka kiya dhara hai "

A:" par ... am...ammi zoya ? wo...wo kha hogi kis haal me hogi maine uss pr VISHWAASS na krke bahut bda gunaah kiya hai ! "
pta nhi wo mujhe kabhi maaf bhi kregi yaa nhi ... "

D:" kyu nhi ? wo tumse mohabbat krti hai ... wo zaruur sach jaanne k baad tumhe maaf kr degi ... "

A looks at D teary eyed n she nods n gives asad a glass of water he gulps it down n goes in his room to talk to a police inspecter ...

A :" inspecter aap usse kuch nhi kahenge jaab wo mil jaayegi mai khud apni biwi ko ghar lekar aana chahta hu ... " (he says this wen he has told the inspecter abt zo's absence n he tells this if supppose they find zoya then wht to do )

A:" zoya plezzz wapas aa jaao mere pass ... apne shohar k pass plezzz mere liye ... apne liye ... ammi aur najma k liyennn plezzz ! "

HOW WAS IT ?
CRAP FRSURE 😆 WELL CHAPPAL JOOTA N TAMATAR ANDA I ACCEPT EVERY THING ... 😃😃😃
SORRY for the errors pleaseee !
ASYA4eveAAA
PLEZZZ PLEZZZ PLEZZZ DO COMMENT AND I PROMISE NXT PART WOULD BE OSOME !!! 😃😃😃

index 😃😃😃

PART :1 :~ page 1 THANKS AND BANNER NOTE ON PG:62
PART :2 :~ page 2 NOTE ON NAMES ON PG:69
PART :3 :~ page 3 TEASER FOR CHAP. 29 : pg 116
PART :4 :~ page 3
PART :5 :~ page 4
PART :6 :~ page 4
PART :7 :~ page 5
PART :8 :~ page 6
NOTE : :~ page 6
PART :9 :~ page 7
PART :10a :~ page 8
PART :10b :~ page 8
PART :11 :~ page 9
PART :12 :~ page 12
PART :13 :~page 14
PART :14 :~page 17
PART :15 :~page 20
PART :16 :~page 23
OUTFITS FOR CHAP. 16 :~ page 25
PART :17 :~ page 25
PART :18 :~ page 30
PART : 19:~ page 34
PART :20 :~ page 40
OUTFITS FOR CHAP. 21 :~ page 44 n 45
PART :21 :~ page 48
PART :22 :~ page 54
PART :23 :~ page 63
PART :24 :~ page 70
PART :25 :~ page 76
PART :26 :~ page 83
PART :27 :~ page 94
PART :28 :~ page 106

LINK TO #T 2 :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx fr the comment n i'll try update today or tommorow !
u r the first one to comment !!! 😃😃😃
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Continue sounds good... 👍🏼
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good start..
plzzz plzz continue ASAP... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye this doesn't looks like its ur first time!!!

intresting plot...

please update the next part soon and do pm me dear!!!

pleasee bring zoya in the next part...

waitingg!!!
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Thankyou guyss fr comenting ...
srry fr the errors in advance 😃😃😃

PART : 2 :~

A: He was sitting teary eyed imagining abt zoya it in eve by now najma n dilshad are out to the dargah fr praying n will have food while coming so there was no one to confront him he came out from his room and was surprised to see ZOYA !!!

BACGROUND : tu hi bta zindagi ...
jo bhi hua kyu hua ...
khoi hai kyu har khushi kiski lgi bad dua...
kya mai khu bikhra kyu sapna mera ...
she disappered ... 😭

he then sat on the table n saw zoya again serving him food n giving him smile
BG : tu hi bta zindagi jo bhi hua kyu hua ...
khoi hai kyu hr khushi kiski lgi bad dua ...

she dissapeared again 😭

then in his room he went to his wardrob n toook out a kurta n near the washroom he again saw zoya ...

BG : bheege bheege din kaali raate ...
aansuon ki jaise barsaaten ...
puchhe mujhse jo dil ki baaten ...
kya mai kahu dard kyun mujhko milaa ...
he tried to place his hand on her cheek wen she dissapeared n asad began to cry a lot ...
he thn changed n came out n sat taking his legs in an arm lock ...n he was crying 😭😭😭
A: " zoya kha ho tum ? ... kha ho ? "

SCENE SHIFTS TO AJMER :~

Z: she is doing the dargah work she is moping the floor wen kids pass by hr n spilling the water ... she doesn't say anything n starts cleaning the mess a baba comes n keeps hand on her head

BABA : " beti wo sabki khwahishe puri krta hai ... aur sab ka imti haan bhi leta hai tum himmat mat haarna ... allah kre ki tumhari sari khushiya tumhe sood samet wapas mil jaaye ... allah hafizz ! "😊

Z: " she starts crying again ( again bcose hr eyes are swollen n red )

SCENE SHIFTS TO ASAD'S ROOM :~

Asad gets a call from the police ...

P: " mr.khan ! ... hame pta chal gya hai ki aapki patni kha hai ... "

Asad couldn't believe it !!!

A : " kya kya kha aapne ? zo ...zoya mil gyi ? jldi btaaiye kha hai wo ? "

P:'" wo ajmer me hai ... dargah pr "

A:" thankyou inspecter tankyou very very much "

he cuts the calll n sighs in relief ...

A" mai aa rha hu zoya tumhe lene !"

TOTALLY BAKWAASS UPDATE 😆😆😆
BY MEEE 😃
ASYA4eveAAA
do comment n hit the like button srry i cant PM 😭😭😭
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continue soon... reunite them... thanks
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Part : 3 :~

A : " zoya mai aa rha hu tumhe lene ... "

SHENE SHIFTS TO AJMER : ~

zoya is roaming in the madrasa here and there then she is washing the utensils she comes out of the room with a bucket in hr hand n was abt to spread the clothes wen she coughed a bit n took hr eyes in front of the wall she immidiatelly became teary n looked in shock n ran towards the direction in which she saw ... HIM ( A )
bt she stops in the midway n steps back wen she was abt to leave asad holds hr hand and says ...

A:" zoya ?... aap theek hai ? "
z: while shocked on his question " kya aapko mujhe dekh ke aisa lgta hai mr.khan ki aapne jo mere saat kiya mai uske baad thik ho skti hu ... ?"🥺😭
A :" zoya meri baat to suno ... wo ta.. tanveer !"
Z:" bas mr.khan !... mujhe kuch nhi sunna aap yahan se chale jaaiye aur kabhi bhi mujhse milne ki koshish mat kriyegaa !"
jaaiye yaha se ! " ' jaaiyee ' !!!

asad holds zoya by hr shoulders tightly giving pain to hr n saying
.
A :" zoya tum meri biwi ho ! aur mai tumhe baat khatam
kiye bina yaha se khi jaane nhi doonga ... "

she stairs at him in shock and tears start escaping frm hr eyes seeing hr tears asad realised tht he's holding hr very tightly he leaves hr n says ...

A:" i am sorry ! "
zoya mai jaanta hu tum meri baat nhi sunna chahti pr mai ye baat khatam kiye bina yaha se khi nhi jaaunga ... i am srry zoya ki maine tumpe VISHWAAS nhi kiya agr maine tumpe yakeen kiya hota to aaj ye sab nhi hota tanveer ne hamaare saat ek ghinouna khel khela tha jiski wajah se se hamne ek dusre pr shak kiya .. agar ho sake to mujhe maaf kr dena ... aur ek baat ...

" Mai tumse... mohabbat krta hu zoya , aur hamaesha krta rahungaa ... " ❤️ ( finally 🥳 )

while he was saying this zoya listened carefully without even blinking hr eyes ... tht were full of tears ...😭

he was waiting fr reply bt wen zo didn't respond as she was in great shock he started to go back as he was going she ran after him and back hugged him making asad shock and extreamly happy at the same time ...

Z:" mr.khan plezz mujhe chhor ke mat jaaiye ... mai aapke bagair nhi reh skti mai aapse ... mohabbat krti hu"❤️
he looked at zoya who was in tears n he even was in tears n hugged hr tightly keeping his hand on hr hairs and waist ... n they stayed in tht position fr atleast 10 mins ... 😃😃😃

BAKWAAS !!! 😡😡😡
SRRY GUYSS COULDNT POST YESTERDAY MERI TABYT BAHUT KHARAB HAI COLD U ALL KNOW THE MOST IRRITATING THING IN THE WORLD PLEZZ AISI HALAT ME YE POST LIKHI HAI DO DO DO COMMENT 😭😭😭
ASYA4eveAAA 😊
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PART : 4 :~

A:'' zoya i... i ... m sorry maine apni dosti ko apne pyaar se uppar darjaa diya ... i m sorry maine . tum pe vishwaas nhi kiya... "

Z:" its ...ok mr.khan ... maine bhi to aap pr yakeen nhi kiya ..."

A:" aa..ab aap ghar ... chaliye ... "

Z:" she turns ... mr.khan par ... "

A:" par war kuch nhi aap meri biwi hai aur aap wahi rahengi jahaan mai rahungaa ... "

Z:" are ? aap galat samaj rhe hai mai to bas ye keh rhi thi ki bahut raat ho gyi hai aur aise me ham ... yaha se jaa nhi sakte "

A:" ok ... " " par mai bhi aaj tumhaare saath yahi rahunga ''

Z:" par... aap yaha to sirf ek hi kamra hai ... aur bushra khala se baat bhi to nhi ki hai aapne ... "

A:" unse mai baat kr loongaa ... "

he went inside to talk n zoya was standing outside with hr fingers crossed . asad came back n had a smile on his face she allowed him as they were married ...😆

AT NIGHT IN MADRASA:~

asya were holding each others hands n lying on the floor seeing the stars ( they were visible as the roof was of straw 😛 according to me )

A: he heard zoya's sobs got up in a shock
" zoya ... kya hua ? ... tum aise ro kyu rhi ho ? "😲

Z:" kuch nhi ... bas yakkeeen nhi ho rha ki ye sab sach hai ...ham ek saath hai ... ! darr lgta hai ki abhi neend khulegi aur ye khwaab toot jaayegaa ... ! "

A:" aisa kuch nhi hoga zoya ... ham ab kabhi alag nhi honge ... "👏👏👏

zoya rested her head on asad's shoulder n he wipped her tears ❤️❤️❤️

suddenly they heard a sound of lightning n zoya gat a bit scared but jumped suddenly n said ...

Z:" BAARISH ... !!! " 😃😃😃

precap : asya in rain n romance romance romance !!!❤️

DO DO DO COMMENT GUYSSS
THIS UPDATE I THINK IS A FINE ONE
THERE IS MY TEST SO UPDATE FR 2-3 DAYS SRRY 🤢
BT NXT 1 IS SMTHING TO READ ...😉
ASYA4eveAAA 😃😃😃
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