FF: SECOND CHANCE with ASYA (update 28/09)

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Hi everyone here..
I am RV.. A new Kind of writer on I-F, Believe me I don't know how to write and what to write SERIOUSLY...
Continue this on your own risk..
As per the situtaion this is the best suiting Story i am having in my cup..
This story is also going on In ARSHI ff.. please do let me know how you guys feel about it..
SECOND CHANCE:

A bliss of winter morning adore her face, with the flow of air which is playing with her hair, giving her, or enhancing her beautiful features, what ever we say there is no ways to describe how beautiful and innocent she is. She is a charm of her own. People say glasses doesn't suit people but to her anything can suit, it's not that she have glasses but she use to wear those so no boys can look at her, but little did she knows, it enhance her beauty more.

She is so engross reading the card which she is holding like her life depend on it. She is not someone who will got lost in her thought but something which is trigging in that.Her phone rang suddenly breaking her train of thought, she remove her cell from her denim and a florist smile endure her face like a winter sun, clam and beautiful.

Before she can greet the person on the phone he said : what about a hot night with you dear?

She choke her coffee which she sip before receiving the call with morning breeze : huh!!

she is 100% sure on the other side of line the person is trying very hard not to laugh, she control her uneasyness and reply firmly but it didn't happen : Oh God ! Asad Ahmed Khan.!

He burst out laughter and she join him with no time.

Asad : so how's your coffee Zoya?

Zoya trying to clean the stain of coffee on the card which she just spilt because of him : just cleaning my morning Coffee which is now on your Wedding card.

Asad exclaimed : what you spilt on my wedding card?

Zoya with the most charming smile : It's not my fault you used some otter words. you know!

Asad : Please be on time yaar!

Zoya with a frown on her Face : I will try dear, you know, I don't think Ayaan will be free.

Asad : Hey tell your husband that it is my marriage, if he say something, you don't worry, I will drag him in my wedding.

Zoya laugh on his statements which is not even hilarious, but she did after all they are Best Friends From Ages.

Asad : Hey. He pause after that unable to voice his question.

Zoya can recognize his silent he is trying to ask him something and she knows what he want to ask her so she answer his un voice question : Tanveer is Perfect for you Asad.

She can bet he give his 1000 watt smile to Her.

Asad : Cool then, See you soon.

Zoya with same enthusiasm : See you then.

They hang up the Phone, and she let the card drop on her Coffee table. She sigh to herself : he is mad, madly in Love with Her I guess, before 3 months he has release his wedding cards, and laugh on her own thoughts

She voice her thought aloud to no one: Wish you Best Of Luck for your Life Asad.

Do tell me guys...RV ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res For Chappy Index..
Prolouge : Scroll Up
1.. Beginning ; Scroll Down..

7.. IN ME

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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The Upper Part is so Bad guys, that Not even A single Like or Comment..
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its better late than Never..
RV.. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FIRST LOOK :
BEGINNING...

It always seems like my first day on this premises, I am not kid now then why I feel always so unprotected? She laugh on her own thought and question herself, really am I unprotected? She enter the huge lobby of her college, which connect stairs to the first floor, canteen to right from the gate, library (her favorite place) which is located back from the wall of lobby, which face sport room in front. She knows everyone knows her almost (or because of her friend), this is not she want to be but this is what she is for, she is good in this and can do a lot with it, she loves to help people she want their sorrow to leave them so they can live their life normally, she wants everyone to be happy, every person to be cherish, what an uncertain dreams she have. In this Law School she wants to achieve everything to help other, this is what her dream and this is how Our Zoya is.

She took stairs to reach her class she is never late, but everyday can't be same right?

Two strong pairs of hand circle around her waist, and whisper in her ears : Morning sweet heart!

She flinch on the touch but she knows who that can be, as no one can ever do this with her accept only one person, her Buddy, her Beast friend. She turn around in his hand and push him hard on his chest with her full force. And with firm Voice she command him : Asad Ahmed Khan , don't touch me.

He chuckle on her words he always do, he is a man of golden Heart, he is a man of Dreams, Girls die for his one look, and he love to Kill them all. He is not a man who take advantages, he have a charm from which he even can't outrun with, all girls die on Him and He can not help that. A tall lean figure with perfect trim jaw and Golden brown chocolate eyes , he is a sweet heart of all of them.

He grab her hand and kiss her cheeks in response she closed her eyes in anticipation : I just wish you morning dear.

She opened her hazel brown eyes and push him again and sigh, she knows she can't ignore him : Morning to you too, Asad. And turn around to leave.

He exclaimed, he knows she don't like all this stuff, but he can't help himself, does he? : Just kidding yaar, you always look so hot, I can't keep.

Before he can't complete his sentence She cut him in between and hit him with her books and plied: Asad Ahmed Khaaannn... Please!

He Chuckle again and said : I love it yaar, when ever you take my name like this, what should I do to you dear. And with his thumb and forth finger he relax her forehead, which got wrinkle with their conversation. She sigh again. And with it he give his 1000 watt smile to her.

Asad : We are getting late, isn't we?

Zoya looked to her watch and sigh again: Because of you.

Asad question her : hey, why you sigh so much, you have any lungs problem which you never told me ? She looked at him with dragger in her eyes, he continue with awkward smirk on his lips: just kidding yaar.

After the class they both depart to their next classes, Zoya is in social law and Asad is in Criminal law, they both meet before a year when they both selected to be a partner on effect on criminal law on social law and orders, from that day they both are together, together like Best Buddies.

Zoya reached her next class she took a seat beside a fair girl with black long hair enough till her waist, a nose pin which adore her beautiful thin nose with beautiful Chinese's eyes.

Zoya pat her shoulder and greet her : Morning Zareen!

Zareen immediately pull herself from her seat and hug her warmly : Good Moring sweetie..

Zoya give her a warm smile and sit beside her.

Zareen asked her : so!?

Zoya confusingly : so what?

Zareen make a what so ever face : What is going on between you both?

zoya in utter confusion : Between who both?

Zareen don't act smart like face : Between you both, she throw her hands in Air to make her understand what she meant : between both of you, Asad and Zoya, she finally utter and she knows her friend who is so Dumbo.

Zoya laugh on her statement : Me and Asad? Are you crazy ? She poke her fingers on her face.

Zareen replies: Yeah I just saw you both near stairs you know, she said with matter of facts.

Zoya hit her head with her palm and then Zareen with the same: what gal, you know him, how can you even think that we both, I mean we both can be like that. She stop her sentence incomplete when she caught Payal gazing outside the class she follow her gaze and sigh again : Yeah yeah, Akash of course!

Zareen look at her in embarrassment : Sorry!

Zoya throw her hand on her shoulder and console her : Its okay, my friend is in love with that burger who don't even know your name.

Zareen look in her eyes and with full force of authority she said: He knows my name!

On which Zoya laugh her heart out, and after a while Zareen joined her too.

After class Zoya hold Zareen : Tell him that you like him.

Zareen in utter in disbelief : What?
Zoya with firm voice : Tell him before it's too late.

Payal look at her and found she is in deep thought she jerk her : Are you okay Zoya?

Zoya just nodded and move from their to library.

She was sitting on her usual table when Asad came and sit beside her, she didn't said anything nor did he initiate any topic, after a long silence Asad hold her hand and drag her outside the library,Zoya try to protest but his grip is firm and controlled, they reached back side of college and Asad left her hand, he tried to compose himself as he don't want to hurt her, he know something is bothering her, but what he don't know, he throw his hand in his hair and ruffle them, she is still standing their with no words, and starring down to her entangle fingers. Asad came near her and hold her hands with his one hand and with other hold her chin, and tilt it upward so he can see her eyes. He found moist in her eyes, which anytime can flow.

He compose himself and took her name with full affection he can carry : Zoya!

Without any delay she hug him and start sobbing, he know her very well she is strong girl, she is not that who can cry, she is in horrible grief which is hurting her and breaking her down. Without any other thought he throw his hands around her waist and pull her toward himself more.

Regards,
RV...
Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazinggg
plz cont soon
pm me
write ff in ur title plz it will help u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting. Can't say I'm happy with Asad and Tanveer, but if you're starting there, I'm assuming you have something up your sleeve LOL. Continue soon :) Curious to know what's next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochhug

Interesting. Can't say I'm happy with Asad and Tanveer, but if you're starting there, I'm assuming you have something up your sleeve LOL. Continue soon :) Curious to know what's next

Ofcourse dear they are not meant to be together at all, But Pardon me, Right now story Requirment it to keep them together.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story sounds interesting n fun...i love buddy stories...but I just hate asad tanveer & ayaan zoya thing...but I will wait for the story to unfold...plz plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very nice👏
cool start...must say...continue soon plx
plx pm me when u post the next
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My Memories...

After a while she broke her hug and again look down to ground

: I am sorry.

Asad hold her from her should and tilt her chin up so again he can look in her eyes : Don't say that, he hug her , what happened dear, tell me?

Zoya control her sob and before she can say anything he gesture her to sit on bench so they can talk easily, she followed him and sit beside him

Asad : now say what happen?

Zoya look in his eyes : Nothing Asad, Granny is in hospital.

Asad sigh and pull her toward him, she put her head on his shoulder and continue : Doctor said she don't have time. May be 2 or 3 days more. She again start sobbing. She looked at him on which he just nodded gesture her to continue : mom called me this morning, telling me to come back, but.. she pause on which Asad knows what, he voice her words : for always.

She nodded, he sigh on that. He again voiced her words: They also have someone for you, so you can settle. She again nodded, but this time he laugh on that.

She looked up to his face, without any thought she stood up and about to go away, before she can move out Asad grab her in hug, she try to free herself, but he is strong enough to hold her back : I am sorry dear, I just want to light up your mood, I don't want to offend you. He justify himself, before pulling out from hug, he asked her : You won't run away right?

He can bet she give him a smile, he can feel a warm breath on his chest which came from her mouth, which obviously bring smile on his face.

Without breaking hug : When are you leaving?

Zoya replied : Tonight.

Asad : When are you coming back?

No reply came from her side, he broke the hug and asked her again: when?

She looked up moisture in her eyes : Don't know. She said with matter of facts.

Asad : Okay then, I am coming with you, before she can protest he put his finger on her lips to shut her down, and continue : This is statement, I am not seeking for your permission. I will pick you up at 9pm okay. Be ready.

And he left her in utter disbelief, but not before smile endure her face.She knows he will never let her face alone, what ever the matter will be, he will always beside her.

Asad turn and with a huge grin he said : I know I am the best. And wink her and disappear behind huge wall which seperate college and this small secret garden of their secret meetings. She again smile for her Friend, who can do anything for her.

She meet him again in canteen and try to make him understand that he can't come, with idiotic excuses like : what about your girlfriend, what she will think. your project is incomplete, what everyone will think. what about new girl who's number you wants, you will miss her you know. All the lame excuses she used on him, but he is Asad he doesn't care. He knows she wants him, so he will be with her, then who cares what this world think. He drop her on her hostel, before she go she try last time to convince him not to come with all her courage she said last words she want to use in between them: Asad ! She pause

Asad: hmm. was his only answer before he look toward her.

Zoya took a deep breath and said in a one Go : They will think we are boyfriend girlfriend. When she opened her eyes she saw him looking at her with a smirk on his face and a big arch of eyebrow which is now reaching her hair or his forheadas half of his forhead is covered with his hair may be because of Air or due to consist habit of his playing with his own hairs he said : So, this is all your last excuse?

She curse her star for this and sigh, she knows this is the most ridicoules excuse she has ever given him, she knows everyone back to theri home knows him ( very well knows him, this is not first time he is going their with her) she took a huge sigh and went inside. still curing herself for what she said.

She has completed her packing and waiting for him to come, and as always he is on time, she took her bag and within seconds meet him in parking lot. He greet her and sit in his car.

Asad consciously asked her : What is the status Khushi?

Zoya look at him : Still alive. was her plain answer

Asad nodded on that.

Without any more fuss Zoya finally asked him : Asad why you are coming with me?

Asad just smile on her inquire but didn't answer, after that she even didn't asked him and rest of the journey went in complete silence just the songs which is humming in back ground. after a while she again broke the silence.

Zoya: Asad I want to say something'.

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Her trans of thought break by her name echo in the room..

A man shout again : Zoya Towel Please.

She took few seconds to come back from her trans and replied : Yup! One second honey!

A man peeped out from the door of bath room : Where were you lost?

She smile and handed him the towel : Just got lost some where I guess.

Man : Still you are same My Love.

Zoya inquire : You want me to change?

Man : No I like my Wife like this only.. He took a pause and with playful smirk he added : I guess.

Before she can throw anything on him he closed the door.with the bang which echo in whole room. She smile on his husband tectic and take a deep sigh..

She told him about wedding card of Asad and that she is already late so, she is leaving for work, his breakfast is ready on table, and plied him that he have it before leaving for work.

After good bye love you she seat in her car and drove off to her Office..

Note : guys anything you guys are not comfortable, please let me know, so we can work out with it.. it is my story and yours too, as a readers please correct me when i am wrong..RV...

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