Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 4

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dixiej... 😊
Thanx a lot for the P.M... 😛
I am happy that the start of this week has happened with your update... 😳
How Have you been...? 😊

Originally posted by: Klondy

Thanks Mayurchan you're so sweet. I've been busy. I went to India for a week to meet my parents"Mumbai and Goa! I had very little net access there.

Now I'm back and will be joining work today :(

That is nice to hear...
A much needed break with family...visiting family...
Iam happy about your trip...
Ahh..!! Monday Blues.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

So I would start off my rant now... 😆
Asad and Zoya still burning in this short trip created distance between them...and Craving for each other like never before ...surely a little distance will be a blessing in disguise, it makes the worth and value of a person in our life from ordinary to special & from Special to priceless possession...and Iam glad I was able to witness and read this part between them... 😃
Zoya in here is one hell of a tease ...how she teased her husband last night be sleeping in like that...and if that was not enough...she send those MSG's cum Love pure Adultarated Notes to her Husband...who I think is already regretting his meeting...she surely is a saasy and a fierce woman...and I adore this fact about her...👏
And then her caring side...which was still beside her Hormonal side...trying to overcome the void created by this short trip...I was actually worried for her when that whole rape thing occured to her...and her fears were spot on...
Kudos to you again and again... for giving a social message and awareness about such issues with your work...and this is your fineese that you know how to use them in such a passionate and intense love story...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Zoya's nightmares again made an entry because of the situation in which she was like in this hormonal & emotional mess...she is in...and the time when she truly needs her Husband's confronting Arms...but she is left craving for that...I know I would be rude...but I liked reading this part...
The Peanut issue was actually a funny element in this emotionally dipped times...
How Zoya was talking about the ways he would be objected to this allergy when they will be intimate...Sometimes it is funny to read about a woman's thoughts...like these...

Asad's situation just now reminded me of Hrithik's Roshan's costume from the song..." Main Aisa kyun Hu " from the movie ' Lakshaya '...their he is tied with a cloth type ropes all over his body...and he has to express his helplessness...in this situation where he can do nothing about it...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I don't know what to feel...it was me who said you to send Asad away...ALONE...for a few days...but seeing Zoya's condition and Asad's helplessness is giving me a little guilt kind of a feel...I know Iam weird by thinking so much about a fictional character...but my involvement is such that I can't help...
Especially that part where Zoya was crying and thinking about that news and imagining things...and Asad was as helpless...but I would think next time before giving in my thoughts..

Originally posted by: MayurChan

It was nice in a way that all the elders of the house decided to cheer the moping wives here...especially Zoya...who needs special attention...
Rashid and Gaffur here are more used and well managed when compared to the show...
The balloons idea was very good , Nikhat remembering her own little part of her love story , Zoya gloating about being the Fairy here also...and Najma again being well fascinated by her Superwoman of a Bhaabhi...
Nuzzhat's part was the funniest..., being not minding a Heart shaped balloon , to being teased as a mother of a Dog while Faiz being the father...
The songs were very good...,special mention to the Pics and Gif's used here...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

So Mr.Khan Finally decided to cut short his trip because he can't help himself and be worried for Zoya...being away from her... 😊 And the welcome suprise he gave to Zoya was very good...and the response to it was even more better...😉 Zoya finally feeling safe and home in her Husband's Arms...😃 😃
Her Monolgue's during her convo with Dilshaad were very funny and horrible also... 😆 But when I read the part in the morning...the Telegrams weren't their i guess...?
Will read it again...
AWESOME , FLAWLESS & WONDERFULLY WRITTEN part... 👏 ⭐️,
Continue soon. 😃

Originally posted by: Klondy

I know I adore this about Zoya too: sass and love, all rolled into one. Thanks for appreciating the social message.

But you know, it was more autobiographical this time. I remember when I was pregnant I heard a similar report on the news and was really upset with the same fears. If I remember correctly, my husband was traveling then too! I still remember that exactly at that point my friend's son had come to drop some food off and he later told his mom: aunty seemed to be really upset, as though she was crying. The problem is that for parents of girls these fears never really go away.

Yes...because during ASYA's honeymoon also when they were in Agra during that schuffle...you presented a strong msg at that time also...and now to...
I sincerely don't know how must you have felt about that time on similar situation...but I can truly understand the fear...here...like few updates back...how we talked about checking the breathing of our Loved ones while they are asleep...this is also a fear we have after such incidents...I have them for my sisters...and become paranoid for a period over if they are not at home at time...
But it is a fear we have to live by I guess...
I didn't knew my little suggestion about the trip goes back this long in your own world.

Originally posted by: Klondy

I had always wanted to bring up the allergy thing but didn't know how to work it in. This time the setting seemed perfect. Specially since I'd read about a recent report of exposing kids to nuts to reduce allergies. As an American, I can imagine Zoya craving PB&J sandwiches. It's such a staple here.

Haha, that HR song!

Well that answers your creativity and the thought process you put into every chapt...for grinding up these ideas...and not just creating them...but to be able to place them perfectly...
Americans...you rock...Don't know about America... 😆

Originally posted by: Klondy

No, please don't feel guilty! It was a great idea and gave me some good moments to showcase Asya and their love. And they are back together now, stronger than ever.

As I said I may sound weird...but it just made me feel like that...
And yes...a little distance in relationship...and you fall back in the arms of your love and held them even stronger than ever...