Chaand Raat Bazaar: ASYA OS - Page 4

Sangeeta, very nice!! I had no clue about this tradition. Very informational!

Gosshh this was sooo damn perfect! Like OMG they better show everything that just happened in this OS on the show! Like especially the chaand raat bazaar shopping part! I loved the OS girl! I really hope to see an Eid Special OS from you because I just loovee the way you write :))

Such a brilliant piece of writing.. I thot he ll give her a mirror but u took it to a different level... u r an awesome writer.. GREAT JOB n keep writing...

Wow, 😳Asad's gift was so lovely, amazing story, you are rocking, I wait for your stories, really you are gifted, amazing writing, thanks for these wonderful stories.. This was super sweet, love it, a big hug to you..🤗 Love these romantic moments, wonder why can't they have these cute moments in the show, instead of all the negativity..beautiful👏

LOVED IT...In love with your writing😊

Originally posted by: webuser7

Sangeeta, very nice!! I had no clue about this tradition. Very informational!

I have a question about " Abhi khabar mili hai ki kal raat Chaand raat hai. " Isn't the Eid date known in advance? This confused me a bit.

Loved the Ayaan Asad Zoya scene. You effectively ended the dreaded ZoYaan track before it even started!! 👏 👏

The jalebi scene was also cute!! Glad to see Akdu slowly becoming romantic and opening up, at the same time AsYa maintaining the USP nok-jokhs!

Was hoping to see more romance in the mehendi and bangle scene. I know Zoya had the mehendi on when Asad chose the bangles. But, perhaps after she washed it off, he could have put some on her hands before fulfilling the last wish!

The last wish was a surprise. Glad you didn't go the cliched route and gave us something different. How perfect was the Asad-designed moon globe! Lovely idea!! 👍🏼

OMG this was blisss

dis was SUPERAWESUME
FREEKINGKY BRILLIANT
AM SPEECHLESS

tooo wonderful

i swear its one of the best THE BEST OS i have read in a really really long time, perfect script, no mistakes, perfect character representation, asad and zoya are so convincing in their harkate its a wonder.. i was grinning ear to ear while i read how romantic lovely and sweet it all was and the ending QUBOOL HAI was another perfect piece.. hope we get to see even a part of this on the show..really want to see it materialize!! so very well written...nd yes even m a jalebi fan :P awesome!!

Thats so beautiful...