FF: SECOND CHANCE with ASYA (update 28/09) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asya Freindship ❤️ :)
Hope v dnt hav to see much of tanveer nd asad..

Cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update...friends are always so very loving n caring...asya friendship is just pure n beautiful...I think so have portrayed asya as just best friends in this ff...it will be fun to read. ...lets see what happens next...plz continue soon. ...thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome story update nxt part asap and pm me when u update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part...plz RV do update daily plz
thanx for the pmm\
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its amazing bt i cnt say its interesting if its with Asad Tanveer
Bt its really superb jst the way u show the bond of friendship btw Asad Zoya although i feel Asad loves her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvpremi

Amazing update...friends are always so very loving n caring...asya friendship is just pure n beautiful...I think so have portrayed asya as just best friends in this ff...it will be fun to read. ...lets see what happens next...plz continue soon. ...thanks for pm. ...

I am glad you like it dear, and analysing also.. Although it is About a second chance which life gives us.. It is not that everyone get it, but when you get that, how you handle it and all.. Tanveer is not a big part in it, but very important.. Lets see what i can give you guys in next part..
And its completely my pleasure dear.. 😊
RV...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368

Its amazing bt i cnt say its interesting if its with Asad Tanveer
Bt its really superb jst the way u show the bond of friendship btw Asad Zoya although i feel Asad loves her

Asad and tanveer, even i don't appreciate it, but it is how the story will flow. just hold a bit and everything will be clear out.. Hope till then you will stick with it ... 😉😉
RV..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3:
Her Turmoil :

She peacefully drive to her office and occupy her desk, it is not she have to occupy it, its hers only. She felt a pat on her shoulder with a greet, with the genuine smile she greet back to the owner of voice : Morning to you too Zareen.

Zareen replied with the smile and hug her, Zoya just try to be careful with the hug, as Zareen is 6 months pregnant, it is not her 1 kid, but still she don't want to harm her, as she think she can.

Zareen : You won't harm her, if you hug me tightly dear.. She pat her stomach with her hand

Zoya with I didn't mean it face : HER? still why to take chance. She look to her stomach which is completely swollen due to pregnancy of course.

Zareen with what so ever face sit beside her : So?

Zoya : So! What ?

Zareen take out the card from her bag and show it to Zoya, Zoya again smile looking at it.

Zareen : So , Mr. six pack is getting married finally.

Zoya : It's high time dear, he should have marry before three years I guess..

Zareen : He is just 28 yaar, he don't have to marry so early, he is so young still..

Zoya with the girlish smirk : You are Pregnant Payal and this is third time.

Zareen poke her : So what?

Zoya with a smile and arch of eyebrow : Stop drooling over him now.

Zareen burst out in laugh which Zoya join in no time : I can't help it, Okay. she said with matter of facts. And who said you can't drool over someone if you are pregnant.

Zareen grab her attention and look right then left to make sure there is no eavesdroppers and they are secure with almost a whisper she asked her : How's everything is going on between you and Aayan?

After Asad Zareen is the only person who knows her so well, with Asad she has never discuss her married life, as she never felt to involve him in all the mess, and also that Asad and Ayaan are childhood friends, She don't want to between them, as she knows Asad will Break him into pieces if he hurt her even a bit. She bite her lower lip and curl it inside before replying to Zareen.

Zoya : Pretty well now.

Zareen arch her eyebrow upward.

Zoya : We both are trying Dear, in all marriage ups and downs come, we are trying. She conform, wish she can avoid this conversation right now, but Zareen is in no mood to avoid it, she cares for her, she wants her happy, she wants to help her friend, any how. She took Zoya hand and squeeze it a bit, Zoya sigh on her gesture and a lone tear come out from no where.

Zareen after a long pause asked her : Why don't you both go for a kid dear?

Zoya snap her head in Zareen direction, and want to say something but nothing came out, she close her mouth in thin line, Zareen squeeze her hand again and rub her thumb on her knuckle to give her little courage.

Zareen continue : I know I am saying but, may be kid will make your relationship again smooth, its been 4 years of your marriage.

Zoya nodded in approval but didn't said anything, after a pause she looked up and took Zareen hand which still on her lap, she kiss her knuckle and with a suppress smile said: Thank you.

some time silence speaks more then words
Zareen make a puppy face and with her one hand gesture like she got hurt, and squeeze her chest near Heart.

Zoya give a genius smile to her, which she reply with same.

Zoya :You know from month everything is going back to normal,we both are reciprocate equally on everything.she pressed her lip in thin line, which she even don't know, what she said is for convincing Zareen or to herself.

Zareen hug her on that, and whisper in her ear : God Bless you dear, may you have all your happiness.

Zoya reply in same : Thank you again, and same to you.

Zareen with utter confident : Zoya you also know what you said and this smile what you are giving me is not reaching you eyes.

Zoya didn't said anything, and Zareen also left for her table.

Zoya know her marriage is not working well but it is normal, not every time two people can't be lovey dovey and happy go lucky type, crisis came and they have to face them, together, She is happy that when ever something happened, Aayan was always their for her, he was always beside her, whatever he was, how ever he was, but he Love her and she love him too. But kids' It is always an issue for him, he don't want it right now, he says he is not ready. And she is ready to wait till he make his mind, She don't want more fuss regarding this issue, last time they talk about it, it was horrible. Right now she don't want it. It is not that when they both got married they both were Kids or they don't know each other, they both were in a relationship for 2 years before they got married, and now 4 years has been completed. 6 years of their courtship, they saw many ups and downs, but somewhere time doesn't matter, after 2 years of their marriage it was devastating, they both hardly talk to each other, just same routine they follow, sleep, eat, work and sleep again, no talk, no Romance nothing.. Just plain routine, but they work together in it, and still doing it. Its takes time to mend things, isn't it? Other side Zareen and Akash, they are madly in love, is madly a correct word to describe their craziness, 2 kids and one is on the way in 5 years. She shook all the thought aside, She take a deep breath and try to concentrate on her work.

After the failure of concentration on her work, she took a deep breath and throw her head on her head rest of chair.

Zoya : No, No Not again. She pressed her temple to smooth her nerves, but she knows it won't happen, her migraine won't leave her so easily.

Zareen look at her from the corner and with any delay reached her in neon second.

Zareen with concerned in her voice she inquire her : What happened? and answer her own question: Migraine.

Zoya just nodded, Zareen reached Zoya's purse and pull out her medicine and make her have it.

She told her to take little rest, and take half day.

Zoya didn't open her eyes and laid back on seat, in mean time Mr. Shetty came and inquire what happened, she told Zoya to take a rest and leave after she feel better.

She try to tell them that she have lots of pending work, but no one is ready to listen to her, she take it as her defeat and after a while she left for her home.

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ARE U THE SAME RASHIDA VALI ON DA WRITTEN UPDATES IPKKND PAGE?????Honestly speaking i was not interested in da arshi part as i was quite jelous cuz shyam-kkg and arnav-lav bt now cuz its asya am lyking dis and now am realising dat the story demanded it...hehehe sooo silly of me😉..post sooon and plz PM me i have sent u buddy request...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update soon :)
Thnx fr pm :-)

bt gt asad bak into the screen :P

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