The Day After...OS (AsYa)

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awww this was so sweet...well written...i am waiting for asad to slip the ring in zoya's finger again...

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Xarina

@Xarina

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

What a beautiful OS. Loved it.

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Loved it bheegi...

This is the Asya we love and want...

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shonajain

@shonajain

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

U r gem di at writing
I.hope mai apki writings qubool hai mai dekh pati
but you r too good
I am vry small in FRONT of u to praise ur piece of writing
AWESOME

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

very nice one-shot Sangeetha...well written...😊

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Kudos to you for beautiful writing! 👏 It may very well go along these lines in the show. You have no idea how much happy I was when Zoya said that his ring would always be there now 😃.

I am with @webuser7, time is to move to Asad and Zoya. Gone are the days of formal names.

Edited by Noe123 - 12 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: goingreen
What a lovely way to make Asad and Zoya reconcile (: Loved how you showed the gradual change in their emotions, from sadness to happiness yet again. Beautifully written (:

I am hoping for a good transition scene like that...hope they don't rush it and make everything normal in an instant😕

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: beekay1
Bheegi, very well written. You would want to post share this in Forum 32 so that the writers can write something as sensible and sensitive as what you have written.
I'm not saying that they have not written anything good. But the QH CVs are like our Indian cricket team. Win 1 game and lose the next 10 games. :)

So please, Bheegi, share your writing in Forum 32...

Its excellent.

You are funny...waise aaj kal Indian team has been on a roll😉

I will post it on forum 32 FB site...i don't know if they will read it but will do😊 Thanks beekay

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jdronamraju
Beautifully written. Asad's guilt and how zoya brings him back from it. I hope they show some aspect of this and some heart to heart convo between asya in the show before going into the happy zone. It is very much needed between them before things are back to normal.

exactly...i don't want them to rush these scenes because they are always the most beautiful scenes

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: webuser7
Aww, aww, aww! That was awesome!

I wouldn't be surprised if it plays out like this on the show. Asad will hide in his room and cry and Zoya will have to get him out of his depression and then back to square one with cute nok zokh. Only change will be the intensity of the eyelocks!! 😆

Now that Tanveer's exit is imminent, my next wish is that I really, really, really want Zoya and Asad to move to first name basis, especially Zoya. Enough with the formalities!!

Thanks RK...looks like we will have to live with mitwas only as Ramzaan mein unmarried couple won't hug or kiss😆...

Gul really knows how to tadapao her audience😉

I think Zoya will call him Asad only after marriage but yes, Asad should calll her Zoya...he goes back and forth just like his other bipolar tendencies😆