Chaand Raat Bazaar: ASYA OS

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: friendsall
Such a brilliant piece of writing.. I thot he ll give her a mirror but u took it to a different level... u r an awesome writer.. GREAT JOB n keep writing...

Characterisation was so perfecto!!!

Thanks friendsall...ASYA are unique so their story has to be unique and not cliched😃

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: fanraya
Wow, 😳Asad's gift was so lovely, amazing story, you are rocking, I wait for your stories, really you are gifted, amazing writing, thanks for these wonderful stories.. This was super sweet, love it, a big hug to you..🤗 Love these romantic moments, wonder why can't they have these cute moments in the show, instead of all the negativity..beautiful👏

Thanks for your wonderful words fanraya...

The show has to balance out TRPs with the story...I don't have that pressure😃

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
LOVED IT...In love with your writing😊

He got her the moon 😳Architect Astronaut line was so good!!

thanks dear. I would love to see more of the architect Asad on the show also

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -Khwahish-
OMG this was blisss
I could imagine each and every bit of this
You have portrayed the new , changed Asad so welll
And the warm , light humor was soo cute and refreshing
Amazing Bheegi
And the end was PERFECT
Muaahz

thanks khwaish...😊

yes, we all love this new Asad😳

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi
i swear its one of the best THE BEST OS i have read in a really really long time, perfect script, no mistakes, perfect character representation, asad and zoya are so convincing in their harkate its a wonder.. i was grinning ear to ear while i read how romantic lovely and sweet it all was and the ending QUBOOL HAI was another perfect piece.. hope we get to see even a part of this on the show..really want to see it materialize!! so very well written...nd yes even m a jalebi fan :P awesome!!

Thanks pallavi. I am glad u liked it. Hopw=e we can see a similar scene on the show too

I love jalebi too...and that too with rabri😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: kankabhor
Thats so beautiful...

Is that moon your imagination or you saw somewhere??

My imagination..😆 Never saw a moon model like that but can imagine Asad constructing it

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Noe123
Really liked this one! Glad that you included all the important characters. Vaise bhi QH main Bhopal itna chhota shehar ke they always keep bumping into each other. And, super glad that you nipped the possibility of Zoyaan 😃.

they always bump into each other in public places😃 Yes, Zoyaan nipped ..advantages of writing ffs😆

I liked Dilshaad remembering her time. I also like it very much that you included acid mehndi reference. QH main to everything has been swept under rug it seems.

i hope they show us some Dilshaad-Rashid memories again. That's a true love story that needs more screen time

And, of course, Asad and Zoya. Asad's gift sounds very interesting and very Akdu-like. Have you seen it? Can you post a link?

never seen it...just my imagination😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Beautiful OS...i loved how asad never left zoya' side...and that eating joothi jalebi was so sweet...
an the best part was asad's interpretation of the moon...such a unique and beautiful idea...

Thanks Anushree. After the Tanu incident, I am sure even on the show, Asad will guard Zoya extra carefully

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Prani08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Awesome...felt like watching an episode of QH...u should send ur script to gul khan.

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

I absolutely love your writing, it's beautiful and articulate, it touches the soul. ❤️

I do hope they show us Chaand Raat & Eid in the forthcoming QH episodes as well as the OS you wrote regarding Asad's list.

I like that you showed Zoya isn't allergic to mehndi making Asad, Najma, Dilshad aware of what Zoya endured in the name of love and family for them - asserting her selflessness.

I like the moon concept that you came up with, it's original and it's good to see Asad being that much more protective, romantic and also using his brain to construct a personal gift for her.

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