Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 3

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dixiej...😊 Thanx a lot for the P.M...😛 I Apologise that I took a whole lot of 3 days to comment...because I was caught up with some thing , some personal loss & a whole lot of search for right words for this comment...😳 So without wasting anymore time I would start off my rant...😊

Well it was actually a bad timing for Asad for announcing his plan for a trip when he himself was ordering Zoya to dare even think about it...so so MERA BECHARA ASAD...😆

Jerry did planned a wicked Jhatka ( read lightening ) for her Tom this time...😉 , but she was also stucked by it...😕

There is a saying BY AMIR KUSROW-

AZ MAST KI BAR MAST CHON DIGARI NIST...

If you didn't got it...it is their in JODHA AKBAR ( 2008 ) when Jodha & Akbar have a sword fight...😊 and it means - " Whatever Happens To Us It Is Our Fault , Because Their Is NO Other..😊

I really liked that scene where Razia very smartly and wholeheartedly gave the dresses to the girls for a change so that Zoya would not feel a little left out...Though it Reminded Zoya about her Mother...and Najma about her mother's helplessness and her brother's hard work...Another reason why I look upto Asad...👏

This little good gesture by Razia did mended Siddiqui's heart about her I guess...

The graveyard part was a touchy & emotional part...😭

And now my most FAV parts starts from here...😃

Zoya avoiding Asad...but then took his call they argued and just cut off eachother...😆 sometimes I feel why do they do that to eachother but then one dialogue from Dilshaad reminds me that these fights & arguments are only a foreplay which triggers a future ROLEPLAY for them...😉

Hahaha😆 Razia answer to Zoya about Asad's boxing the ear part was the funniest part in the whole update...🤣

Now at night she is missing Asad...

Ghalib' says

ISHQ PAR ZOR NAHIN HAI YEH WOH ATTISH HAI ,

JO LAGAYE NA LAGE , AUR BHUJHAYE NA BANE...

She debated with herself about calling him or going back to him...but our ' Mr.Batman cum Tom' was so impatient that he didn't want to miss out on her before his trip...so he only came...

LET YOURSELF BE DRAWN BY THE STRONGER PULL

OF THAT WHICH YOU TRULY LOVE...

- RUMI

Even Dobby was missing his DADDY...🤣

But I have to put this forward being worried about a pregnant wife who can easily convert herself into a HORMONALLY DRIVEN LOVE KA FARISHTA WITH A AMERICANESE SLANG...then if Asad wanted to keep her safe by not allowing her Travel...then that doesn't mean he is comparing anything...And that has nothing to do with what he has between his legs...😉

The breakfast part was also very good and well written...

Zoya also claimed and accepted that 'Akdu Khan urf Batman Urf JAHANPANAH SIXPACKS' did deserve some pampering...😃

AYRA nikaah happened with a lots of selfies , sister talks , exchanging FAMILY JEWELLERIES , a replay of a former act of naughtiness and a whole lot of heartaches to our Shireen...by seeing Humeira's & Zoya's bond I wonder they would even discuss their honeymoons also not the HARDEST one...I wonder😆

You know the part where all women enjoyed dancing and singing while working was a good scene which actually reflects that how even during a moping time women has a lot of things to cheer about...👏

Now the most awaited HYD - trip ;

TRAVEL BRING POWER AND LOVE BACK INTO YOUR LIFE

- RUMI

And that is I get what has happened between them...though LOVE was already their with IMMENSIVE POWER...but still this trip I guess will increase it tenfolds for them...😃

And with all those notes and various postcards which Asad got and was sending for Zoya respectively...were a proof of it...😳

And it was like and well described by RUMI -

WHEREVER YOU ARE AND WHATEVER YOU DO

BE IN LOVE

And seeing Asad's efforts of writing all those little TWO LINERS and Zoya's poems for him...I would dedicate them a poem -

IN YOUR LIGHT , I LEARNED HOW TO LOVE ,

IN YOUR BEAUTY , HOW TO MAKE POEMS ,

YOU DANCE INSIDE MY CHEST , WHERE NO ONE SEES YOU,

BUT , SOMETIMES I DO , AND THAT SIGHT BECOMES THIS ART -

RUMI

Their conversation at the time in night was so awestrucking , cute and even naughty by ZOYA😉 at the end...

So all and all it was a flawless and wonderfully written part...⭐️

So I will end this Post by this poem...which I would have used in Zoya's place...for her reply to Asad's postcard...

EK DIN HAMARE AANSOON NE POOCHA ,

HUMEY ROZ KYUN BULATE HO ,

MAINE KAHA HUM YAAD TOH UNHE KARTE HAI ,

TUM KYUN CHALE AATE HOO...😃

Yes , He was a close friend...but we actually lost touch for few months but this sudden news is a big big shock for me and my other friends...we all are a school gang and he was one of them...
I just hope his Soul Rest in Peace and serenity wherever he is now..

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Yes , He was a close friend...but we actually lost touch for few months but this sudden news is a big big shock for me and my other friends...we all are a school gang and he was one of them...
I just hope his Soul Rest in Peace and serenity wherever he is now..

Originally posted by: Klondy

So sorry to hear about your friend MayurChan. He must have been very young-sounds terribly unfair and tragic.

He was 23 only...
But he had a tough life...

Hello Dixiej... 😊
Thanx a lot for the P.M... 😛
I am happy that the start of this week has happened with your update... 😳
How Have you been...? 😊

So I would start off my rant now... 😆
Asad and Zoya still burning in this short trip created distance between them...and Craving for each other like never before ...surely a little distance will be a blessing in disguise, it makes the worth and value of a person in our life from ordinary to special & from Special to priceless possession...and Iam glad I was able to witness and read this part between them... 😃
Zoya in here is one hell of a tease ...how she teased her husband last night be sleeping in like that...and if that was not enough...she send those MSG's cum Love pure Adultarated Notes to her Husband...who I think is already regretting his meeting...she surely is a saasy and a fierce woman...and I adore this fact about her...👏
And then her caring side...which was still beside her Hormonal side...trying to overcome the void created by this short trip...I was actually worried for her when that whole rape thing occured to her...and her fears were spot on...
Kudos to you again and again... for giving a social message and awareness about such issues with your work...and this is your fineese that you know how to use them in such a passionate and intense love story...

Zoya's nightmares again made an entry because of the situation in which she was like in this hormonal & emotional mess...she is in...and the time when she truly needs her Husband's confronting Arms...but she is left craving for that...I know I would be rude...but I liked reading this part...
The Peanut issue was actually a funny element in this emotionally dipped times...
How Zoya was talking about the ways he would be objected to this allergy when they will be intimate...Sometimes it is funny to read about a woman's thoughts...like these...

Asad's situation just now reminded me of Hrithik's Roshan's costume from the song..." Main Aisa kyun Hu " from the movie ' Lakshaya '...their he is tied with a cloth type ropes all over his body...and he has to express his helplessness...in this situation where he can do nothing about it...

I don't know what to feel...it was me who said you to send Asad away...ALONE...for a few days...but seeing Zoya's condition and Asad's helplessness is giving me a little guilt kind of a feel...I know Iam weird by thinking so much about a fictional character...but my involvement is such that I can't help...
Especially that part where Zoya was crying and thinking about that news and imagining things...and Asad was as helpless...but I would think next time before giving in my thoughts..

It was nice in a way that all the elders of the house decided to cheer the moping wives here...especially Zoya...who needs special attention...
Rashid and Gaffur here are more used and well managed when compared to the show...
The balloons idea was very good , Nikhat remembering her own little part of her love story , Zoya gloating about being the Fairy here also...and Najma again being well fascinated by her Superwoman of a Bhaabhi...
Nuzzhat's part was the funniest..., being not minding a Heart shaped balloon , to being teased as a mother of a Dog while Faiz being the father...
The songs were very good...,special mention to the Pics and Gif's used here...

So Mr.Khan Finally decided to cut short his trip because he can't help himself and be worried for Zoya...being away from her... 😊 And the welcome suprise he gave to Zoya was very good...and the response to it was even more better...😉 Zoya finally feeling safe and home in her Husband's Arms...😃 😃
Her Monolgue's during her convo with Dilshaad were very funny and horrible also... 😆 But when I read the part in the morning...the Telegrams weren't their i guess...?
Will read it again...
AWESOME , FLAWLESS & WONDERFULLY WRITTEN part... 👏 ⭐️,
Continue soon. 😃