Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I always loved this bench talk between ASYA...this is the most significant part for them I guess in building their relationship...time by time strengthening it...ad giving the that neutral place where they can share their heart to heart with each other...😳👏 As here they discussed about how Asad was feeling at that time during that whole initial parts...and well even readers I guess nobody tried to see or think about his pain and grief...at that time..and that is why world is so biased sometimes with womens emotions that they forgot that even men are going through same pain... I don't know why she remembered this suddenly...but it was good on your part you decided to show this point in here...👏 And yes...Asad was right as a human not morally for society but true that he should have chosen love over principal ...but he was the one trapped and fixed their so we don't know what goes on in his head...and judging him will be harsh on his part...😊 Now the most Hilarious part of the update the night dream...😆😆 HORMONES😆 HORMONES😆

and
HORMONES😆
This is just the starting period for Asad,...this is going to be fun ahead for us and very hard for KANEEZ's JAHANPANAH...😆
And the cute after manofyings are so pleasure to read..
😳😃😊..
Then the Hospt part...
I don't have any experience on that part...neither info also,,,...
But their talk made some sense...
Again the kissing the sonogram part was adorably cute😃
And another addition to baby's diary...😆
Then again some past moments remembered...
Sometimes how much you move on in your life...you can never let go off some memories which have actually constructed your present base and future foundation...😕


I love to write moments of Asya togetherness and their talks. I think Zoya thought of those initial days because of their short separation- -she had been looking at the pictures and albums. I also wanted to show Asad's awareness of getting his courage to own up from both his mom and dad. I loved writing the night scene when Zoya goes crazy jealous.

I had to research whether India allowed sonograms and I found out that they do. And we couldn't see the baby in the image either so the sonographer had draw it out for us. And then their talk about baby pictures was the perfect opportunity to bring up some happy moments from the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Mayurchan, did I send you a PM this time? Hope I did cos. you seem to have read the chapter. But I can't find the PM in the outbox. Strange.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Klondy

Mayurchan, did I send you a PM this time? Hope I did cos. you seem to have read the chapter. But I can't find the PM in the outbox. Strange.

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Yes Ofcourse I receieved a PM...
It happens sometimes with the forum...
No worries..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Hey Dixiej.. 😊
How are you..?
Hope you are Happy and Healthy...
Will start off my Rant now.. 😆
But Heyy...before that..
You answerd the PM i told you to Ignore and you Ignored the right PM...how funny that was..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
First of all don't be sorry or apologize about the GIF's... J'
It enhances the written part more...so their is no way it could get better than them,...so yes it is a lot easier to scroll down...but not at the worth of Gif's.
OK.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Again a new refreshing start to the day in KV...
How I miss those mornings...in KV now...as I have read this scene...they actually use to have more fun than any other thing...the show actually got strengthened with this House scenes only..
I seriously liked this morning scene...Zoya being scolded by Dilshaad like a mother scolds to a school girl...
That little talk about Sausraal's between Najma & Zoya was very cute...
AsYa's inner convos...
I loved Asad's reply with his ring...it shows so much thought process he vents into anything.. The Inscriptions are just the rightest thing to be inscripted...even than the words they said aren't as valuable as they are now on that ring'..
Bravo thing about that Ring inscriptions..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I was a little confused in the 2nd part at first ki...why was Razia talking to Zainab...but then I read further and got to know she was talking to her Grave..
This Redemption part of Razia amazes me now...it is actually not hard but difficult to imagine so soo drastic changes in her character here in this story...
Come to think of it I have never seen her greyish in the whole story only..
Her acceptance towards Her guilt...accepting Zoya wholeheartedly...and now here repent...is very well written part.
I can actually say that I like Razia also..here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Rest I will continue tommorrow...
Its 4 in the morning here...so please...excuse me.
Take care J'
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: MayurChan

First of all don't be sorry or apologize about the GIF's... J'
It enhances the written part more...so their is no way it could get better than them,...so yes it is a lot easier to scroll down...but not at the worth of Gif's.
OK.



I know. I'm fond of the gifs and pictures myself! I just wish that it didn't slow the page from loading so much. I know many readers use their phones so it must get annoying.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Again a new refreshing start to the day in KV...
How I miss those mornings...in KV now...as I have read this scene...they actually use to have more fun than any other thing...the show actually got strengthened with this House scenes only..
I seriously liked this morning scene...Zoya being scolded by Dilshaad like a mother scolds to a school girl...
That little talk about Sausraal's between Najma & Zoya was very cute...
AsYa's inner convos...
I loved Asad's reply with his ring...it shows so much thought process he vents into anything.. The Inscriptions are just the rightest thing to be inscripted...even than the words they said aren't as valuable as they are now on that ring'..
Bravo thing about that Ring inscriptions..






Thanks MayurChan! Yeah, the show did things right during those early days. A giggly Najma and Zoya, an indulgent Dilshad and a permanently akdu Asad were a joy during those days. Love these four-they deserve all the happiness I can think of!
Edited by Klondy - 10 years ago

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