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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

I will reply to all your comments...but I guess Jas' will be angry...we took her space for comment... 😆

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Klondy

OMG what an absolute pleasure to hear from you! Amulya told me about the wedding. Hope you had a lot of fun. Welcome back to my Asya world. And thanks sooo much for the looong comment. Waiting to hear more from you! Missed you both so much.

So you liked my Mangalpur redux! Great. It was fin writing those maha-episodes!

You can write another comment-I couldn't wait to reply to this one.

Reading your comments on the previous chapters makes me want to go back and read more. I'm working on chapter 111 now though this weekend I'll be too busy to do much on it. MayurChan reminded me that my Zoya had been pregnant for 15 months!!!! I didn't even realize it.

So happy that my story still has ability to please and make us all remember Asya fondly. Take care and get all the rest you need.

Yeah it was fun in d wedding J. I was 2 inform u but couldn't get time cuz of shopping & functions.

Amu comes here I hadn't saw her comnts

completed reading all updats 2day u can reply now I guess 4 d last part u have 2 give a brief explanation cuz of what I rented there

Really Zoya is pregnant 4 15 months how come??? they completed there 1st anniversary in Panchmari. Mayur has some problems calculating😆 & also Zoya got pregnant sometime after mrg but u showed 7months which I feel is right period.

Yes we r still enjoying but I can feel its coming close 2 its end u can extend it showing Asya wid 2-3 yrs old baby but I don't want 2 read Asya wid big children cuz I don't like Asya getting old 😆so them wid small baby is cool wid me. U should end it there.😉

Mayur u can reply now 2 J😆

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91

Yeah it was fun in d wedding J. I was 2 inform u but couldn't get time cuz of shopping & functions.

Amu comes here I hadn't saw her comnts

completed reading all updats 2day u can reply now I guess 4 d last part u have 2 give a brief explanation cuz of what I rented there

Really Zoya is pregnant 4 15 months how come??? they completed there 1st anniversary in Panchmari. Mayur has some problems calculating😆 & also Zoya got pregnant sometime after mrg butu showed7monthswhich I feel is right period.

Yes we r still enjoying but I can feel its coming close 2 its end u can extendit showing Asya wid 2-3 yrs old baby but I don't want 2 read Asya wid big children cuz I don't like Asya getting old 😆so them wid small baby is cool wid me. U should end it there.😉

Mayur u can reply now 2 J😆

Check this out Jas'...whenever you get free..

Originally posted by: MayurChan
You know I have just decided that I will post my comments in these breakups only...from now on...
I have done a little check on my own and found out few things...
1) Asad & Zoya were married in Chapt 47 dated on Oct 1 2013..
2) Asad first used this line " Tonight Mrs.Khan you will be so full of Me "...in Chapt 68 dated 21 Dec 2013...
3) Zoya first came to know about her pregnancy in Chapt 71 dated 10 Jan 2014...
So I was wondering...It is almost like 1 1/2 years for their marriage...and still Anniversary part is late..
And logically thinking going by the dates...she has been pregnant since 15 months..and still she hasn't started showing up...
Nothing to worry was just asking these questions...like that..
And Yeah...while reading ASYA's nikaah part...I remembered how very accurately you mentioned about the happenings in this update...Bravado...

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: MayurChan
Check this out Jas'...whenever you get free..

You know I have just decided that I will post my comments in these breakups only...from now on...
I have done a little check on my own and found out few things...
1) Asad & Zoya were married in Chapt 47 dated on Oct 1 2013..
2) Asad first used this line " Tonight Mrs.Khan you will be so full of Me "...in Chapt 68 dated 21 Dec 2013...
3) Zoya first came to know about her pregnancy in Chapt 71 dated 10 Jan 2014...
So I was wondering...It is almost like 1 1/2 years for their marriage...and still Anniversary part is late..
And logically thinking going by the dates...she has been pregnant since 15 months..and still she hasn't started showing up...
Nothing to worry was just asking these questions...like that..
And Yeah...while reading ASYA's nikaah part...I remembered how very accurately you mentioned about the happenings in this update...Bravado...

Mayur itni detail main maine kabhi koi story dates yaad nahi rakhi😆

btw what u r mentioning I guess is d dates on which they r posted. 😳

Mayur actually this FF was posted on IF 1st in 2013 but due 2 some issues J shifted it on MYDunia & its been long I know but this story is running since then but I m not complaining cuz this is 1 of very well written stories I have read on ASya wid logic in it.

so ignoring d dates we should see d story wid its flow & not seeing d dates they r being psted. Agar mrg hone ke baad J 1 month baad post kare toh iska matlab yeh thodi ke Asya ki mrg ko 1 month ho gya😆 Story nxt day se hi shuru hogi na. Hope u got my point.😉

Ab meri bhi confusion dur ho gayi u confused me also😆 whe nI read J's comnt ki u said 15 months ho gye so that means u counted d months according 2 dates of posting d updt

Meri calculation ke according Zoya got pregnant after 4-5 months of mrg han J forget that detail mayb cuz she had a lots of things going on on side plot wid Bill's revenage spree & Elders past which needed proper closer.

So J plz thoda sa detail de do plz about when Zoya got 2 know she's expecting & how long she is?😊

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91

Mayur itni detail main maine kabhi koi story dates yaad nahi rakhi😆

btw what u r mentioning I guess is d dates on which they r posted. 😳

Mayur actually this FF was posted on IF 1st in 2013 but due 2 some issues J shifted it on MYDunia & its been long I know but this story is running since then but I m not complaining cuz this is 1 of very well written stories I have read on ASya wid logic in it.

so ignoring d dates we should see d story wid its flow & not seeing d dates they r being psted. Agar mrg hone ke baad J 1 month baad post kare toh iska matlab yeh thodi ke Asya ki mrg ko 1 month ho gya😆 Story nxt day se hi shuru hogi na. Hope u got my point.😉

Ab meri bhi confusion dur ho gayi u confused me also😆 whe nI read J's comnt ki u said 15 months ho gye so that means u counted d months according 2 dates of posting d updt

Meri calculation ke according Zoya got pregnant after 4-5 months of mrg han J forget that detail mayb cuz she had a lots of things going on on side plot wid Bill's revenage spree & Elders pastwhich needed proper closer.

So J plz thoda sa detail de do plz about when Zoya got 2 know she's expecting & how long she is?😊

You know Jas'..
I have this fascination and obsession for Dates...so that is why I did..what I did..
And Yes the same thing which you said Dixiej also said the same above things to me...ki in her fiction world Time is slow..and in its own pace i mean...
So...that curiosity aroused because...of some thought to me...that is what I put on paper here...
Rest what you and Dixiej explained is same and logical according to you..guys.
And I accept that.

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It ok Mayur

Hope its clear now

U were calculating according 2 dates updts were posted but actually it had no connection wid d timing of stories'

& its ok Doubts & quiries do happen & u can anytime ask d writer 2 clear it & mostly all d writers r happy 2 help u.😊

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jas91
It ok Mayur
Hope its clear now

U were calculating according 2 dates updts were posted but actually it had no connection wid d timing of stories'

& its ok Doubts & quiries do happen & u can anytime ask d writer 2 clear it & mostly all d writers r happy 2 help u.😊

TC

YuPp...😃

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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: MayurChan

YuPp...😃

You guys are so cute. I love this little discussion! It shows me that my FF has made deep connections with your hearts and psyches and that's the best compliment for a writer.

OK, here goes:

I've kept time deliberately fuzzy. Since I am following original QH timeline from the 1st 4-5 months of the show: my story started in Oct. 2012 too. The whole finding out about her father's (fake) death and then deciding to go back to NY happened in in April of 2013: "Mat jao Zoya" happened then, remember?

I actually started writing this FF in April of 2013 just around that time. So Jas is right, it's been around since then. My story changes from that point. In my FF, Tanu plays her cards around May.

They take the trip to Ajmer-Agra and the Asya reconciliation in the Thai restaurant probably happened around late May-early June. So Asya got married sometime in July-ish. Again I kept the dates blurry so I wouldn't be restricted by them too much! 😉

In my Asya world it's now June of 2014 (it could be early or late June, even I don't know 😃.

If Zoya's 7 months pregnant, then she got so around Dec. of 2013. It was important for me to let them have those few months of protected post-wedded bliss!

Does that seem about right? I have taken a great deal of license with dates/time, I know. So MayurChan is also right to think that she's been pregnant for an awfully long time.

Here's the thing: I never imagined that this story would explode into a 110 chapters (I'm working on the 111th!): it's now officially a spin-off soap opera. I no longer say that I'm a FF writer; now I call myself a desi soap writer!

When I first started writing this, I thought I'd write a few chapters and get the Asya bug out of my system. Then it grew into 22 chapters when they confessed their love for each other. But I felt that their story was still incomplete because the families had to be brought together and the Tanu-virus still needed to be eradicated. Haha, I took at least 70 chapters to do that! 😲😲😲

Are you too unhappy about that? I have a confession to make: I'm not!😃

Then I thought, OK may be I'll be done by chapter 50. But then the suhaag raat happens in chapter 48 so I had to still keep going: honeymoon bhi to karna tha!

And I kept writing cos. I was still in love with Asya and didn't know how to stop. By that time I stopped keeping track of internal time so minutely. I kept time details purposely obscure, that's why no mention of birthdays and Eid.

Time-wise, things get really iffy between the nikahs of Najma and Nikhat. In my story Najma gets married within a month of Asya's wedding-I might even go back and change the time-specification on that. I imagined that Feroze was in India in early summer for Omar's wedding and then stayed on to woo and then eventually marry Nikhat. But even I admit that I've stretched time in some places/plot strains and compressed it in others.

Hey, I'm pleading the fifth! It's writer's license!

And yes, Jas is right again: wrapping up Tanveer's involvement messed up whatever time-logic I might have had. In my mind I knew that if I got rid of her too soon, my story would end too.

And I wasn't ready to do that as yet because as you can see, I am still wildly in love with Asya. I wasn't ready for this FF to end. So Tanveer had to stick around: she provided me a way to add drama, emotion and action. Yes, those chapters have elongated time: I may have taken 8-10 months to write those, but within the story only 4-5 months may have passed.

Once Tanveer was killed off, I thought, uh-oh, what now? But looks like Asya continue to populate my mind and their world with wonderful ideas. Let's see how long I can keep pulling this off. I really wouldn't know what to do with myself if I end this 😭

So that, my friends, is how time has passed (or not passed 😉) inside Asyaworld: it's still mid-2014 there. And if I had the ability to do so, it might still be 2014 in their world for a long, long time!

Edited by Klondy - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Hello Dee... 😃
Thanx for the PM...😊
Well first of all Before I😳 start of my Rant..😆 I would like to say this ki I know the time difference is their...and even the show never followed the diff...but at that time also during Dilshaad's 10 day challange...it took them 1 1/2 months...to show the wedding...but then again the Eid spl epi was on time...so As J.D said..maybe...Writers liberty at bay...aNd Now I accept that.. 😊
Your Post answered and cleared all the things J.D. ⭐️
And yesh...like you I also need more...till the time you feel...you continue...I will be their for it... 😃
Now I will start...ranting. 😉

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Well the first part...started of With AsYa still discussing over that Trust fund..
Hmm...waise Shireen's idea was very good and thought full...but Zoya's time fo this Idea is very tricky...uske Hormones...they will always keep her skeptical about this..fund I guess..
The Idea about apps for women...and then the money used for them...was very good...
And the thought process again...is very very good and deserves applauds... 👏
I also feel confused with the terms you used...and then Zoya's Tech'Verse...like that ' SitRep ' thing..Ha.Ha.Haa...
Bechara Asadd...
And again I got to know a piece of history..which was never discussed before I guess...the strikes...like Asad said...how do you know all these...pata hai you read...bt phir bhi kaiseee...
The past memories...again revisited...and now this time..they are healing each other of every bad and worse past..memories..with newer one...and this is very very touching too see and read ..

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