Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 10

Originally posted by: MayurChan

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3765216#p93585962

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3751874

These are the links...if you feel like doo check them.
These are about Ayaan's and AsYa's baby...but worth a read..

Originally posted by: MayurChan

So Here comes the Godh bharai part...
The function seem very interesting...similar to how Hindu culture also follows...with some little things here and their..
The Jewellery thing...between Zoya and Razia & Gaffur was very good part...but I wonder...Zoya likes Indian wears na..but no jewellery...but nevertheless she knows better...her own taste of choice...
The photos and GiF's here used on AsYa pic..and GaZia's pic with Zoya..was M.A..truly fitted the bill...
The games were very funny...( Thanks Iansomer and your other friends fo that.)
The Nappy wala was funny...all the experience and training..had made Gaffy well equipped as of now...and then it reminds me of that part where he prommised that he will change his Grandchild's nappy's when Zoya confronted him in the hospt after ' THAT ' incident..
But again...Ayaan was as careless as ever...Humeiroo ko bahut training deni hai abhi issey..
Asad's was the most...cutest in this all...he will teach his baby all the angles..while changing his / her nappy only...but that part was very cute and adorable...and Zoya taking Asad's side...infront of Dilshaad...
And then that eyelock...just the time when the descended down the stage...with the nappied baby and those emotions were wonderful...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Then Dilshaad's POV...was perfect...like the way you presented her POV when AsYa united after 'THAT' incident...on the breakfast table..where she was reading some newspaper...and remincising those days..and then feeling content about the today.
How accurately she defined all AsYa* antics , their Aankh maicholis'..,their Eyelocks..and tugging and all...how much she observe them...it like she is reading them...
And she has to play the Cop here...as in from the starting only...when Asad has become soo Behaya'...infront of her..all thanks to her laadli Bahu*..but it is good..Asad needed that lightness in his life..
Then also her observation about Rashid was also very emotional part...
Asad's part with the baby was also very adorable and good...
You also didn't forget to remind us of those they ( AsYa ) write on eachother..
Asad's monologue...was very mature..and very thoughtfull also..
And Zoya's fears about baby's head...are just hilarious...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heeere comes the last part of my InFamous Rants...
Well I guess you like giving proper footage to all couples...like here also AyRa..also got a very cute scene...
Well I guess.Now Ayaan..is truly in his Bhaijaan"s shoes now...because he is getting jealous of Asad because his own wife was not cheering for him...
He got the taste of his own unintentional medicine or thing which he did during Ajmer track...
Even that Monkey's kick...which you discussed here ...was also a funny part...
Well I have a OS which shows the exact same Ayaan's and Asad's fear...of giving Ayaan to hold the baby..but he turns out to be a better baby sitter..
That monkey thing reminded me that how long we have come Dixiej...you as a writer and I as a reader...Pretty Nostalgic..
Brilliant writing as always...
Loved reading it...Continue soonish..

Originally posted by: Klondy

Oh my god, yes! We have come a long way indeed. What a pleasure it's been! Iwanted the 1st and last scenes as mirrors of each other and I'm glad you saw the reminder: Asad was jealous then and Ayaan jealous now.

Yes those stories of Ayaan as the best chachu in the world were really sweet and so refreshing. I usually try to avoid reading any Asya stories-I don't want to be evensubconsciously influenced.

Hmm, what does this mean: the dot next to my IF username was red yesterday but now is green? Do you have any idea why that changes color?

And now it's red again. Why?

Originally posted by: Klondy

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Itt is RED when you are OFFLINE..
and It is GREEN when you are ONLINE...rest it is affected because of some I.F complexities..you refresh your page...and it will be back to normal again...