Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
You know I have just decided that I will post my comments in these breakups only...from now on...
I have done a little check on my own and found out few things...
1) Asad & Zoya were married in Chapt 47 dated on Oct 1 2013..
2) Asad first used this line " Tonight Mrs.Khan you will be so full of Me "...in Chapt 68 dated 21 Dec 2013...
3) Zoya first came to know about her pregnancy in Chapt 71 dated 10 Jan 2014...
So I was wondering...It is almost like 1 1/2 years for their marriage...and still Anniversary part is late..
And logically thinking going by the dates...she has been pregnant since 15 months..and still she hasn't started showing up...
Nothing to worry was just asking these questions...like that..
And Yeah...while reading ASYA's nikaah part...I remembered how very accurately you mentioned about the happenings in this update...Bravado...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: MayurChan

You know I have just decided that I will post my comments in these breakups only...from now on...
I have done a little check on my own and found out few things...
1) Asad & Zoya were married in Chapt 47 dated on Oct 1 2013..
2) Asad first used this line " Tonight Mrs.Khan you will be so full of Me "...in Chapt 68 dated 21 Dec 2013...
3) Zoya first came to know about her pregnancy in Chapt 71 dated 10 Jan 2014...
So I was wondering...It is almost like 1 1/2 years for their marriage...and still Anniversary part is late..
And logically thinking going by the dates...she has been pregnant since 15 months..and still she hasn't started showing up...
Nothing to worry was just asking these questions...like that..
And Yeah...while reading ASYA's nikaah part...I remembered how very accurately you mentioned about the happenings in this update...Bravado...




Oh my god, have I become like the terrible CVs of desi soaps?
LOL!

But don't go by the dates of posting the chapter. Some chapter events may have happened on the same day or just a few days apart. So I might have written 10 chapters in 6 months but inside the FF, only a month may have passed!

According to the internal timeline of my FF, Zoya is about 5 months pregnant and their anniversary is coming up. Soon.

In the FF timeline they are a year behind. They got married sometime in June 2013. I kept it all deliberately vague. If you recall from the show, Mangalpur happened around late Jan-Feb. So they just celebrated Mangalpur anniversary: that's when Asad bought her the hand cuff charm for her bracelet.

Now in the FF it's around March-April 2014. So they're exactly a year behind.

But yes, I've kept time vague and fuzzy hence no mention of birthdays or even Eid. I might change that though.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Klondy





Oh my god, have I become like the terrible CVs of desi soaps?
LOL!

But don't go by the dates of posting the chapter. Some chapter events may have happened on the same day or just a few days apart. So I might have written 10 chapters in 6 months but inside the FF, only a month may have passed!

According to the internal timeline of my FF, Zoya is about 5 months pregnant and their anniversary is coming up. Soon.

In the FF timeline they are a year behind. They got married sometime in June 2013. I kept it all deliberately vague. If you recall from the show, Mangalpur happened around late Jan-Feb. So they just celebrated Mangalpur anniversary: that's when Asad bought her the hand cuff charm for her bracelet.

Now in the FF it's around March-April 2014. So they're exactly a year behind.

But yes, I've kept time vague and fuzzy hence no mention of birthdays or even Eid. I might change that though.


No don't you dare even put your name alongside some TRP crap beggars...
You are in a league of your own...
I just pulled out a little Rakesh's thing here...getting some facts refreshed here...so now worries...as I said I was revisiting those days and chapt...
But I had this doubt about Zoya's pregnancy..so wanted to asked...and it is cleared now...nothing else.
Take Care.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Hello Dixiej...😊

Its been so long...since you updated...😕😆 But How are you ?😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The start mostly discussed Zoya's pregnancy issues ...as now she is being progressing in her term...😛 The jeans thing and Jahanpanah's kammez😊 and kaneez😉 are both very sticky to him...😆 You know what Zoya said about itching part was correct we don't care about possible after effects till the time we get peace in scratching it now itself...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dixiej...😊

Its been so long...since you updated...😕😆 But How are you ?😃


I know, this one took a longer time! I'm good! How're you?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Then the part next to it Shireen missing Ayaan...well whatever it may be she is so possessive about Ayaan...I mean she loves him a lot...but then I wonder how kum she left him when she came to know about Rashid's first wife...Ayaan was with Asad na at that time...😕,,don't know what happened at that time...
Then the proposed idea to go back to SM...but as Zoya & Dilshaad said Asad has made this house with his blood and youth...he will always cherish this house to death...and I liked the Idea were they said elders living in SM and youngsters in KV...but Zoya horrified by the idea itself...cancels it.😆
That starting sher about the house only was a wonderful foundation for ASYA's relationship😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I always loved this bench talk between ASYA...this is the most significant part for them I guess in building their relationship...time by time strengthening it...ad giving the that neutral place where they can share their heart to heart with each other...😳👏 As here they discussed about how Asad was feeling at that time during that whole initial parts...and well even readers I guess nobody tried to see or think about his pain and grief...at that time..and that is why world is so biased sometimes with womens emotions that they forgot that even men are going through same pain... I don't know why she remembered this suddenly...but it was good on your part you decided to show this point in here...👏 And yes...Asad was right as a human not morally for society but true that he should have chosen love over principal ...but he was the one trapped and fixed their so we don't know what goes on in his head...and judging him will be harsh on his part...😊 Now the most Hilarious part of the update the night dream...😆😆 HORMONES😆 HORMONES😆
and
HORMONES😆
This is just the starting period for Asad,...this is going to be fun ahead for us and very hard for KANEEZ's JAHANPANAH...😆
And the cute after manofyings are so pleasure to read..
😳😃😊..
Then the Hospt part...
I don't have any experience on that part...neither info also,,,...
But their talk made some sense...
Again the kissing the sonogram part was adorably cute😃
And another addition to baby's diary...😆
Then again some past moments remembered...
Sometimes how much you move on in your life...you can never let go off some memories which have actually constructed your present base and future foundation...😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

The start mostly discussed Zoya's pregnancy issues ...as now she is being progressing in her term...😛 The jeans thing and Jahanpanah's kammez😊 and kaneez😉 are both very sticky to him...😆 You know what Zoya said about itching part was correct we don't care about possible after effects till the time we get peace in scratching it now itself...😳


I know! Instant relief is best.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Then the part next to it Shireen missing Ayaan...well whatever it may be she is so possessive about Ayaan...I mean she loves him a lot...but then I wonder how kum she left him when she came to know about Rashid's first wife...Ayaan was with Asad na at that time...😕,,don't know what happened at that time...

Then the proposed idea to go back to SM...but as Zoya & Dilshaad said Asad has made this house with his blood and youth...he will always cherish this house to death...and I liked the Idea were they said elders living in SM and youngsters in KV...but Zoya horrified by the idea itself...cancels it.😆
That starting sher about the house only was a wonderful foundation for ASYA's relationship😃



Yeah, the writers would sometimes forget their own ideas. Don't know how she could leave her 2 year old kid. But I guess they needed that to show the closeness between Asad and Ayaan.
And that sher of hers about the house is so cute.


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