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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome update waiting 2 see ayaan and zoya break up and want 2 see asya meet so update nxt part asap and pm me when u update...😊

HAHA... are dear, story is just started and you have planned the breakup also, let them do little romance and then we will thing of breaking them apart. what say??
what do you think Asad have to take a step for her or no? she should come to him??
Please do tell me, it will help me to write some twist. 😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL LIFE:

He hang his phone and took his cup and dispose in the sink, he tossed his mobile and start playing it with, his fingers are brushing it like feather they are, bliss of wind is blowing for the French window he turn around and lean his back on the glass, look toward the sky and close his eyes, and a beautiful smile start forming on his face, does any one have ever notice that he have a slight golden touch in his hair, a nature touch with red hint in it or it is due hue of winter sun shine, whatever the reason this is the moment no one want to miss, if they miss this creature standing alone and playing a breath taking smile on face their life is waste, it is like nature is against us today, wind is blowing and ruffling his hair like a silk is flowing carelessly on his forehead, who can resist this person now. I guess no one. Has anyone ever noticed the dimple which form on his chicks, a secret dimples, so secret that only that person can notice who is standing close to him very close. But he look lost, lost deep in the valley of memories, beautiful memories I guess. The depth of memories, seems like the most beautiful part of his life…

Two boys are playing in the college premises one is beating the other and second one is trying to protect himself from the beast, after a while they both heard a loud voice of thunder but how that can be possible the sky is clean and sun is shinning like it never before, in a while before they can catch a gust of wind blow beside them and their get a sudden hitch, they both froze in their position. Who the hell knows what happened, but this is the specialty of the College, no one can know what will happen next, when they both got their senses back, they saw a jet black sexy lean and shinning body, Thunder storm itself is standing in a parking lot , Harley Davidson. They both gasp the air in their lungs and horror is evident on their features, but it was not that catch their eyes, the person who own that grab their attention. When they notice he is coming toward them they forget how to breath, they want to run but their foot are not obeying their mind, they are paralyze over their, his face is hide with the cap on his head, he was walking with the authority, he have it charm, he is the body anyone will die for, with white shirt and black jeans is adoring his feature from the heaven. He move his cap backward so his ruffle hair move from his forehead so his sight get clear. He just look at two boys who are now praying to hell to swallow them, but nothing happened.

The person throw his both hand on either shoulders of them and ask them : what's going on guys?

Both with unison : nothing. Was all they can manage.

He look both of them one by one and arch his eyebrow to conform their answer.

One of them reply : Nothing, really, we both are practicing martial arts, Assad

Assad: really guys.

Second boy nodded in approval.

He remove his hand from their shoulder and with beautiful smile he told them : Guys this is not the place to practice why don't you guys carry on your work in play area.

Both of them just nodded to him, as they are not sure what voice they will make if they open their mouth.

Assad smile to them and patted their back and march toward the premise again. He wave his hand and gesture them Good bye, in which they just took a deep breath of relief.

He enter the lobby of college, within second two hand grab his waist from behind and greet him morning on which he lose the grip of the beautiful hand and turn around with the same smile: Morning sweet heart.

She smile back and kiss his cheeks in return, Assad grab her waist and kiss her cheeks.

She asked him: what was their behind?

Assad : nothing Alia, was just asking if they have any problem.

Alia with playful smile : come on everyone knows how you are.

Assad on which ask her again: how I am dear?

Alai roll her eyes : As you don't know, they both were trembling over their, when you raise your hand over her everyone was like statue type, like everyone forgot how to breath, you know something like that.

Assad laugh out loud on her review of the incident : why everyone thought that? Am I a bad guys over here, how will kill them?

Alia with pout : you know everyone is scared of you.

Assad look at the sun which is now covered with the clouds : am I that scary, I thought I am handsome.

Alia assure him: of course you are handsome Assad, but everyone over here knows how Law and Order Means to you, and they also remember how you have reacted on them when some guy has violence them.

Assad laugh again and said: that about year back.

Alia : but you impression is still their.

Assad sign on her comment : I don't want to be bad guy here.

Alia assure him again : no one is judging you Assad, they all respect you.

He sigh and open his eyes to look at her again but it never happened, a gust of Air hit him like a solid Iron bar, he hitch a bit, his eyes got stuck on their way, and his breath, it got lost suddenly somewhere..

What the hell ! He yelled in pain.

Note: Guys if you will ask me anything regarding this FF, i will comment, and reply you, so please don't feel like i haven't read your comment or appreciate it, Believe me I Do appreciate your words, it means something for the writer, isn't it..

Thanks for all the comments,

and really sorry, as for Ramadan I am little off from the forum. Hope you guys understand..

Tc

RV.. ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKU FOR THE SUPER DUPER UPDATE😃...thanx for the Pm tooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy EId Mubarak To all the forum MEMBERS..
Have a happy and Blessfull Eid..

😳HEARTs GAMES:😳

What the hell ! He yelled in pain.

What the hell means? I am shouting from past 15 mins but it seems like my brother is lost in some other world. A voice break his trans of thought and bring him back to earth. He continue with his anger or some kind of teasing tone : I know I know you were busy admiring your would be wife, but don't you feel bro, you are behaving like 16 year old boy who just lost his Virtue.

Assad glare at him and bark : what does that mean Ali?

Ali mock on his face: What do I mean, give thanks to God that no one is here in the house or they would have thought " oh! My boy is in love" kind, and that comment would have pissed you off. And I don't feel this will please you when you come out of your fantasy world, and thank me that I just tap a pan on your head to bring you back.

Assad massage his head where he hit him hard, R.E.A.L.L.Y H.A.R.D. : what ever.

Ali sit on the bar stool, which attach kitchen slab and living area together, he turn around to look outside the window, trying to figure out what was their which his brother was so engross to admire, that he even didn't heard his voice. Assad follow his gaze and after few second ask him.

What's their?

He look toward him and asked: Is Tanveer their?

Assad immediately replied : No! why would she be here?

Ali frown his brow, try to ask him something but after a thought ignore it.

After an uncomfortable silence Assad sit in front of him and said : Shoot!

Ali lied : Nothing Bro.

Assad look a him and roll his eyes, with the gesture Fu** off then.

Ali took his opportunity and in one go blurt out everything : Okay Big bro, we all know you are getting married but it doesn't mean that you start fantasizing about your girl in the morning, when you know your small brother don't have any.

Assad first look at him with open mouth and then burst out in laughter, Ali roll his eyes and wait till his brother get his breath back.

Assad put the back of palm on his mouth, clear his throat so he don't offend his little bro, punch his shoulder with his fist and said : Who told you I was thinking about Lav? Ali look at him with not so convince face : Okay I was thinking something but not about Lav. I promise.

Ali : But you were fantasizing?

Assad : No!

Ali : To whom you were thinking about?

Assad : No one!

Ali : You just said you were thinking.

Assad : Yes I said.

Ali shoot again: Okay what you were thinking about Zoya?

Assad without thinking blurt out : When I first saw her.

Ali pat his own shoulder in his head and exclaim : Bingo! I knew it.

Assad bit his tongue again that he said this thing and not even that he blurt this out in front of this Rascal. He sigh. And look at him like a tiger , an angry tiger, no angry, Lustful tiger, not even that, hungry tiger who is ready to have his prey in one go. Ali gulp down his excitement and suddenly he felt that the room temperature drop till zero, before Assad can catch his prey he took a chance and run toward his room and with a bang, it is silence again in the room. Assad sigh and take deep breath and exhale with her name " Zoya" .

Ali peep out from his room and said : You know what bro I learned this from you only, how to bring out truth from someone.

Before Assad can run after him he again close the door with the loud bang this time, Assad bang his fist on the door, but in return he heard his brother laugh.

Assad bang the door again: Open the God damn door Ali or I will f**k you like anything.

He heard another burst of laughter and then he replied : Bro accept it you still fantasies about her.

Assad with clench teeth groan: I don't! their was authority his voice that can convince anyone that he is telling truth.

Ali shout from the room : To whom you are trying to convince bro, me or yourself? He laugh his evil smile to which Assad want to break his jaw.

Assad with same authority : I don't Fantasize about her.

Ali shout again : May be you are telling truth but you can't run from the fact that she is the only girl even now her charm is same on you and still she is able to knock your breath out of your lungs, Bro. be a man and face it.. in the end his voice is not commanding or it contain any hummer but concern for his brother, a support which he want, which he want to give him. Which a brother can only give to his brother, young or adult doesn't matter in it.

He close his eyes, and took a sigh he leaned his head on the door, still his hand is fisted he can lie to everyone but he can't lie to himself, he knows still her charm, her effect, her innocence take his breath out from his lungs, her one look and he get lost in them as he lost in them when he saw them first, every time is like first time only, he turn around and lean his back on the same door which he was banging moment ago, he closes his eyes and went back to his memories. Memories which still hold her in the same manner like it is truth, it is present and not memory. Every detail every color of picture is same as it is happening right now. He still regret those moment, when he didn't said her anything he didn't purr his heart out, and still cherish all the moment when they both were together. And today she is with someone else and He is going to marry with someone. How life changed in so many ways, But still when he think about those memory when Assad and Zoya were together the innocent smile crept his face, which high light his every feature like a young boy got his birthday present and surprise party together with all his friend and family signing and dancing for him. But she is his Best Friend, and it is wrong, this feeling is wrong, she is married and happy, he have to bury them deep inside, D.E.E.P, D.E.E.P, D.E.E.P. I.N.S.I.D.E. in some corner of his heart.

He don't have any hearing in morning, they are two but after lunch so he have time, time to cherish them again.

He took a deep breath and let himself drown into the sweet memories again. The memories which contain its nectar as same as the first breeze of morning, as same as it hold in those moment.

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
me 1st yipee
lovely update
thnks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TOTAL RECALL..

He is still standing in the same manner for how long God knows, but the figure which is their, which is still fighting with her veil which is irritating her due to wind, again and again she is trying to hold it in her fist but its like nature is not helping her, she took a sigh and left it on its own, let it fly in the gust of wind, let it torture him, She took out her purse and hand over the money to the rickshaw person and with grace start moving toward the premises. He is staring to her with open mouth, like a kid who wants his favorite candy and can't have as it is not in stock and staring to the posture which hold it sweet photo and strong flavor of saliva hit his throat.

Alia pat his shoulder to gain his attention : ASAD where are you lost?

Assad look toward her with its non of your concerned face which force her to move back, he turn around immediately to see her again, but she is lost, she is not their. He lost her, he look around right to left left to right went inside the building, but she is not their too. He took stairs and run up, dogging as many student come in his way, hitting 2 or 3 on his way. But she is not their too.

He asked himself, is he day dreaming? no how can it be possible, he is sure she was their, a completely white figure, he guess someone has write this proverb for her only : as pure as white.

She was an angel, her hair is dark golden brown, or else she was completely pure and beautiful, look like she is completely pale, just a little crimson color tell that she is not dead body, like an angel directly came from heaven, he close his eyes to recall again, her veil was teasing her, her eyes are trying to adjust in the morning summer sun , which is now quiet high, her long and sleek finger which is holding her veil in fist, she was too far but still it was as clear as he was standing near her, her knuckle was pale due to force, he wonder how much she has to force her hand to hold a fragile veil. But still it was irritating her, between her brow two lines of wrinkle appear, how much he resist himself not to run toward her and make it smooth again, to touch her crimson pink cheeks, to brush his palm on the sleek swam neck, to smooth her worry, it was not suiting her, her eyes telling so much, her lips, lips... Oh Gosh, they were tempting. Shit..

Assad : someone yelled his name, which again broke his thought.

He look behind to find his friend Akash approaching him.

Akash : hey dude! Morning.

Assad with stern face try to control his irritation : Morning Akash. And with much effort and force like he want to carry a mountain on his shoulder give him a smile. Akash smile back, but he was not sure that this was a smile or glare.

Akash bit back his argue to ask him instead of that he tell him to join him in the class, which without any second thought Assad agree. First time in his life he badly needed a distraction.

Distraction and he wants but why the hell in this earth he wants it and that suddenly so badly, and from whom a GIRL!! His mind alarmed him he snap his head up and try to involve himself in the conversation which going on his table, he have no clue what they all are talking about, may be some case. Who the hell want to know, his concentration was on that figure again, White angelic figure, he again try to push that thought away. Its been a week he saw her, he knows she must be here only, but where he don't know.

Akash voice break his chain of thought.

Assad look at him, as if he ask something.

Akash : Assad I was asking, do you know what project we will get this time?

Assad take a sip of his coffee, which is now completely cold, thanks for his trans he made ugly face while looking at his mug and keeping it aside while cleaning his lips from back of his hand, he lean forward and pass the information he have : No idea dude, but I got the news that we have to work with other faculty, this time, so we can have some blah, blah knowledge . You know..

Akash and other guys take a deep sigh and start wondering what that can be. After a pause Assad added with his super cool smile, looking down at his phone while messaging some one.

Assad : I have one more news guys.

Every one snap toward him and they can bet on his smile that the news must be awesome. but everyone was quit so he can continue.

Assad teasingly : Okay no one wants to know, that's fine.

Akash grab his hand : We want to know.

Assad : Really? But no one asked me.

All of them in unison : We are asking now...Assad..

Assad with playful smile : It is like we have a chance to work with opposite partners.

Every face in front of him is like, Dude we didn't get you type expression. On which Assad sigh and continue with explanation of his statement.

Guys we are working with Girls this time, and girls with us, opposite partners. Got that. He question them with his eyes.

In which he only get to hear. Oh! , Hash! , Ah !Hmmm! Etc. etc.

After a pause Akash said: Today we will know that what is in our future bag.

Assad nod in agreement and all of them left for their Class, where they will be paired with the Girls, on which everyone is excited except Assad, he doesn't care who is standing next to him, intelligent, good looking, smart, he doesn't care right now, he just want her, who is no where near her, He so much wish to stand beside her. So, he can just look at her nothing else, nothing more then that, just that.

Professor announced their project in which they have to work, with the next faculty so then can learn more about Law and Order, and how they work different in aspect of Law and Order, and how they can bend them in their way, etc. etc.

All the other faculty come in the class in which all student stand up to welcome them, but Assad was lost again lost in the last week event, Professor voice alarmed him to get back to earth, He got up and look here and there to understand what is happening, there are so many new faces, some of them he knows , as they share same primary course together. But now half of the Class is paired together and there are already start their discussion. He look toward Akash how is busy with some girl, she look pale he guess she is ill or something, he again search the room to find professor looking toward him, he gesture him to come down and join him, someone is their behind Him, he guess may be his partner with conscious step he step down toward the board. Professor nod him and turn around to meet the person who is still hiding behind him, professor step aside to let him look to his partner.

He stay rooted to his ground, no movement no Air, everything was like a slow motion movie going on, he hitch his breath and left breathless, in that neon second he felt so many emotion in himself, same of the emotion which are Elian to him, which he even don't know what they called.

Professor pat his back and introduce him to her : He is Assad, Assad Ahmed Khan.

He look toward Assad and with same enthusiasm he introduce the lady : She is Zoya, Zoya Qureshi..

Okay Guys Do tell me , How you liked It.. As i am not getting many likes and comments, I am afraid, I can't go long with this FF.. As pervious Part was also neglected by everyone..
I wanted to write my thing in it yaaro.. their are so many emotions in it, which i wanted to write and cheerish.. Please help me..😭😭
Regards,
RV ❤️
Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its simply great
waiting for the story to unfold
😊👍🏼
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it is getting interested dear😊
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I like the title of your story but it disturbs me that zoya is married already!!! I want asya and soon!!! Continue and bring them together Cz zoya doesn't love her husband!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very very ... intesting...👏
contineu soon ...

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